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Implanted by The Technician

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teanndaorsa:
You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesek/implanted.html
M/f; oral; naked; public; sex; anal; FF; mind-control; orgy; threesome; party; office; strip; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

feline:
I am not sure that I would call this sexy or erotic personally, but it is very well written, interesting, and it looks at a different world, a world that is explained and explored.  It shows us ideas, brings up thoughts, and everything fits and flows together perfectly.

The ending though...  I was wondering as I was reading if there was a point to this journey, or if it was just the journey for the journeys sake.  But it turns out there really was a point, and I really did not see it coming, but I am very glad of the ending, it shows everything in a new and different light.

An excellent read, thank you :)

Zephyr:
I loved the story, You are such an incredibly good writer! Outstanding!

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