My Summer Of Dares by Jackie Rabbit

[teanndaorsa]

Part 17 up tonight, enjoy

[drulema]

Well, whatever has Dana in a lather, she is not mercilessly taking it out on Jackie, though Jackie is the handiest one to punish being Dana & Tracy's slave girl. Not informing Jackie what she did to earn Dana's wrath is a punishment in itself and I think is meant to keep Jackie on her toes as it were.
Jackie, having asked for and signed a contract binding her initially to Dana & Tracy will obviously live to the letter of it. Fun and games is over. She now is property; property owned by Dana &Tracy. Beginning with having Jackie get the tattoo to now, Dana has been making it totally clear she owns Jackie. But she is not going to let any harm come to her property either. Is it because she still has feelings for her "friend" or simply because she enjoys her dominance over Jackie, i don't know. In any case, she is setting precedence as to what will happen to and with Jackie over the next 4 years.
I like that a lot of the groundwork for the next 4 years is being set in detail over these last few chapters giving us an insight into Jackie's thoughts as things progress.

[jackierabbit1]

I love that there are no real ground rules for all this between the girls, except for the diary, and now the potentially harsh contract too. All of them together are figuring this out at the same time, ("on the fly" so to speak) and I'm trying to show all the characters growing into this with each other, giving a sense of realism to this fantasy. Of the four so far I think Dennis is the least deep character, but possibly because we don't know what makes him tick just yet.

 The summerhouse itself is a real place from my past, so this helps with the setting in my mind at least, but I'm trying to paint a picture of the idyllic nature of the place without getting bogged down in the details.

 Dana and Dennis are working on an evil surprise for Jackie, one that Tracy is reluctantly on board for, and Gregory even less so. I think it will "anchor" any ill feeling she may develop about her servitude to the house itself though, not that this is necessarily by design, but rather happenstance. Not that this is exactly the same thing, but your puppy doesn't hate the vet, she does associate the antiseptic smell of the vet's office with unpleasant things though, so this is why it's so hard to get her out of the car once you're there with her.

Anyway, the scene with the billboard is just something that trips my trigger. I love the being dumped off naked and helpless someplace, and I have stood near billboards like that, hearing the rush of traffic passing just out of sight while my mind wanders to the endless kinky possibilities...

Thank you so much for your words of encouragement, such things keep me motivated to tell this story to it's conclusion, Jackie. 

[feline]

I actually got impatient, and just read this, since I wanted to enjoy this, before coming back and pulling my thoughts together

The harsh night outside, her treatment, and clear position in the household is making it quite clear that her friends aren't having any problems adapting to the roles of harsh task mistress, or keeping her in her place.  But at the same time, we are still left in the dark as to what she actually did wrong here, still leaving the best working theory that the presence of a "naked and available sex object" was unwanted competition.

A tricky problem to solve that, since if she is actually being kept as a naked and available slave, so "property" in a very real sense, she is going to be very much perceived as a sex object / sex toy, by lots of people, her friends indeed.  So how do they compete with this?  One thing asking a bunch of emotionally mature adults this, but I do have to remember that we are still dealing with teenagers here...

Very interesting that Tracy and Dana are taking different approaches here, but also as it should be, for while the two do seem to move in perfect harmony at times, at other times it is quite clear how differently they view and approach things, and they have different feelings and needs here.  As for a wake up call as to the nature of your slavery, well, you did insist on a very harsh contract to keep you on task, regardless of your views and changing feelings!

Yes, some information on what she did "wrong" would be helpful if her owners want her to behave differently in future, but if the root problem is more down to the fact that she is a naked slave, then there is nothing she is in a position to do or change.  Not that this is automatically going to save her from the wrath of her owners...

It makes me smile, her observation about having to get used to no privacy when using the toilet, since there are clear hints, and interest, in keeping her in dog mode, and dog mode isn't going to come with human toilet privileges, we can be sure of that!

