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Shack by Zephyr

Started by Gromet, August 13, 2018, 02:18:43 PM

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Gromet

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/shack.html
Solo-F; FF; roadtrip; handcuffs; exhib; M/f; truck; bond; toys; tease; naked; beach; buried; fpov; rom; oral; sex; cons; X

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/shack2.html
M/f; fpov; roadtrip; truck; rom; bond; handcuffs; exhib; naked; rope; outdoors; spreadeagle; toys; tease; torment; oral; denial; multi-orgasm; pain; sex; cons; X

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/shack3.html
M/f; fpov; roadtrip; truck; rom; bond; handcuffs; exhib; naked; rope; outdoors; spreadeagle; toys; tease; torment; oral; denial; multi-orgasm; pain; sex; cons; X

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/shack4.html
M/f; bond; rack; spreadeagle; teen; sex; rope; insert; force; tease; pain; cons; XX

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/shack5.html
M/f; bond; rom; rope; cuffs; zipties; spreadeagle; sex; rape; extreme; exhib; outdoors; gag; naked; oral; clamps; cons; nc; XX

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/shack6.html
M/f; rom; bdsm; ravish; oral; sex; blindfold; latex; costume; cuffs;  outdoors; spreadeagle; display; strip; cons; reluct; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

teanndaorsa

Part 4 of this went up today. Parts 2 and 3, previously in one file, have now been split out.

Zephyr

The race is long, and in the end it is only with yourself.

jackierabbit1

Very erotic, I especially liked the alternate darker version option.

Thank you for sharing, Jackie.

teanndaorsa

How do people feel about the darker / lighter switch I bodged in? I was hoping it wouldn't detract from the flow of the story, but would be intuitive enough to use.

Johnnyrockitt

Loved your description of how the tied teen felt, through arousal and fear and pain. You can write more like this anytime, please!

Zephyr

Thank you all for all your kind comments! There's two more parts I'm just about done with to complete the story. The last one is more tame and wraps things up but part 5 may be a match to part 4.

Teanndaorsa: I absolutely LOVED how you did the split. Just blown away how perfect it worked. Awesome job!
The race is long, and in the end it is only with yourself.

jackierabbit1

Just read/reread the first three parts, it's a fun adventure, can't wait for the other two. When I read certain stories I imagine things the characters could/should do, as if I were either writing them, or living them. This is one such story.

Jackie.

Zephyr

#8
A huge compliment as I've been s fan of your work for years and several of yours are among my very favorites! Thank you!

I'm intrigued: Where would you take the story? Maybe there's a chapter i/we have missed...
The race is long, and in the end it is only with yourself.

jackierabbit1

Thank you, that's a wonderful compliment. I must say that I love the way you write, I get "into" meaning inside your characters, and I enjoy vicariously what they are doing.

I love the concept of getting dumped off someplace, it has been a theme in some of my stories, and several more that I'm working on, (on and off), that feel very erotic to me. I could envision a scenario where Tina starts off bound up in some restrictive and creative way, or perhaps just dumped off nude on the side of a desolate road through the desert by Shack. She could be wearing nothing at all, or a pair of cuffs behind her back, or whatever you thought might be fun and appropriate, but I could imagine myself being left abandoned for a time in a similar condition and left to fend for myself (helplessly).

Shack would come back and rescue her obviously, after some period of time had passed, but the sound of the dig diesel truck driving away as your left naked, cuffed and vulnerable on the side of the road would be nirvana to me. Maybe Tina would have to find her way to a nearby cave where some water was stored by Shack ahead of time, maybe even he might have to drop off his rig for some work afterwards and he then returning in a borrowed vehicle of some kind to rescue her after taking proper advantage?

It's just a little fantasy of mine, hope you like the idea, Jackie.





Zephyr

Gonna have to think on that. Stay tuned and thank you!
The race is long, and in the end it is only with yourself.

teanndaorsa


jackierabbit1

I loved the left helpless under the bleachers part, It's a great scenario, I just don't know if I would have the courage to try it out for myself.

Jackie.

teanndaorsa


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