Author Topic: Dive by Tigerstretch  (Read 823 times)

Offline teanndaorsa

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Dive by Tigerstretch
« on: March 02, 2021, 07:38:34 PM »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/dive.html
FF; fpov; kissing; lesbian; forest; fantasy; stuck; vr; viking; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/dive2.html
FF; fpov; vr; kissing; lesbian; fantasy; naked; viking; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
« Last Edit: September 06, 2021, 09:15:00 PM by teanndaorsa »

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Re: Dive by Tigerstretch
« Reply #1 on: March 02, 2021, 09:27:32 PM »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/dive.html
FF; fpov; kissing; lesbian; forest; fantasy; stuck; vr; viking; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

Oooh, it's the first time I have a story in this section. :) I will celebrate with whiskey. ;)
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Re: Dive by Tigerstretch
« Reply #2 on: March 07, 2021, 11:24:17 AM »
A very good story, fun characters, and a great setting. I like the idea of wandering around inside of a game, and you made me feel like I was wandering around inside of it with you. I'm not specifically into games myself, so explaining how things worked in this unique setting I think was critical, at least to me. My only critical comment on your awesome story regards the title, (I nearly overlooked this story because of it), but I can't necessarily think of a better one myself.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

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Re: Dive by Tigerstretch
« Reply #3 on: March 07, 2021, 03:38:59 PM »
Indeed an interesting concept involving leaping before looking.

I'm curious if given how she has seemed to earn points if she will unlock more 'adult' accessories to use in her game. Seems Nam might enjoy that

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Re: Dive by Tigerstretch
« Reply #4 on: March 07, 2021, 11:20:46 PM »
A very good story, fun characters, and a great setting. I like the idea of wandering around inside of a game, and you made me feel like I was wandering around inside of it with you. I'm not specifically into games myself, so explaining how things worked in this unique setting I think was critical, at least to me. My only critical comment on your awesome story regards the title, (I nearly overlooked this story because of it), but I can't necessarily think of a better one myself.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

Thanks for reading and commenting. This one got a rather cold reception and I have to admit I was a bit disappointed. That said, I'm very aware that I am the only one knowing what will come next, and that's probably why I'm so excited about it. Chapter 2 will be super slow as well, but then things will start to get interesting in chapter 3 and on.

Dive is directly associated with Heaven's lost property. In that anime, at some point, they use the dive game to plunge into the character's dream. The premise is also inspired by Sword Art Online, which is an icon for the "stuck in a video game" stories.
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Re: Dive by Tigerstretch
« Reply #5 on: March 07, 2021, 11:24:32 PM »
Indeed an interesting concept involving leaping before looking.

I'm curious if given how she has seemed to earn points if she will unlock more 'adult' accessories to use in her game. Seems Nam might enjoy that

The point system came from a Manga called Combatant will be dispatched. It is incredibly funny. That said, after a chapter of two, points won't be the central goal of the game anymore. Evelyn will find a more efficient way to make progress. The first chapter was just a way to show how harsh Valhalla was. :)

I find Nam funny. She will have a big role over time. In chapter two, we will learn that something is fishy about her. :)

Thanks for ready. I've been struggling to get feedback about that story. :)
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Re: Dive by Tigerstretch
« Reply #6 on: March 08, 2021, 08:51:14 AM »
I have noticed a lack of feedback and interaction on the forum as well lately, I don't know why that is, but I wouldn't necessarily take it to heart. Perhaps people are just enjoying your work and simply have nothing to add to it?

Jackie.

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Re: Dive by Tigerstretch
« Reply #7 on: September 06, 2021, 09:15:23 PM »
Part 2 up tonight, enjoy

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Re: Dive by Tigerstretch
« Reply #8 on: September 18, 2021, 04:11:14 PM »
As is my Modus Operandi lately, late to read the updates. Great continuance to Dive. I'm really curious if Nam is really clueless until she is force fed vital information for the player, or just an excellent actor. I am sure in time we will know

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« Reply #9 on: September 18, 2021, 04:22:42 PM »
As is my Modus Operandi lately, late to read the updates. Great continuance to Dive. I'm really curious if Nam is really clueless until she is force fed vital information for the player, or just an excellent actor. I am sure in time we will know

Nam is an interesting one. I'm at chapter 6, and I still don't know what I'm going to do with her. ;)
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