Wow!!! Part 2 definitely upped the ante! Very well written! I loved the true-to-life aspects of Jessica's gradual infiltration into bondage and BDSM without it becoming too over the top. The scenes with the seamstress were especially hot and I liked that it didn't devolve into her being trapped as her forever plaything (that's been done too many times in other stories). My only note is that this story could have been split into two chapters, leaving her in the arm binder in the 'Red Zone' as a cliffhanger between them. Other than that I liked every bit of the story and immediately went shopping for a 'punishment corset' for my wife
I'll be reading it again as I await the next installment.
I also wanted to add that in all your stories I've enjoyed the juxtaposition of your female leading characters. They are both submissive but strong, with a free will of their own. Your details in crafting a woman into irresistible art (I too have a thing for pin-ups and predicaments) and the selflessness required to go through with it makes the love of her husband all the more endearing. I think it works both ways for Jessica and her husband; as you gain experience you gain confidence which leads to the best of experiences for both. Again, big fan of all your stories!
Cheers,
Le Bouc