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It All Started With A Roomba by Canadom

Started by teanndaorsa, April 17, 2023, 10:05:46 PM

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teanndaorsa

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/it_all_started_with_a_roomba.html
Sbf; fpov; cuffs; gag; stuck; collar; caught; chastity; toys; buttplug; harness; collar; electro; cons; reluct; XX

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/it_all_started_with_a_roomba2.html
F/f; fpov; bond; chastity; electro; leash; enema; bedtie; cuffs; collar; rope; reluct; X

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/it_all_started_with_a_roomba3.html
F/f; fpov; bond; chastity; electro; toys; buttplug; rope; gag; collar; leash; public; tease; reluct; XX

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/it_all_started_with_a_roomba4.html
F+/f; fpov; chastity; gag; toys; remote; shop; tease; electro; cons; reluct; X

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/it_all_started_with_a_roomba5.html
F/f; F/mf; bond; chastity; electro; enema; rope; gag; cons; X

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/it_all_started_with_a_roomba6.html
F/f+; bond; chastity; rope; cuffs; toys; tease; mittens; electro; cons; X

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/it_all_started_with_a_roomba7.html
F/f; bond; chastity; chain; rope; electro; gag; punish; remote; cons; X

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/it_all_started_with_a_roomba8.html
F/f; bond; chastity; remote; enema; rope; electro; reluct; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

TheLargeEmptY

Holy shit! this is one ride of a Story! I hope you write more and tell us how the long punishment will went!

mari0

Wow, the ill advised start, the capture and finally the exquisite escalating bondage gear. The gear, sadly, might not exist today yet it's also not so far out to be completely impossible. The whole setup was just right to be thrillingly unpredictable without becoming unbelievable . Thank you

Canadom

Thank you for the kind feedback!

Part 2 of the story is in the queue and I'm currently working on Part 3.

More to come!

Canadom

teanndaorsa

Quote from: Canadom on April 21, 2023, 05:13:15 PM
Thank you for the kind feedback!

Part 2 of the story is in the queue and I'm currently working on Part 3.

More to come!

Canadom

Part 2 up tonight!

TheLargeEmptY

Thank you for also sharing the second part with us. Its really well written and makes you excited for more! I like that futuristic functions of the belt and would love to see it in RL. But I was a little sad about the lack of interactions between the two. I kind of wished they would talk more to each other. I think this is more of a setup for whats coming in the future right? Anyway, Still a really good Story!

taurired


pfell

Thank you for the fun story, I love futuristic gadgets! I hope Ana continues to have fun and it doesn't become too dark.

I agree with TheLargeEmptY that the lack of interaction between the characters has been somewhat underwhelming. Some way for Ana to become more active, e.g. a possibility to earn back days or orgasms may help adding some dynamics. The manufacturer perhaps has some programs for testing new products in return for some perks for the wearer. 🤔

Anyway, this is just some babbling from me, thanks again for the story!

Canadom

Thank you again for the feedback! I will try to incorporate some of these ideas into the story.

I am still working on Part 3 and hope to have it sent out by the end of the week. I've been busy with some things in my personal life - good things - and haven't had as much time to work on the story as I had hoped. Thank you for the kind words and feedback!

Canadom

Canadom

Part 3 of the story has been submitted :) I look forward to hearing how you enjoy it!

teanndaorsa

Quote from: Canadom on May 18, 2023, 05:21:37 AM
Part 3 of the story has been submitted :) I look forward to hearing how you enjoy it!

Up today, thanks!

TheLargeEmptY

#11
If I had to find fault with this part, it would be its shortness, Its fantastic! Thank you for sharing and for your openness to our critic. you have given the two good dialogues with each other this time so that ann doesn't just seem like a robot saying "yes mistress".
The fact that she's been trapped in this hellish device for a month now, and only after two (three?) days, shows that she's going to be stuck in it for much longer. She should probably slowly pull herself together haha. I'm looking forward to the upcoming parts. Keep up the good work!

pfell

Thank you for this new part! I wonder how deep a hole Ana will dig for herself. Or might she even chose to stay locked indefinitely, perhaps in exchange for more lenience in the punishments? I'm very curious for (hopefully) further parts. This high-tech equipment offers some many fun possibilities!

taurired

I really hope part 3 is not end and looking forward for her new adventures

Canadom

Fear not! I am working on Part 4 currently. A few ideas are percolating and I'm hoping to have it done in the next few days. I will update again once I've submitted the story.

Thanks for all of your feedback!

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