Author Topic: Twenty Minutes by B. Larson  (Read 4726 times)

Offline teanndaorsa

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Twenty Minutes by B. Larson
« on: August 02, 2023, 11:34:53 am »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/twenty_minutes1.html
M/f; bond; model; collar; straps; strappado; bench; chain; gag; reluct; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

Offline Eido

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Re: Twenty Minutes by B. Larson
« Reply #1 on: August 02, 2023, 02:30:08 pm »
Love the way you managed such emotional intensity along with the physical descriptions in this short work. Her internal monologue added true-to-life realism that really moved me. Was this based on a first hand experience, or an experience described to you by another?

Great job and I can't wait to see what Henry is holding.

Thanks for sharing.
Eido

Offline Budman0_0

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Re: Twenty Minutes by B. Larson
« Reply #2 on: August 02, 2023, 08:32:14 pm »
I also loved this story.  I'm into the motivations and psychology of bondage models. I don't know why but I'm into what's going on in a sub's head almost as much as I'm into what's being done to their bodies.  I hove you make this a series.  Well done.

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Re: Twenty Minutes by B. Larson
« Reply #3 on: August 06, 2023, 12:02:17 am »
This is an interesting start and curious to see how things evolve.

Offline jackierabbit1

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Re: Twenty Minutes by B. Larson
« Reply #4 on: August 06, 2023, 11:26:39 am »
I enjoyed experiencing this with Sarah and I kind of wish I were her, in her proverbial shoes. That's a great place to be as an author, especially for such a compact work. I can't wait to see what Henry comes back with either, it's a great cliff hanger...

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

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Re: Twenty Minutes by B. Larson
« Reply #5 on: August 06, 2023, 06:03:25 pm »
This was a solid start to something bigger! I echo everyone else’s sentiments and hope that you continue with this as a series!
Use your time well, we're given only so much.

Offline Kitsune71

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Re: Twenty Minutes by B. Larson
« Reply #6 on: September 20, 2023, 12:05:56 am »
Very well written and truly entertaining to read. Is she truly being trained for a more dedicated art form, is she gonna be unwillingly sold to this Henry or has she been tricked into something before being coerced into doing something more hardcore she hadn't planned on ;) Can't say but I can't wait to read more!

 

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