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Title: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: teanndaorsa on April 17, 2023, 10:05:46 PM
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/it_all_started_with_a_roomba.html
Sbf; fpov; cuffs; gag; stuck; collar; caught; chastity; toys; buttplug; harness; collar; electro; cons; reluct; XX

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/it_all_started_with_a_roomba2.html
F/f; fpov; bond; chastity; electro; leash; enema; bedtie; cuffs; collar; rope; reluct; X

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/it_all_started_with_a_roomba3.html
F/f; fpov; bond; chastity; electro; toys; buttplug; rope; gag; collar; leash; public; tease; reluct; XX

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/it_all_started_with_a_roomba4.html
F+/f; fpov; chastity; gag; toys; remote; shop; tease; electro; cons; reluct; X

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/it_all_started_with_a_roomba5.html
F/f; F/mf; bond; chastity; electro; enema; rope; gag; cons; X

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/it_all_started_with_a_roomba6.html
F/f+; bond; chastity; rope; cuffs; toys; tease; mittens; electro; cons; X

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/it_all_started_with_a_roomba7.html
F/f; bond; chastity; chain; rope; electro; gag; punish; remote; cons; X

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/it_all_started_with_a_roomba8.html
F/f; bond; chastity; remote; enema; rope; electro; reluct; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: TheLargeEmptY on April 20, 2023, 04:48:30 PM
Holy shit! this is one ride of a Story! I hope you write more and tell us how the long punishment will went!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: mari0 on April 21, 2023, 04:49:19 AM
Wow, the ill advised start, the capture and finally the exquisite escalating bondage gear. The gear, sadly, might not exist today yet it's also not so far out to be completely impossible. The whole setup was just right to be thrillingly unpredictable without becoming unbelievable . Thank you
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Canadom on April 21, 2023, 05:13:15 PM
Thank you for the kind feedback!

Part 2 of the story is in the queue and I'm currently working on Part 3.

More to come!

Canadom
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: teanndaorsa on May 09, 2023, 08:59:09 PM
Quote from: Canadom on April 21, 2023, 05:13:15 PM
Thank you for the kind feedback!

Part 2 of the story is in the queue and I'm currently working on Part 3.

More to come!

Canadom

Part 2 up tonight!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: TheLargeEmptY on May 10, 2023, 10:14:44 AM
Thank you for also sharing the second part with us. Its really well written and makes you excited for more! I like that futuristic functions of the belt and would love to see it in RL. But I was a little sad about the lack of interactions between the two. I kind of wished they would talk more to each other. I think this is more of a setup for whats coming in the future right? Anyway, Still a really good Story!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: taurired on May 10, 2023, 02:04:00 PM
good story.
what could go wrong?
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: pfell on May 10, 2023, 02:30:06 PM
Thank you for the fun story, I love futuristic gadgets! I hope Ana continues to have fun and it doesn't become too dark.

I agree with TheLargeEmptY that the lack of interaction between the characters has been somewhat underwhelming. Some way for Ana to become more active, e.g. a possibility to earn back days or orgasms may help adding some dynamics. The manufacturer perhaps has some programs for testing new products in return for some perks for the wearer. 🤔

Anyway, this is just some babbling from me, thanks again for the story!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Canadom on May 11, 2023, 02:00:17 PM
Thank you again for the feedback! I will try to incorporate some of these ideas into the story.

I am still working on Part 3 and hope to have it sent out by the end of the week. I've been busy with some things in my personal life - good things - and haven't had as much time to work on the story as I had hoped. Thank you for the kind words and feedback!

Canadom
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Canadom on May 18, 2023, 05:21:37 AM
Part 3 of the story has been submitted :) I look forward to hearing how you enjoy it!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: teanndaorsa on June 03, 2023, 03:50:54 PM
Quote from: Canadom on May 18, 2023, 05:21:37 AM
Part 3 of the story has been submitted :) I look forward to hearing how you enjoy it!

