Author Topic: Scare Me by Zephyr  (Read 999 times)

Offline teanndaorsa

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Scare Me by Zephyr
« on: January 08, 2020, 07:43:34 pm »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/scare_me.html
M/f; bond; sex; naked; rope; toys; insert; handcuffs; spreadeagle; cons; nc; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

Offline milavolkova

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Re: Scare Me by Zephyr
« Reply #1 on: June 11, 2022, 11:25:05 am »
That story somehow got overlooked by me for 2 years, I've just found it. And heck, it's great. It clicked with me immediately. It's got that betrayal angle, which I hate usually, but here it's kinda justified, so it made things hotter. It reads more like a thriller with a kinky porn vibe. The characters are built perfectly within a short story limit, their actions are following the internal logic. And I hate to say it, but in Nel's shoes I'd probably do the same in the end.

Incidentally, I thought about writing my own story with a similar plot, but now I won't. I can't hope to do better.

Offline Eido

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Re: Scare Me by Zephyr
« Reply #2 on: June 18, 2022, 11:30:17 pm »
So glad milavolkova commented on this story or I'd have missed it too. Great work!

Eido

 

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