Chapter four is awesome again, Tigerstretch, I love it very much. But...
The remarkable about the first three chapters are their realism. You believe that it could happen to every man of us. That's so inspiring!
I'm sorry to say that with chapter four, imagination took over. Only one meal a day when caged? No good idea for an underweighted slim girly. Catheterized for two or three months? There's a risk of infections, incontinence and decreasing of bladder volume. Locked up nearly all day long? What's in case of fire etc.?
I think it's worth being considered.
Let's wait for chapter five. I'm dying to know what will happen.
(Please excuse my poor English, I'm not a native speaker)
Hey John. Thanks for your comments.
Sorry to hear that the story took a turn that you did not like. It was always intended to be a fictional story. To me, their emotions and profound love and how they help each other are what interest me the most.
Doing this to Kitty was just an excuse to highlight that aspect.
That said, the story is already fully written. To you specifically, I'd say, wait until chapter 8 or 9 (if you are that patient) and based on what you said, I feel you are going to love it.
By the way your English is great.