I can see her keepers enjoying not being quite so "responsible" for her while back home, but at the same time, I can see them missing the feelings of power and control, and also of convenience of having their own personal slave on tap 24/7.  Well, clearly only one person is to blame for this lack of being properly available as a slave, and she is likely to end up being punished, in some form or other, for this terrible state of affairs *evil smirk*

Also yes, very much an experiment, where most of the risk, and in a sense the rewards, fall on your shoulders alone.

Having to "come last" with Gregory as well is another interesting example of logical consequences of this whole situation that she simply didn't see coming, but at the same time, I do enjoy the sense of maturity with which she accepts that having someone being much less equal can help to defuse tensions.

No wonder she is confused about leaving all of the food there, but also, yes, there are going to be lots of things about your own life and treatment that you won't be told about in advance, and most certainly won't be consulted on either!

I do enjoy the simple sexy delight of travelling in daylight so nearly naked.  Also it is very interesting, reasonable but still a delight, how she is already looking for ways to "push" her owners into taking her in hand.  Only a few hours after fearing being left chained up and alone in the house, and she is looking for more   Yummy!

The comment about being reluctant to admit that she would have been miserable, left at home, alone and abandoned by her friends, if they had gone off to the fancy university without her seems "odd", in the sense that surely this is to be expected, given how close the three of them clearly are, and have been for so very long?  The whole sense of this being an escape from her normal life reinforces this point.  But at the same time, it is good and important to see how she feels about her owners, and still very much wants to be with them, for them to be a "group".

It's amusing, the speculation about the adults having manipulated some of this situation to have come to pass, but my suspicion is much more that the adults simply accepted and took advantage of the three of you wanting to move out and move on with your lives as a unit, giving all three families space and time to themselves once more.

Now that is an interesting statement and perspective, separating out the summer house as the cause of all of her work and obligations, from her loving friends, who are still very much her friends, and having different feelings about them.  At the same time though, for all that it seems strange, it also sounds good, since having a good relationship with her owners and friends is very important all the way through this.

Dumped by the side of the road, both a very fitting fantasy, the ideal time for such a "fun" little game, but also a lovely reminder of your other story series, that I still have very fond memories of, and a ludicrously hot fantasy!

The comments about the girls enjoying food so much make me smile, since this puts me in mind of our conversation here, including food and weight over time.  At the same time Jackie being used to doing without so many things, making this return to normality easier on her, is an interesting "other side" of things.

Leashed up here like this...  the idea of her as a stripper for an audience is interesting, and I wonder if this is an idea that will be returned to.  I don't see her needing to go out and earn money like that, but maybe requiring the house slave to put on a private performance is something some of her male, and perhaps female, "owners" will explore...  after all, once you have a slave, might as well make full use of her!

As for the nickname, off the top of my head this feels like the first time she has ever actually been named   Just a passing thought, but still it makes me smile.

Now that is a powerful, and easy to overlook moment!  The truck horns, the fear, the very real suspicion that she has been spotted, but instead of her main fear being her own safety after she is grabbed and kidnapped by a passing trucker, she is fearing for her friends, their reactions and feelings at loosing her!!!  THIS matters, this shows us the heart of Jackie, and her views on her friends, the love and trust that is enabling this "game", this "experiment".

And there is the "other half" of this trust and love!  For all that they have done together, that the girls have done to Jackie, Tracy stayed to watch over her, to guard her, and as soon as Dana realised the risk and the danger she was straight back, moving instantly to protect and save Jackie!  It is a two way street, this trust and love, after all!

In a lot of ways I think we needed this change of emotional pace, and a clear reminder of where everyone stands, even as I suspect things are not going to be quite so "back to normal" as Jackie is expecting...  well, we can hope can't we?  *evil smirk*

Now off to catch up with playing maid, which I only discovered was updated a few days ago.

