And we have reached the end. It was interesting, a little sad, but well drawn from a character point of view, seeing and learning about Paula's history, and how she cannot have a husband who would let her be in control. Tempting to point out how extreme the reaction is, but she has always said she was a switch, and the scars the deaths left were clearly massive and very deep.
It is good that the story has been wrapped up and actually reached a finish point. The conclusions reached make sense, it is good to see how everyone has moved on, and how such a good revenue generator for the village has changed how the local businesses work and handle customers. Logical and reasonable.
By now this feels a lot more like a general story, and a look at characters, but for me, personally, it has lost the sexy elements. I don't feel emotionally invested or caught up in things.
Seeing steps being put into place for the slut to have a retirement fund does work though, and feels deeply important and sensible. The fact that they make so much money from people who insist on giving her orgasms makes me giggle.
The final line seems an odd way to finish the story. It is fitting to have this information, but it feels like something that should be in the middle, rather than as the final line of such a long work.