Up today, thanks!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: TheLargeEmptY on June 04, 2023, 09:36:56 AM
If I had to find fault with this part, it would be its shortness, Its fantastic! Thank you for sharing and for your openness to our critic. you have given the two good dialogues with each other this time so that ann doesn't just seem like a robot saying "yes mistress".
The fact that she's been trapped in this hellish device for a month now, and only after two (three?) days, shows that she's going to be stuck in it for much longer. She should probably slowly pull herself together haha. I'm looking forward to the upcoming parts. Keep up the good work!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: pfell on June 04, 2023, 01:07:50 PM
Thank you for this new part! I wonder how deep a hole Ana will dig for herself. Or might she even chose to stay locked indefinitely, perhaps in exchange for more lenience in the punishments? I'm very curious for (hopefully) further parts. This high-tech equipment offers some many fun possibilities!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: taurired on June 05, 2023, 10:25:23 AM
I really hope part 3 is not end and looking forward for her new adventures
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Canadom on June 17, 2023, 05:23:20 PM
Fear not! I am working on Part 4 currently. A few ideas are percolating and I'm hoping to have it done in the next few days. I will update again once I've submitted the story.

Thanks for all of your feedback!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: pfell on June 22, 2023, 03:15:20 PM
Awesome! I'm looking forward to Part 4
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Canadom on June 27, 2023, 10:17:39 PM
Part 4 has been submitted!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: pfell on July 23, 2023, 05:50:10 PM
Thank you for the new part!

The post on how to get out of the belt smells like a trap. I'm curious to where it might lead.
I'm also eagerly awaiting Cass' studio and the customers session.
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: llaallaa on July 23, 2023, 06:46:20 PM
Great work i love it. Cant wait for the next chapter. Thank you.
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: bentbliss on July 23, 2023, 08:58:28 PM
The latest part adds more intrigue as to what is to come. I look forward to seeing it.
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: TheLargeEmptY on August 01, 2023, 06:14:14 PM
Really nice part indeed! You make it really fun to read and have always something new to add to the story!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Canadom on August 15, 2023, 03:10:40 AM
New part is coming soon! Working on it this week. Apologies for the delay, I was on vacation with my spouse.
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Canadom on September 18, 2023, 05:10:14 PM
New part is in the queue. Sorry for the delay!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: pgmr185 on October 05, 2023, 09:47:00 PM
I've got so many ideas of where this story could lead. I can't wait to see what you come up with!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: teanndaorsa on October 14, 2023, 07:23:35 PM
Part 5 up tonight, enjoy!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: pieclown on November 16, 2023, 02:52:11 AM
Hello,

I am enjoying how these parts are going.  Please keep up the fine work.
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Canadom on November 17, 2023, 04:47:22 AM
Thank you! I'll be continuing work on part 6 shortly :)
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Canadom on February 12, 2024, 04:06:07 AM
Hi Everyone,

My apologies on getting part 6 up on the site. 2023 was the busiest year of my life (for good reasons :) ) and I didnt have as much writing time as I would have liked. That said, I'm almost done with part 6 (on the last page now) and will be submitting it in the coming days. Thank you for your patience and all your kind words!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Canadom on February 18, 2024, 01:57:57 AM
Part 6 has been submitted :)
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: teanndaorsa on March 31, 2024, 09:32:18 PM
Another chapter of chastity fun tonight, enjoy!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Canadom on April 07, 2024, 06:49:07 PM
Part 7 is done  :) I will be proofreading and submitting in the coming days.
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: bentbliss on April 18, 2024, 05:21:42 AM
Looking forward to see where things are heading. With Steph getting a belt, it be interesting to see what Cass has planned for her as well as her continuing punishment of Ana.
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: teanndaorsa on May 11, 2024, 06:57:42 PM
And part 7 up tonight, enjoy!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: AnaSeints on May 31, 2024, 09:48:14 PM
We need more of this please, we need a entire book of this, a think this doesn't has and end each history she gets more days :-[
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Killthebeast on July 31, 2024, 03:38:23 AM
The story is fantastic. The denial, no chance of tochig. How more and more new things are added.

