Ariana by Adegans

[teanndaorsa]

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/ariana1a.html
F/f; MF; Sbf; M/f; buttplug; enclosed; box; naked; oral; anal; sex; timer; caught; cons; reluct; XX

https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/ariana1b.html
F/f; bond; buttplug; rope; oral; climax; straps; cuffs; rom; cons; X

https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/ariana2.html
F/f; FF; bond; shop; armbinder; hood; cuffs; gag; chastity; oral; public; tease; climax; rom; cons; X

https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/ariana3.html
M/f; anal; oral; shop; naked; buttplug; bond; tape; gag; reluct; XX

https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/ariana4.html
F/f; bond; chastity; collar; chain; cuffs; hood; mast; electro; stuck; cage; rope; oral; straps; tease; denial; enclosed; remote; cons; reluct; XX

https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/ariana5.html
F/f; outdoors; strip; tease; denial; strapon; sex; anal; bond; cuffs; chastity; toys; collar; cons; X

https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/ariana6.html
F/f; bond; Sbf; zipties; gag; cuffs; collar; shave; chastity; naked; hum; drug; punish; whip; cons; nc; XX

https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/ariana7.html
MF; M/f; sex; mast; bond; tape; spank; cons; reluct; nc; X

https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/ariana8.html
F/f; M/f; bond; cuffs; collar; mast; frame; latex; costume; chain; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks 

[Adegans]

Woohoo! My first stories online

[Hengist-the-barbarian]

This story was pretty good but, for me personally, had a little too muh 'reality'.

I thought the premise was brilliant.  I've always been a fan of solo stories where our heroine creates elaborate machines or mechanisms to secure herself and this box idea was a rarity for me which I liked.

But the whole involvement of the John character just spoiled it somewhat for me.  Was there any real need to make him such an arsehole?  Couldn't he have just been a tool for Amy to play with and then kicked out when she forgot herself?
Did we really have to have the attempted r-pe and police intervention and all the extraneous detail about the court case?
Did it really add to the story line of a girl exploring her fantasies.  It just seemed a bit too much like a PSA warning on personal safety for women.  That's not what I read stories like this for.  I come to sites like this to get away from real life for a few hours.

For me, John could have disappeared after Amy had her way with him and then released her friend and apologised.  Actually, she could probably have disappeared then as well.
The story would still have stood up perfectly well without John's involvement.

For me, the story is about our lonely heroine finding how much she liked being in her box by her own hand and then dumping one friend who turned out to be unreliable and then stumbling across another who cares for her and helps her going forward to explore more ways of securing herself.

I liked it, I really did.  But I've downloaded it and edited out all of John's involvement and I'll come back and read it again when it's faded a little from my memory.

I hope you continue and I hope we get to hear more about the clever ways our heroine devises to lock herself up.

Thanks for your hard work.  I know it's not easy and takes a lot of time and effort but it was worth it and it's appreciated.

[Observer]

The premise is interesting, and congrats on your first story.

The involvement of this John fellow was a complete turn off however, I too found him a jerk, and it made me reluctant to keep reading.  I also think the story should have been classified as a bondage story, or self bondage, not "just" erotic.

[teanndaorsa]

Story 2 up tonight, enjoy!

[teanndaorsa]

And story 3, enjoy

[teanndaorsa]

And part 4 up tonight, enjoy.

[teanndaorsa]

Part 5 up tonight, enjoy!

[researchertalloran]

I really want to like this story since female chastity is my biggest fetish and there are so few stories of it out there, but there's something killing my enjoyment of your story; your main character's name, Ariana, given that she's supposed to be Japanese. Ariana is not a Japanese name; rather being of Greek/Persian origin. Being ethnically Japanese myself, I can't help but cringe when I see Ariana (the name) in your story or whenever the fact that she's supposedly Japanese is brought up.

I'd really, really like to enjoy your story, and I do like it when I can manage to ignore that one issue.

[teanndaorsa]

Part 6 up tonight, enjoy.

[Adegans]

your main character's name, Ariana, given that she's supposed to be Japanese. Ariana is not a Japanese name; rather being of Greek/Persian origin.

I know, it's not very common in Japan. But from my limited research I did a few years ago I  found a few Japanese women having it.
I mostly picked it because I just like the name.

That said, My real life name is not common/normal/native to where I am from either. So don't let it ruin your fun too much.
I guess if you hate it that much you can read it as Rina, which reads and sounds similar to Ariana.

[teanndaorsa]

Story 7 up tonight, enjoy!

[teanndaorsa]

Part 8 of this up tonight, enjoy.