Author Topic: With Utmost Care by Outcast  (Read 10357 times)

Offline teanndaorsa

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With Utmost Care by Outcast
« on: September 17, 2023, 07:43:27 pm »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://grometsplaza.net/world/machine/storiessz/with_utmost_care.html
Machine/m; bond; encase; medical; cuffs; buttplug; catheter; tease; denial; climax; nc; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

Offline feline

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Re: With Utmost Care by Outcast
« Reply #1 on: September 18, 2023, 02:02:25 pm »
Well...  that's somewhere between sexy, erotic, and bloody terrifying, and I am not quite sure where.  Still, well written, short, yet it conveys everything it needs to convey, and does raise a question or two!

Offline Griffinmills

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Re: With Utmost Care by Outcast
« Reply #2 on: September 23, 2023, 11:59:16 am »
Tremendous story, absolutely loved it!  Follow up?  I hope so!

Offline taurired

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Re: With Utmost Care by Outcast
« Reply #3 on: September 23, 2023, 05:09:13 pm »
What could go wrong?

How many other people are stuck like this?

This reminds me of Isaac Asimov's short story Reason.

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Re: With Utmost Care by Outcast
« Reply #4 on: September 29, 2023, 11:28:27 am »
OK, you made me go and look up Reason, but yes, seeing the plot summary I know that story well.  Yes, I can see the parallels actually.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Reason_(short_story)

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Re: With Utmost Care by Outcast
« Reply #5 on: October 07, 2023, 09:46:39 pm »
Thanks all, nice to hear my story was enjoyed. I cannot claim the idea was wholly original, but then again, what is?
Tremendous story, absolutely loved it!  Follow up?  I hope so!
I cannot promise anything. I am not great at multi-part stories, because I tend to write to get a particular fantasy out of my system. But sometimes I get a new fixation that can be shaped into a second installment, so there still is hope.

Offline mikerpen2

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Re: With Utmost Care by Outcast
« Reply #6 on: January 05, 2024, 11:56:07 pm »
Great story.  Anyone know of any others like this, where the person male or female is trapped in a circle of six, or servitude by a machine?

Offline Rubberh

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Re: With Utmost Care by Outcast
« Reply #7 on: January 06, 2024, 02:07:41 am »
Great story.  Anyone know of any others like this, where the person male or female is trapped in a circle of six, or servitude by a machine?
Well, it's not exactly an AI story, but "Spin/Zoom" is where a woman is trapped in a vault and made to perform extreme exercise programs on a high-tech bike, under torturous conditions.

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Re: With Utmost Care by Outcast
« Reply #8 on: January 06, 2024, 10:45:11 am »
I agree with feline, both terrifying, and somehow erotic. The machine is nurturing yes, but perhaps also lonely, keeping the young man trapped as "her" forever plaything. There is a lot here in a very short story, it's a talent that many don't have, I myself being one of those that don't do short well at all.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

 

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