Hannah's Ponyboy by Painpony

[teanndaorsa]

You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/hannahs_ponyboy1.html
F/m; F+/m; mpov; ponyboy; training; bodymod; permanent; cuffs; strip; collar; cage; gag; chastity; crop; enema; spandex; latex; tattoo; reluct; XXX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks 

[herpetj]

Absolutely loved this story!

[Lovecutefeet]

A beautiful story. As a submissive masochist, I would love it if in real life, men could become temporary or permanent human ponies. I'd love to be in a spiked chastity, vocal cords sliced like in the story, legally a beast, for my vanilla best friend. Using a pony cart would be convenient for her, esp. as a bicycle rickshaw for longer distance. It would be a positive dream to serve her like that. When will the Supreme Court allow true freedom of contract? Thankx for writing the story.

[stargate1990]

had to come on just to say how much I enjoyed this story.  The setup and everything were amazing!  While I would of preferred other things happening here and there the whole idea and the characters were really great.  Hope to see much more from you in the future!

[T.H.]

I didn't like the story as much.

It's well written and all, it has some kinks I like, and some that just don't bother me.
But what I'm desperatly miss in this story is somebody I can lely to or identify myself as a dominant personality.

I have the same feeling with a lot of stories clearly written by subs so please don't feel singled out here. Especially in the noncon, doubtcon or tricked section. I get it some subs crave the harsh Master/Mistress experience and within some limits I enjoy giving it to my sub. But in this story the "dominants" aren't really dominants aren't they?, they come over as a bunch of narcissistic sociopaths feeding themselves of pure misery. I really can't rely to or identify with that... so yeah... as a dom... I'm out.

Just wanting to give some feedback why I abandon this story despite being well written and hitting some of my kinks.

Best regards,

T.H.

[stargate1990]

Would love for the opportunity to message with the author