Author Topic: Chain by Budman  (Read 647 times)

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Chain by Budman
« on: August 23, 2022, 10:13:11 am »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/chain00.html
cons; X

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Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

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« Last Edit: November 28, 2022, 07:12:07 pm by teanndaorsa »

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Re: Chain by Budman
« Reply #1 on: August 24, 2022, 11:36:33 am »
*giggles* I love the introduction, such a fascinating setup, and also so very believable.  Yes, it is an "unrealistic" situation and history, but it has internal logic, it makes sense, and at the end of the day it just sounds really unlikely, not inherently impossible, so you have a perfect setup and situation for the set of stories that are to follow, so I am really looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

As for the first story, that is fun and interesting.  Seeing the family discussion and the setup is a lot of fun, but not sexy.  Still, I really enjoyed this, it is nice to see the practicalities of doing things inside a family tackled so directly and efficiently :)

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Re: Chain by Budman
« Reply #2 on: August 24, 2022, 10:13:00 pm »
I also like the setup. It's such an interesting idea.

However it feels utterly sureal to tell your 16yo casually "btw we go chain up your mom in the basement so she can lose weight."
Consider my dispense of disbelieve utterly and completely broken. I can only advise you to go for lightheartedness in the story... Because unbelievable stories that take themselves too seriously mostly get ridiculous.

Some feedback on the execution...
I can find nothing sexy in dumping a hole rulebook into a story and I'm a lawyer. There are other, better ways to get these rules to the reader... preferably by showing, not telling.

I would give this one a 13/20 on the European University scoreboard. Utterly solid and enjoyable albeit with room for improvement.

Thank you very much for sharing!

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Re: Chain by Budman
« Reply #3 on: August 25, 2022, 08:47:39 pm »
Feline and T.H.
Thanks for the excellent feedback.  I really appreciate the time you took.  I have no idea what the "European University scoreboard" is but 13/20 sounds OK :-).

I admit that the numbered list of rules is a bit of a cop out on my part.  I think for me, these first two chapters were setting the stage.  I promise you (since I've already written 40+ chapters) that I get better about putting details into the story line.  I also add more sex and bondage in each chapter going forward, in a few chapters a LOT more.  There is, however, one chapter much later in the series that is an entire chapter in outline form - it's actually an owners instruction manual for an electronic chastity device.  It will probably be the MOST unique "story" ever published on Gromets and I can't wait to see (both negative and positive) how people react to it.  If people take it as a framework onto which they can drop their own fantasies then it may work, if not, they will hate it.

As for believably of these first two chapters - or as I like the think of it, giving the reader the ability to "suspend disbelief," I would argue that there are families like this, where sex and even bondage is discussed openly.  I wrote the introduction to try and set a tone for the entire town where, for generations there had been an attitude of sexual tolerance.  Of course, to put this town in rural Alabama may be the most unbelievable part of the scenario LOL.

Perhaps this is more believable to me because I personally knew a family that practiced nudism.  Most of the neighbors simply knew they usually kept their drapes and blinds closed but other than that they were just average working class Americans.  On weekends and a few weeks a year they frequented a family oriented nudist campground in North Georgia with their kids and many other families.
Also consider native Americans and pioneers (and for that matter many people around the world in lower income countries) who live in one "room" tents, cabins or shacks.  Sometimes two or three generations in the same room.  This was best demonstrated by a scene in the Kevin Costner movie "Dances with Wolves" where Lt. John Dunbar and his new bride Dances with Wolves make love for the first time just a few feet away from her parents who are doing the equivalent of high-fiving each other.  Modern society has, since the influence of Puritanism and the Victorian era, demonized and guilt-ed sex to a point where we can no longer imagine such a family life.

I don't personally know any families where bondage is discussed and even practiced within a family with teenage children - but I'd be amazed if it didn't exist.

So that is at least part of the background onto which I wrote this story.