[jackierabbit1]

Thank you for such wonderful observations. In the contract I had to put a name, so I expanded my Jaackierabbit nick name into a real sounding name, Jaqueline D. Lapin (aka Jackie the rabbit) in French, or so I hoped. I guess a second meaning of lapin can also mean a castrated male rabbit, amusing to my better half I'm sure, but I didn't know about that meaning when I had written that, and I obviously not a woman who speaks any French, other than just a few words I've picked up over the years.

I think that the girls are fun, but also teens, and they all have to grow into this with an open mind. I like the hating the house, not the people in the house mentality, something I think psychologists might call transference, or so I saw on TV once. The next chapter explains this hating the house thing just a bit better I think.

The escaping from her potentially boring life at home is a real thing, and I can't blame her in this, just as I can't blame her and the other's parents for working out how to get an empty nest just a few years sooner that normal.

I also feel that it's easier to really let go when somebody else has your back, and is responsible for the mess they've gotten you into. I could also see Jackie playing stripper one time on a dare, perhaps even at the billboard's porn palace. It's something I've always wanted to do myself, but I don't have near the courage to do so publicly, but in this story's context, doing so far from home and friends could be an acceptable risk.

I am curious as to the hot fantasy associated with Dumped On The Side Of The Road; is this something I could write into another chapter of that series? I think there still might be a dare jar someplace, and we could put almost any dare in there, as well as having somebody else join up with the girls for fun. If you're interested it might be fun to put your ideas into that story, I have done this before with character names and I think it's a fun distraction as we can name the characters anything we like.

Just a thought, let me know what you think, Jackie.

[teanndaorsa]

And part 18...

[feline]

I might have had quite a bit to say...


I am going to write this as I read the story, as normal.  Got to say, really looking forward to this!  You have me all a quiver with excitement and anticipation

The hospital, ah such fond memories!  The tone, the feeling and nature of this fascinates me.  Jackie is asking for this treatment, she is encouraging her friends, and making sure that they know she is still very much looking forward to and very much still into such treatment and games.  I do like and enjoy this, I feel it matters and is important, since with the contract being signed and “going live” it is tempting to stop thinking of this in terms of their friendship, but that is still so important, so much at the very heart and core of all of this, so much a part of what makes this what it is, and makes it work as it does.

Then again, we are now in a different place, we are back home, with parents on hand, so things are going to feel so very different, and to some degree also have to be quite different.  So reminding her friends that this is still something she wants and is something she is comfortable with, even this close to home, matters and is important

Having said all of this, the comment about the hospital having a certain feel really gets my interest, but we are left hanging, and wondering how long we have to wait to find out more about this feel and the implications of it.  Still, the hospital holds a fond place in my heart, so I do hope to see more of it now and then, as you well know

And now the focus on the contract, which does loom rather large on the horizon.  Yes, a lot of the “weight”, in the sense of having to dream up and implement things, now rests on the shoulders of your friends, but at the same time, the weight of complying with, frankly, who knows what, rests entirely on your shoulders.  How creative and wicked your friends can be, without any oversight from parents does remain to be seen, but the early signs are clearly very good indeed!

The comment about the years of conditioning, leading to this point, is fascinating, and does a good job of reminding us that this very extreme situation really did not spring forward fully formed, but instead has a long and very important history and background.

The “back home at home they weren't exactly measuring my childhood bedroom for alterations” paragraph, I actually had to go and read this 2 or 3 times before I realised you were talking about her parents reaction and behaviour in all of this.  My mind was still on her friends, with visions of her friends measuring her childhood room for conversion into a dungeon cell

Having said that, the talk of the types of mischief you got up to when your parents were away is probably not the sort of mischief one normally has to worry about from a group of teenage girls!  As for parents getting up to mischief, well, why not?  Its not as if fun and an interest in mischief suddenly up and disappears one day

The consideration of what the families will be doing, and how the value of the gift of the summer house will be paid for does make me smile.  After all, there is the general thought and observation that kinky tendencies have a tendency to run in families   At the same time, I do wonder how big a gift letting the girls use the summer house is seen as?  If the house is largely unused most of the year, as it feels, then it is a smaller gift in the families eyes than it might otherwise seem.  Not that it is a small gift at all, but not quite on the same scale as it might otherwise seem.

