Author Topic: Mrs Andersson by Marcus  (Read 355 times)

Offline teanndaorsa

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Mrs Andersson by Marcus
« on: January 04, 2022, 08:36:34 PM »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.latexstories.net/storieslr/mrs_andersson1.html
F/f; fpov; latex; hood; catsuit; straps; collar; cuffs; gag; mast; heels; tease; climax; feet; cons; X

https://www.latexstories.net/storieslr/mrs_andersson2.html
F/f; fpov; bond; latex; cuffs; spreader; electro; pain; buttplug; toys; catsuit; hood; corset; armbinder; climax; susp; hum; machine; pain; clamps; crop; predicament; tease; torture; mast; cons; reluct; XXX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
« Last Edit: January 16, 2022, 05:34:08 PM by teanndaorsa »

Offline glasgow-sub

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Re: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
« Reply #1 on: January 08, 2022, 02:54:05 PM »
I enjoyed it very much and hope you follow it up with more of Mrs Andersson's training and sessions

Offline morkaii

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Re: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
« Reply #2 on: January 20, 2022, 03:40:45 PM »
I enjoyed it very much and hope you follow it up with more of Mrs Andersson's training and sessions

Thank you!

Part 3 is in the works :)
- a sick mind is true delight -

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Re: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
« Reply #3 on: January 20, 2022, 09:22:31 PM »
Hello morkaii,

quite the experience you're putting the adventurous Mrs. Andersson through. I for one look forward to read about her further trials and tribulations. Thanks for sharing this story!

Cheers, Absolutist

Offline mickey

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Re: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
« Reply #4 on: January 21, 2022, 12:03:26 AM »
Really loved this story, thank you. Best on this site in a while. Constructive criticism, the jump in play level between part 1 and part 2 is quite rapid, maybe a more gentle transition in future stories. I know i myself would panic and it does kill the scene when you have to call a timeout.

You write better than me and my first language is english :)

Offline morkaii

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Re: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
« Reply #5 on: January 21, 2022, 08:26:55 AM »
Hello morkaii,

Thanks for sharing this story!

Cheers, Absolutist

Thank you and glad you like it! 🖤
- a sick mind is true delight -

https://linktr.ee/a_thing_for_rubber

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Re: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
« Reply #6 on: January 21, 2022, 08:33:49 AM »
Really loved this story, thank you. Best on this site in a while. Constructive criticism, the jump in play level between part 1 and part 2 is quite rapid, maybe a more gentle transition in future stories. I know i myself would panic and it does kill the scene when you have to call a timeout.

Thanks! 🖤

Point taken, the jump is intentional in this case since as I want my protagonist to experience the panic and feeling of being WAY WAY in over her head as part of her story arc. Could probably have been better written and executed.

That said, your criticism is well received and I have learned that next time i do such a lengthy story I need to have a more complete story arc before starting writing at all.
« Last Edit: January 21, 2022, 01:10:39 PM by morkaii »
- a sick mind is true delight -

https://linktr.ee/a_thing_for_rubber

 

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