However - the story is fiction and certainly part fantasy - and later chapters will probably require you to 'suspend disbelief' even more.
Hope you keep reading and keep the feedback coming.  Thanks again.

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Re: Chain by Budman
« Reply #4 on: September 06, 2022, 12:53:41 pm »
I would actually argue, given the setting and the massive health concern coming down the line from the mothers weight gain, that having to tell the daughter about the weight loss plan is the lesser of two evils.

Yes, it seems completely crazy and stupid, but if you feel that it is that or an early grave for the mother, for your wife...  plus it is something that is very important to the parents, and they have done their best to keep up a divider between what needs to be shared and what is private.  They gave her a chance to stop them, they were open and considerate, and considering the things the daughter has no doubt seen on the internet, well, is it really so out there?

I am just taking the "different people, different rules" view of things here.

As for the chapter with the manual for an electronic chastity device, I am actually really looking forward to seeing that, since if it is well done it could be a fascinating start point!

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Re: Chain by Budman
« Reply #5 on: September 15, 2022, 09:48:46 pm »
Part 4 up tonight, enjoy

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« Reply #6 on: September 16, 2022, 12:15:33 pm »
*giggles* shock, horror, surprise, this isn't the first generation that have used this general plan to handle the weight loss requirements!  Not really a surprise, unless you don't realise that there are actually kinky people out there *smirk*

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Re: Chain by Budman
« Reply #7 on: October 06, 2022, 08:06:15 pm »
*giggles* shock, horror, surprise, this isn't the first generation that have used this general plan to handle the weight loss requirements!  Not really a surprise, unless you don't realise that there are actually kinky people out there *smirk*

Of all ages :-P

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Re: Chain by Budman
« Reply #8 on: October 20, 2022, 04:40:50 am »
Really enjoying all of the story threads so far.  Nice to see that you've got things working out between Lou and Leon so that they are both having a good time with each other.  I understand you've got a lot of threads in "the tank".  I assume we'll be learning a lot about some of the other residents of Chain, Alabama.  I'll be eagerly looking forward to them.

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« Reply #9 on: November 03, 2022, 03:18:33 pm »
Just finished chapter 6, the family dynamics in all of this really make me smile.  Watching as Clair slowly but surely realises that her tastes and interests also run in this direction is so fun :)  Slowly going from the total horror and revulsion that her parents are not only sexual beings, but have an active, and even worse, deeply kinky sex life, to starting to realise that she may well need to follow very closely in their own footsteps is quite the delight.

The wicked and evil teasing between her parents is a delight.  Husband is being so completely mean and wicked here, then again, if he wasn't able to be so "heartless" and hold firm to the rules then this system would never work for them, it would never give his wife the very important and necessary health benefits that she requires, and they would not be such a happy and together couple :)

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Re: Chain by Budman
« Reply #10 on: November 07, 2022, 03:59:38 pm »
Up to chapter 8, the last 2 chapters were a bit different, but it is nice to see the author realise and appreciate that sex and a sex drive don't magically disappear just because you are older.  Also the characters are well drawn, the is a lot of compassion, consideration and general goodness at work here, and it is fun seeing how much all of this both runs in the family, and the options for it are embedded in the community nature and spirit :)

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Re: Chain by Budman
« Reply #11 on: November 14, 2022, 05:13:40 am »
Thanks feline.  It's nice to know that my readers are getting exactly the tone and themes that I was aiming for.

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Re: Chain by Budman Ch 10
« Reply #12 on: November 17, 2022, 10:14:30 pm »
Found this very intriguing.
You have put a lot of flesh on my bones of how such an event should work.
I also think the two of your are lucky to have each other.
Certainly hope you plan on sharing the entire weekend.

Oh! I didn't get lost at all in this chapter.

Duncan O'Neil Kennedy Cunningham
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Re: Chain by Budman
« Reply #13 on: November 19, 2022, 05:01:49 pm »
Chapter 11 up tonight, enjoy

 

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