I was wondering how the time at home would be discussed, it turns out basically skipped over, then again, we don’t have the time or freedom to really move things forward here.  A part of me wants to know more about what could have, or did happen, but I suspect it was quite a bit of not a lot.  Plus, there are all the hints about what has been prepared, I want to know!

*giggles* how to explain the lack of space for her clothes, then again, she does need a few, just not that many, and hardly a full or fashionable wardrobe!  Not that we want to be explaining this to widely now do we? *smirk*

Now that is interesting...  is this secret, being the target of a grand prank, just a general comment about the contract, or a fairly major heads up that something major is coming this way?  I am going with a warning of something major, after all, most readers won’t have followed the forum conversation about all of this, or paid attention to the thanks at the top of the story, that also suggests something significant has been worked out.

The collar is back, that should be a familiar and reassuring feeling.  Yes, it would have left marks, but the planed lie about the tattoo is much more interesting.  Actually a very good excuse and justification, but at the same time a strangely accurate, if lopsided, take on events

Ramping back up again, the journey is good, since it gives everyone some rather useful time and space to shift mental perspective on our slave girl, and their relationships.  The almost mysterious comments about the summer house though, and the two of you becoming one...  I am tempted to start from the point of view that it is just a house, the location of your slavery, but this makes it feel much more, something much grander and more complex...  I feel some serious weight developing here...  most curious and very interesting!

*giggles* so taken with her fantasies and memories of the billboard and your brief, if powerful, experience here on the way down.  Of course now you have explained exactly what you were dreaming, and perhaps even lusting after...  well, clearly your friends need all the help they can get seeing you as a sexual submissive and object of male sexual use...  since thoughts like that would never have crossed their minds otherwise...  *evil smirking*  Then again, and having said all of that, how keen are they on sharing you with men, or more to the point, having men focus more on the naked slave than the glamorous and beautiful slave owners...  time will tell.

Smirk, I do love Tracy’s logical response to the two fantasy options.  Of course, there is nothing quite like firmly and directly saying “no, never” to your owners, especially over something so “simple”, to them, as showing off their slave girl in public...  I doubt this defiance, since that I suspect is exactly how this will be perceived, is likely to go down all that well with them.

And there goes Tracy, pointing out how unwise it is to go telling her owners what they can and cannot do with her...  bless her!

The third wheel comment fits nicely, but also does a good job of showing the closeness and togetherness of her friends, and reminding us of the nature of this triangle relationship.

*smirk* yes, well, it is SO reassuring that her two friends are not being endlessly chased by boys.  They are clearly such “pure” and “good” daughters, obviously a real honour to the family, girls to be held up as shining examples of how everyone should strive to be...  slave owning terrors!

Ah, now my shy, innocent and sheltered nature is showing.  I find myself wondering if teenage boys not really being interested in or capable of showing a girl a proper good time is really just something from those days, or an ongoing issue.  I have some reasons to suspect it is more of an ongoing issue, but who am I really to say?  Still, a reminder that when a girl needs a good time she has to find other ways of getting her satisfaction...

Ah, wondering if the girls really are going to hold true to their threats, or is that promises, for how you are going to be treated and used once you all get to your new home...  plenty of hints to reassure us that the girls are more than ready to follow through!  You do make a good point though, you are going to have to practice before you are ready to be put up on the stage for the truckers and do your show!

Ah, and the other side, this I do feel is going to be a very real and very ongoing issue...  how many males are going to pay your pretty friends all that much attention when there is a naked slave girl around and potentially on offer?  I am not sure that the solution to this is clear yet, but sooner or later this problem is going to require a bit more attention.

