Author Topic: TCC Inc. by Daxter  (Read 2177 times)

Offline teanndaorsa

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TCC Inc. by Daxter
« on: November 09, 2023, 09:07:18 pm »
You can view the story here on the plaza:
F/m; F+/m+; fpov; chastity; bodymod; electro; toys; naked; permanent; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

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Re: TCC Inc. by Daxter
« Reply #1 on: November 11, 2023, 04:03:56 pm »
Just my constructive feedback/opinions. I was hoping there was going to be a bit more depth to this story, more kinky play, as the beginning had promise. The premise of an all-or-nothing chastity was interesting to me, but I found the idea of your story to be more torture for torture sake; and describing the modes/functions of the device itself. I would have liked to read about what the characters got out of their perspective dominance/submission as the female lead doesn't seem to 'get off' other than controlling her husband. Likewise I didn't get any sense of desperation for the husband to please his mistress/wife. Again, I thought this story has potential but would like to get into the psychological aspects of their relationship and how she gets her carnal desires fulfilled.
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