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teanndaorsa:
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesad/denise_in_a_tight_spot.html
M/f; F/f; fpov; dungeon; gibbet; cage; ironmaiden; collar; scolds-bridle; public; display; rom; cons; X

https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesad/denise_in_a_tight_spot2.html
F/f; fpov; gag; pillory; public; display; costume; strip; punishment; latex; sleepsack; entombed; encased; buried; cons; X

https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesad/denise_in_a_tight_spot3.html
F/f; MF/f; fpov; bond; public; display; pillory; spank; castle; rope; roleplay; costume; gag; scolds-bridle; susp; strip; flogger; enclosed; mast; cons; XX

https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesad/denise_in_a_tight_spot4.html
F/f; M+/f; bond; fpov; rope; bench; cell; dungeon; costume; roleplay; corset; hood; armbinder; blindfold; analhook; collar; clamps; pillory; public; oral; group; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

dengamle68:
Wow great story. Well written. It’s a story I would read several times. Also hoping it would continue.

feline:
I really enjoyed this, the basic concept of a castle putting on a show comes up occasionally, and it is one that always interests me, since it just has so much wonderful potential built right into it, without needing to put much work into the situation, to help things come to life.

Part 1 is really very gentle, and rather romantic, young love finally being confessed and shared :)  The whole experience is fun, sexy, and the situation and setting works really well.  The twists at the end of part 1, the things we are told, that really is quite the surprise, but it also helps to explain why her role as the captive is accepted so easily and works so well.  Clearly a sexy woman playing the role of the captive is just a terrible burden placed upon the business, so they are very brave to accept this, and try to cope with the horror that sex sells *giggles*

Having reached the end of part 1 I was really pleased to see a part 2 ready and waiting already for me.  Seeing how the castle tours have really embraced her acceptance of her role as the wicked wench who always needs to be punished is an absolute delight!  The early comment about wandering hands seems odd, but makes so much more sense by the end, when we know much more about what is going on here.

The whole Egyptian theme is done very well, and I do enjoy the comedy elements being worked into it, to keep the audience engaged and happy with the events!

Speaking as a self confessed "soppy romantic" I am a little unsettled by the ending, since it has echo's of some rather dark stories that I know some people do enjoy, even if they are not my thing.  Still, it is what she wanted and clearly enjoys!

Given how well her role of naught wench works, and all of the lovely opportunities this situation / setting offers, I do hope that we can see some more parts to this sexy and fun story!

bentbliss:
Enjoyed the two stories. Thanks for sharing.

teanndaorsa:
Part 3 up tonight, enjoy!

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