Now that is interesting...  back to Sean, remembering when she was naked and VERY securely tied to his bench.  Yes, you teased him a lot, you were naked and fully “available” and “on offer”, but I would like to think that given you were there for a professional service, and no one actually offered you up as a sex object, that most people would have showed the same restraint and common decency.  I know, I am a romantic at heart

Now that is even more interesting, and screams of something to be explored later, the need to right the wrong you did to Sean.  As memory serves Sean has already said what he wanted as follow up, and it wasn’t actually a slave girl offered up on a plate, but it does remain to be seen if he would be interested in a naked slave girl or not...  not fair to assume he would be, but it doesn’t seem so unreasonable to ask.  How to get your friends on board with this point of view though?  Being fairly rich, coming from money, to what degree, if at all, do they consider those they just pay for a service?  Plus they didn’t have the quality time you had with Sean, they just dropped you off and left after all.

Half an hour out and it is time, something else they have discussed in “secret”.  I actually like this for more than the obvious and immediate wickedness of the moment and the action of making her strip.  It is a nice reminder that a lot has to happen in the background, between her owners, their work and responsibility in all of this, its not just reaping the rewards of having a naked slave girl after all

Half an hour out by car seems to far to make her run that distance, but they are letting her keep her shoes...  time to find out.

Now that is an interesting, and remarkably adult thought and question - the one if Jackie’s parents feared her relationship with her friends was toxic.  I don’t think I really have any basis for forming an answer, but on one paw her friends are actually very loving and supportive, in their own way.  They do use and manipulate, but they also love and treasure...  so I find myself quite on the fence about this, but the decisions have been made and set in motion, so in a sense it doesn’t matter.  Still, it is an interesting piece of context and background to all of this.

The truck, the memories of that night, becoming more timid around Dana to not make her angry, remembering previous conversations here, I am suddenly thinking “conditioned behaviour”, a thought that would not normally be anywhere so clear or obvious to me.  Interesting...

A surprise...  oooHHHHHH!  *excited bounces*

Now that is a properly wise observation, one I sort of wish more people recognised.  Being in charge doesn’t mean you don’t make mistakes, but it does make you responsible for sorting out afterwards.

Yes, helpful advice about clean underwear *rolls eyes*  the emotional rollercoaster is in full swing, but no wonder really, given all of the uncertanties about this, and the very real concerns about how your friends are going to feel and respond to the very situations they set in action and bring about!

Interesting, the way Dennis is speaking about her, but then again, he has spent how many weeks laying the ground work for her to be much more of an “it” than a “she” I suspect...

Indeed, how to move back and forward between being a student and being a slave.  Perhaps just a slave ordered to study and learn?  It is a simple enough start point that could well help.

Dana is surprisingly deferential towards Dennis here, and yes, you are being bitchy and petty, but given that this is clearly something about you, and it is being done right in front of you, while also keeping you literally in the dark about it, thats not really a surprise.  Plus you are hardly back and settled into your slave head space are you?

OK, this is starting to make more sense, a road test, and to stop the maid wandering off, while still being totally mysterious and really getting into her head at the same time!  Evil and inspired!

LOL, lazy privileged asses!  Brilliant!  But yes, also, this does suggest that for all of the, quite unknown at the moment, amount of work that Dennis has done on this project, he isn’t really on the same page as the girls, at least not yet.

Gags, keeping slaves safe from themselves for many years now, see how kind they were?!

Yes, you really haven’t had a lot of man attention of late, or any sexual attention for that matter, but that denial has been going round.  As for rewarding Gregory for enslaving you, well of course!  It isn’t as if he just passed you a plate at dinner, he had to put together a coherent and very serious, and totally custom, legal document, and help to make sure you were properly converted from a free woman to property!  Such quality work deserves a proper reward after all.

I do wonder if Dennis “needed” to come up behind her like this, but until we know the details, it doesn’t seem unreasonable.  Still, it is offering his crotch up for her bound hands, and his reaction is quite normal and to be expected under the circumstances.  But still, only just arrived and already we need to wonder how her friends will react to men responding so well to their naked maid...

