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The Chateau by Budman
teanndaorsa:
You can view the story here on the plaza:
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau01.html
M/f+m+; mpov; cellar; cell; mast; toys; oral; group; cons; X
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau02.html
M/f; F/f; cell; mast; tease; denial; bond; cuffs; oral; cons; X
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau03.html
MF/f; MF; mpov; bond; toys; cell; cuffs; mast; sex; oral; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau04.html
MF/f; mpov; bond; cuffs; punish; oral; chain; objectify; cons; X
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau05.html
M/f; M+F+/f; mpov; bond; cuffs; hum; enema; group; chain; rope; dungeon; cell; naked; blindfold; hood; gag; straps; objectify; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau06.html
M+F+/f; mpov; group; orgy; hood; hum; objectify; gag; oral; sex; anal; bond; rope; messy; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau07.html
F/f; MF; mpov; bond; hum; objectify; rope; cell; mast; toys; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau08.html
MF+/f; mpov; bond; cell; objectify; toys; tease; rope; chain; anal; messy; hum; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau09.html
M+F+/f; mpov; bond; hum; objectify; cell; mast; cuffs; outdoors; hobble; oral; toys; public; voy; spank; belt; punish; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau10.html
M+F+/f; mpov; bond; objectify; cell; naked; outdoors; cuffs; chain; anal; cons; X
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau11.html
F+M+/f; mpov; electro; collar; remote; machine; oral; objectify; cell; training; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau12.html
F/f+; cell; rope; bond; cuffs; oral; clamps; training; electro; punish; cons; X
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau13.html
M/f+; F/m; bond; cell; cuffs; chain; naked; cons; X
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau14.html
M+F+/f; mpov; group; punishment; whip; objectify; cuffs; naked; sex; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau15.html
F/f; M/f; MF/f; F/m; mpov; bond; naked; cuffs; susp; flogger; oral; cane; whip; objectify; outdoors; cons; X
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau16.html
M/f; MF/f; anal; group; cell; objectify; bond; cuffs; rope; toys; piercing; tease; breathplay; denial; sex; oral; cons; XX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau17.html
F/m; group; objectify; slave; chastity; hum; cons; X
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_chateau18.html
F+M+/f; mpov; outdoors; objectify; punishment; cuffs; chain; tease; strapon; tickle; clothespins; trick; cons; XX
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks ;)
Lars:
Interesting setup, am excited about which direction the story will take.
feline:
Agreed, an interesting situation, and I am rather curious to see where this is going, and what the plan is. The fact that this starts with the statement its a long story is interesting, since it needs to do things, to have things happen, to make the chapters interesting, so most curious to see what sort of things are planned here.
feline:
Before starting part 2, I had been thinking about this a bit in the background, and a couple of things had really stood out to me from memory. First the comment about our house owner having a business selling electronic sex toys, suggesting that such toys might become an interesting feature in the future. But are any of them remote controlled over the internet? I am sure we will find out :)
The second point that was running around in my head was how angry Paula had become when Heather just decided to go down to the cellar on her own, without talking to anyone. It was striking how strong her emotional reaction seemed, was, without really knowing or understanding where that strength of emotion came from.
So I had been looking forward to reading more of this, and was happy that another part appeared so soon. So, onto part two...
Um... yep, starting with stunned silence, and some awe! Reading part 2, one line REALLY stood out to me:
--- Quote ---It was obvious the group was thinking that over. Good, I wanted them to start thinking of Heather, not as someone to be protected, but as a threat to their lifestyle. It would take weeks of manipulation, but I thought I could get there. As a part of that process, I needed to dehumanize Heather in their eyes.
--- End quote ---
I had to stop reading at this point and just wonder and consider what is going on here, and how I felt about it. It is a very powerful comment, very powerful and "dangerous" thing, possibly very dark and evil, but at the same time, this is a story, a fantasy, and the idea, but more than just the idea, the characters, their emotions, interactions and how they are going to change and develop with the story really fascinate me. This is already feeling like a strong on character story that is really making me interested.
Looking back at how part 2 started, it is interesting how well our home owner picked up on Heather's level of kink and interest in being a prisoner, something that it seems everyone else really was quite oblivious to! It is interesting that even with such a sexually open and experienced group, so apparently familiar and comfortable with each other, that they weren't more aware of how kinky Heather really was.
It was a massive "offer", "task", to convert one of the group into a prisoner, but on reflection, I don't think I really absorbed just how desperate the group was becoming to have secure and comfortable lodging and employment. I think this is because for, well, all of part 1 the group were shown to be so relaxed, chilled out, and simply happy to be coasting through life without a care or a thought. The only one who wasn't was Paula, but I wasn't really sure what drove her anger.
Now though, yes, he has worked to sow the seeds, to push the group in the direction he wants to take them, but already the group has completely split into "us" and "them", the jailers who are working hard to secure their home and housing, and food, and the captive who's main function is to threaten everything they have just received... Really fascinating character development here, and I am wondering how much story you have here, and where you want to try and take this.
Budman0_0:
Feline,
In my intro I mentioned "The Stanford Prison Experiment" prominently. You really need to understand this 1970s college psychology experiment to understand the inspiration for this story.
https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=stanford+prison+experiment+
That said, and having written 25 chapters (to be released one per week), I must admit that the final direction didn't go quite as far down that rabbit hole as I was expecting, as you will see. So you don't need to be quite as concerned about the quote you highlighted as our landlord can't bring himself to manipulate the group quite that extremely.
But they all do have a lot of fun and I think you'll enjoy the story.
Thanks, as always, for your deep and constructive comments. I have really started to look forward to finding your posts.
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