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At a Loss by Mikel

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teanndaorsa:
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.mummified.net/storiesad/at_a_loss.html
Sbf; mum; machine; wrap; tape; gag; collar; toys; force; trick; kidnap; cons; nc; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

Tigerstretch:
I always loved those short stories where the main character is battling against a small uncooperative robots. Hehe.

Fun one. :) thanks for writing it.

Mikel:
Thanks Tigerstretch I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I would like to ask, do you like the shorter stories or the longer ones?
The reason I ask I have several longer stories I haven't sent because I thought people preferred the shorter ones.
I actually like the shorter ones because I have limited time to sit and read but that's just me.
Thanks again for reading and giving me a response,
Mikel

nyenor:
Mikel. For me its ANY story, long or short I don't care.

Tigerstretch:

--- Quote from: Mikel on June 18, 2020, 03:09:15 am ---Thanks Tigerstretch I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I would like to ask, do you like the shorter stories or the longer ones?
The reason I ask I have several longer stories I haven't sent because I thought people preferred the shorter ones.
I actually like the shorter ones because I have limited time to sit and read but that's just me.
Thanks again for reading and giving me a response,
Mikel

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I think the only answer to your question is "Write what makes you happy." What people like or what they want is irrelevant. Whatever you publish, some people will like and others won't. It's not something you can control.

That said, I've read your material for years, and I think your current style is more appropriate for short stories. You will have to help the readers a bit if you want them to read your longer stories. I write very long stories all the time and this is what I suggest you to consider. Many of those advices were given to me by my patrons.

* Write shorter paragraphs (2-3 sentences)- people are reading on phones and tablets will thank you.(your style currently includes many long paragraphs which can make it harder to read)
* Detach dialogues from the paragraphs when possible. (You sometimes insert short dialogues within long paragraphs which can break the flow.
* A long story heavily based on kinks will tire the readers. I find people like it more when they get to know a character first. Let's says kitty in Feliformia, she has a huge non-kinky back story and many people like her because they got to know who she was. She makes jokes, act funny, experience sad things, fall in love, etc. This will help the readers stay engaged.
* people like to know why characters are doing what they do.
Of course they are just suggestions to make a longer story more digestible for the readers. You are one of the most creative author on this site, you can create good kinky stories out of thin air, which lead me to think you are a gardener like me.(we don't really plan ahead what we are writing)

Anyway, to me, I think you can totally write great longer stories if you makes your story breath a bit more. But your style is your style. My point of view is just one among others. :) I just like trying new styles and tips, then I keep what works for me.

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