Not sure if my thinking is idiotic, but wouldit be possible, to mention the time change at the end of the chapters? We know time can be added, but i need to always calculate for myself how much time is still on the clock of the belt.

I know it's a chastity story, but in my mind i'm always awaiting for Cass to make a cell out of the basment, for Ana to live in.
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Canadom on September 14, 2024, 04:59:08 PM
Sorry for the delay, readers. I've had a lot going on in my life lately but am working on part 8 as we speak. I'll submit it in the following days :)
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: teanndaorsa on October 20, 2024, 08:58:51 PM
Another part to this tonight. Any takers on a pool for how long Ana's chastity actually lasts? ;-)
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Killthebeast on October 20, 2024, 10:46:31 PM
Awww poor Ana and she thought she was so clever and close to get the belt off. Good thinking of Cass to make sure some of the numbers from the code are removed. Like this she has no chance to find the real or better complete code.

Also thank you for mentioning the remaining time, like this we will be able to see how they are doing with Anas sentence.

When i have to guess for a time and with Anas luck, a few month. But if Ana always adds 2 days each day to her time, i could get a lot soon.

Cass could also dress Ana up as she wants. AND we all know Ana wants to cum. But what about her Mistress? Really Ana should be made to pleasure  Cass. Pleasing her friend, feeling their reactions, hearing the sounds, but not getting much in return.

Not sure about giving Ana her own cell in the basement or so.

Mabe Ana would be willing to model some fetish clothes and with pictures taken. Maybe only in the belt and bra. Could reduce some days.
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Cumberrypie on October 24, 2024, 10:51:15 PM
I wonder when we'll see the new perk on the belt, cause now she's getting the random vibes and shocks, but wasnt the belt going to add another random thing every week?
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Silver on October 29, 2024, 07:20:53 AM
Loving this story!  New to the site, so I was able to binge all eight chapters at once.

Ana's predicament is delightful.   I love how she keeps digging her hole deeper. 
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Canadom on November 04, 2024, 07:17:30 PM
Right you are, but it hasn't quite been a week yet in the story :).

Maybe I'll start keeping track of how many days it's been too.

Quote from: Cumberrypie on October 24, 2024, 10:51:15 PM
I wonder when we'll see the new perk on the belt, cause now she's getting the random vibes and shocks, but wasnt the belt going to add another random thing every week?
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Killthebeast on November 04, 2024, 08:04:31 PM
I know it will be a lot more ork for you, but i would really appreciate that, with the time keeping. Thinking how desperate she must bem how long she already endured her time in the belt and still has so much time to go.

Also she could be teased ith it, if she was told about how long she is already in it without an orgasms.

Maybe she will even has tp please her new Mistress, giving someone else what she desperately wants to have herself. She could even be trained, or have a new wardobe. Or her room could be renovated for her as a sub or slave.
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Canadom on February 12, 2025, 06:36:59 PM
Hi everyone, I just wanted to provide an update. My life has been quite busy lately and as a result I haven't had as much time for writing as I would like.

That said, I am working on part 9 and will post as soon as it's finished.

Sorry for the delay and thank you for your patience :)

Canadom
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Killthebeast on February 14, 2025, 12:47:46 PM
Hope you will find time to relax a bit. I know we would want more of this fantastuc story, but please take care of yourself.

But still it's nice to get a update what is going on and that you are alive.
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Canadom on April 24, 2025, 04:18:44 PM
Hi everyone, sorry for the delay on the next part. My partner and I had a baby girl and she has taken up much of our time the past several months :). I'm finally finding more free time now to pursue other projects - such as my stories - and will be diving back in soon!
Title: Re: It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom
Post by: Dianag on April 24, 2025, 07:43:07 PM
Congratulations on the baby. Hope everyone is well and you are getting enough sleep!