Author Topic: The Sun I Can't See by Tigerstretch  (Read 1560 times)

Offline Oompah

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Re: The Sun I Can't See by Tigerstretch
« Reply #15 on: June 09, 2020, 10:55:20 AM »
I love part two of The Sun I Can't See, particularly admiring how you manage to describe everything so vividly from the point of view of a blind protagonist. Nice cliff-hanger at the end!

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Re: The Sun I Can't See by Tigerstretch
« Reply #16 on: June 09, 2020, 12:50:01 PM »
I love part two of The Sun I Can't See, particularly admiring how you manage to describe everything so vividly from the point of view of a blind protagonist. Nice cliff-hanger at the end!

Hehe the cliffhanger was nasty. Maybe I'll do that kind of thing more often. :) There is a way to know who that kissing girl was just by reading chapter 2. But I'm not saying. I'm just waiting to see if someone finds out. Hehe (and no, its not Mei who tricked her)

Thanks for reading.
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Re: The Sun I Can't See by Tigerstretch
« Reply #17 on: June 15, 2020, 03:11:31 PM »
LOVED part 2! Bravo... bring on the next instalment!  8)

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Re: The Sun I Can't See by Tigerstretch
« Reply #18 on: June 16, 2020, 12:44:49 AM »
LOVED part 2! Bravo... bring on the next instalment!  8)

Hey thanks! It was a fun one to write. :)
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Re: The Sun I Can't See by Tigerstretch
« Reply #19 on: September 01, 2020, 03:56:40 PM »
I got to this series only recently and it is awesome. Your other stories are great too. Now I wonder how much is personal experience and how much is pure fantasy :-)

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Re: The Sun I Can't See by Tigerstretch
« Reply #20 on: September 02, 2020, 04:22:23 AM »
I got to this series only recently and it is awesome. Your other stories are great too. Now I wonder how much is personal experience and how much is pure fantasy :-)

Mainly imagination. I really don't do much on my own. I'm super boring. ;)
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Re: The Sun I Can't See by Tigerstretch
« Reply #21 on: September 06, 2020, 12:51:03 AM »
This story is supersexy! Wonderful with a new scene (the heroine being blind). I'll really look forward to chapter 3 tomorrow (too late now).
You can say I'm a worthless piece of shit - but remember! Even shit has it's value. If you're a fly.

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Re: The Sun I Can't See by Tigerstretch
« Reply #22 on: September 06, 2020, 04:07:31 AM »
This story is supersexy! Wonderful with a new scene (the heroine being blind). I'll really look forward to chapter 3 tomorrow (too late now).

Thanks TeaSer, enjoy chapter 3. :)
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Re: The Sun I Can't See by Tigerstretch
« Reply #23 on: September 06, 2020, 02:49:25 PM »
Wow! What an amazing story! Thank you for sharing

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Re: The Sun I Can't See by Tigerstretch
« Reply #24 on: September 06, 2020, 03:38:04 PM »
Wow! What an amazing story! Thank you for sharing

Thanks. It's one of my favorite too. :)
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Re: The Sun I Can't See by Tigerstretch
« Reply #25 on: September 07, 2020, 01:34:51 AM »
So! Did it. And enjoyed it in full.

Not only did you manage to turn a disability into something sexy (guess we shouldn't always pity the disabled), but you managed to make a hot story about a pretty mundane devellopment - well, not more mundane than you presented a lot of toys.

Using Mei the way you did allowed you to keep the predicament of Alex at a descent level (again - very probable as she's a newbie) while giving the readers something to drool at.

The text is easily readable and contains an adequate amount of details - enough to imagine the scene and not too many making the description boring and difficult to read.

Great story.
You can say I'm a worthless piece of shit - but remember! Even shit has it's value. If you're a fly.

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Re: The Sun I Can't See by Tigerstretch
« Reply #26 on: September 07, 2020, 05:34:37 AM »
So! Did it. And enjoyed it in full.

Not only did you manage to turn a disability into something sexy (guess we shouldn't always pity the disabled), but you managed to make a hot story about a pretty mundane devellopment - well, not more mundane than you presented a lot of toys.

Using Mei the way you did allowed you to keep the predicament of Alex at a descent level (again - very probable as she's a newbie) while giving the readers something to drool at.

The text is easily readable and contains an adequate amount of details - enough to imagine the scene and not too many making the description boring and difficult to read.

Great story.

Thanks again, T.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's kind of why I write in the first place. ;)
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