Author Topic: Your Master Requires Your Presence by Jack Peacock  (Read 114 times)

Offline teanndaorsa

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Your Master Requires Your Presence by Jack Peacock
« on: June 08, 2021, 10:08:09 PM »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/your_master_requires_your_presence1.html
M/f; M+/f; slave; kidnap; bond; cuffs; gag; naked; training; chastity; prison; reluct; nc; X

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/your_master_requires_your_presence2.html
M/f; M+/f; slave; training; prison; cuffs; bedtie; spreadeagle; tease; chastity; blindfold; electro; punish; reluct; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

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Offline Marigolds

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Re: Your Master Requires Your Presence by Jack Peacock
« Reply #1 on: June 10, 2021, 09:44:22 AM »
I enjoyed both parts of this story. You write well, the words flow and the descriptions of how Cathy was treated and behaved, and was finally tempted were well done and realistic. I just have one criticism, and it is one I have made about other stories, however good, and that is that poor Cathy was never once allowed to go the toilet! Even during the days strapped to the chair, her bodily functioins were completely ignored. This, for me, means that the realism of the story is seriously marred. They shouldn't just be completely ignored, as you have done. Apart from that, I repeat that I did enjoy your story.
Marigolds

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Re: Your Master Requires Your Presence by Jack Peacock
« Reply #2 on: June 10, 2021, 02:37:47 PM »
The inspiration for the chair comes from an old Victorian era psychiatric treatment called the "Tranquilizer Chair", used in the days before drugs were safe.  It was a heavy wooden chair with the seat cut out and a bedpan underneath, for long term use.  Mea culpa for leaving out that detail since as you pointed out it did affect the sense of realism.  I did consider it while writing but decided to not delve into extraneous detail that didn't advance the story.  Think of it as a bit of dramatic license, much like the way movies and TV shows leave out toilets in jail cell scenes.
  Jack Peacock

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Re: Your Master Requires Your Presence by Jack Peacock
« Reply #3 on: June 11, 2021, 08:41:56 AM »
Hello Jakbird
Many thanks for such a quick reply to my comment on your story. You are correct that including the details of toileting would be extraneous and not advance the story, unless, I suppose, you added it because of its potential for further humiliation of Cathy. Your analogy with the lack of toilets in jail cells on TV and in movies is very apt.
I've also enjoyed your other stories, in particular "Whispers in the Ear", which, although there's nothing in it about peeing or pooing, excited me because being tied up when completely dressed in rubber is something that I am fortunate enough to experience with the help of my girlfriend. I found it particularly intriguing that one doesn't know whether the victim was male or female.
I've only had one story posted here so far, which was a true description of my life with my girlfriend. I'm working on a further account, but have not (yet) tried fiction.
Marigolds

 

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