Author Topic: Maid Partitioned by Krissie Krave  (Read 1607 times)

Offline teanndaorsa

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Maid Partitioned by Krissie Krave
« on: October 30, 2023, 11:24:54 pm »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://grometsplaza.net/special/halloween23/maid_partitioned.html
M/f; F/f; halloween; costume; maid; maidbots; latex; oral; F2maidbot; public; hum; sex; stuck; toys; reluct; nc; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

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Re: Maid Partitioned by Krissie Krave
« Reply #1 on: November 01, 2023, 12:56:41 am »
A good, well written story. But with alot of set up, and a sad ending. Personally, and that is all I can atest to, I am not a fan of the sad endings. But, good form, and good structure. I thought it was a bit long to. But a long story can be a good thing. But I feel like part of it slowed down a bit. I skipped to the end to see where everybody would end up.
« Last Edit: November 01, 2023, 01:04:56 am by oneupthextraman »

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Re: Maid Partitioned by Krissie Krave
« Reply #2 on: November 02, 2023, 01:30:58 am »
I found it interesting. I think I enjoyed Fifi having a personality and an instant dislike to April. Both Brittney and Gabe's personality and choice seemed to fit well with environment I believed you were creating. This story has much more it could expand upon if you chose to.

 

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