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Offline TeaSer

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Fictional - assisted selfbondage
« on: February 09, 2016, 02:30:50 PM »
Is this story (attached html) worth posting to the Plaza?  Comments please - including comments on bad wording and spelling.

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Offline MaxRoper

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Re: Fictional - assisted selfbondage
« Reply #1 on: February 09, 2016, 05:52:06 PM »
This is a well written tale about someone's rather foolhardy adventure. I enjoyed it and my evil editor's eye saw no glaring errors. It's better than a lot of the stories in the Plaza. Send it in for posting already!

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Re: Fictional - assisted selfbondage
« Reply #2 on: February 20, 2016, 07:22:21 AM »
Submit away. A great story well worth being preserved here!
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Re: Fictional - assisted selfbondage
« Reply #3 on: February 21, 2016, 09:34:25 PM »
Thanks for your comments - the story now resides in Gromets pile

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