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Tackling the Debt by Tigerstretch

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teanndaorsa:
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.dollstories.net/storiessz/tackling_the_debt.html
M/f; F2doll; transform; sex; clones; prostitute; cons; X

https://www.dollstories.net/storiessz/tackling_the_debt2.html
F/f; F2doll; mind-control; hypno; scifi; leather; harness; cuffs; collar; gag; leash; climax; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

RefreshinglyIda:
I love the story so far, can't wait for part two.
I'm really worried what happened to her real body.

Tigerstretch:

--- Quote from: RefreshinglyIda on May 14, 2020, 01:33:14 pm ---I love the story so far, can't wait for part two.
I'm really worried what happened to her real body.

--- End quote ---

In exchange for 1.3 million dollars, I could tell you. :D ... That would get Chloe out of trouble. I'm publishing the next chapter in about 2 weeks, so it will be on Gromet at the end of June I believe. The feedback I got from my test reader is that chapter 2 is better than the first one and I tend to agree.

Thanks so much for reading it. :)
TS

oneupthextraman:
Very nice story. Very well written. I look forward to more coming out.

jackierabbit1:
Just read both parts one and two, very well written, and a fun adventure. I look forward to what comes next, I especially like the sub story with Matt and Chloe's body, and the way you bounce back and forth between both stories. I also like the realism of the creators of the "C" model installing some verbal shortcuts into her, this a good parallel with gamers who seem to have a pleather of back door codes for the games they play, left there by the people that wrote the games.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

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