Nods, interesting now you can properly see Dennis.  I suspect a lot of his mixed reaction is to do with the move from an intellectual puzzle / general task to the reality of a naked and chained up “slave” attached to his construction.  This does rather change the feeling and nature of the experience doesn’t it?!  Its no longer just a piece of mechanics, but now it has actual real world implications on a real person, and you are part of this!

A real sprinkler system is actually very good, from a safety point of view, but the fact that all of the families, the parents, contributed to the cost of this...  well, this constant restraint device, just makes it feel all the more...  i am not sure what word I want, perhaps intrusive is a good one?  The idea that her parents put in a good piece of the price of keeping her a total prisoner...  amazing thought!

Nods, it does feel like we are seeing a new side of her friends, and more than that, the cost, complexity and work that went into this system is simply staggering!  At this point any vague thoughts about them not taking this seriously, about them not taking full, complete and ongoing use, almost to the point of abuse, of the slavery have been wiped away.  Her friends are going all in, full bore here!

*snort* well you did just spring this on her, what do you expect her to say?  Stunned silence seems very much like the right and expected result.

A second car on the track?  I am also curious.  A spare makes a bit of sense, but somehow I would not expect it to be mounted like that, but it could well be.  Still, somehow it suggests something else, but at the moment I don’t have any idea what or why.  But yes, mind boggling is very much the right response to the work that went into all of this!

There I was thinking “no rush to bring in slaves clothes” when you go and drop a whole new level of control, forward planning and cunning on us!  Could her entire wardrobe have been planned out with this restraint system factored in in advance?  Yes, but only if her friends are massively and completely into keeping on top of the details, and really making good use of their slave, and totally dominating her in so MANY different ways!

The padlock on the track, such a simple way of locking off areas she isn’t supposed to access or explore yet.

We are a solid step forward from not seeing her clothes come into the house, with even the two items that came in on her disappearing!

Then though, they just go off and leave her with Dennis...  has Dennis been given guidance as to what is allowed and expected?  Are they just trusting in his judgement?  Now I have to wait who knows how long to find out and to see more of this!!!  AAAAGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

[T.H.]

Hello Everybody,

First and foremost thank you for this amazing story. It's the only teenagedrama in ten years that captured my attention.
I'm reading your stories since years and well today dumb me registered for the first time that there was a feedback forum. So yeah... it's fitting that my first comment is relative to "My summer of dares".

So yeah... sorry for being 6 years late to the party.

English isn't my first language. (German > French > Dutch > English), so I'll keep my comment somewhat short because the fact that I can't write out my thoughts due to a limited vucabullary tends to drive me crazy. Maybe I'll add some more smaller comments over the following days and weeks.

My first piece of feedback to part 18 is, that it had me antsy and somewhat on the edge of the seat. I feel a storm coming soon.
I had the impression that one of Jacky's needs (feeling loved and cared for) isn't fulfilled, that she's getting frustrated but is unable to communicate efficiently.
The insight to her thoughts was very reveiling to me. I'm a grumpy old dom, I did my fair share of frustrating my sub (and had later to deal with the fallout). With more experience, I'm now able to discern the early state of my sub's frustration, but I've seen this situations always from the outside. I feel that your story gave me some very valuable insights in what's going on in the sub's head... the confusion, the turmoil, the frustration. I really think that I'm understanding a littlebit better now...

Our trio is living through a mutual breakdown of communication. First Dana couldn't (of didn't want to) communicate her grievance's to her slave and lashed out. (For that she deserves a serious tongue lashing from someone.) Now it's Jacky that's unable to communicate about her grievances.

Well... in my experience, cute little subbies who are feeling that her needs aren't met (it doesn't really matter if it is structure, discipline, caring, love...) start to communicate. Or they do it verbally like adults (that would be out of character for young Jacky) or they start communicating 'alternativly' by becomming mouthy, bratty, antsy... or by tacitly opting out (slacking, only going through the motions). I somewhat doubt that our inexperienced dommes would know how to handle a lashing out Jacky. They would need to go on instinct - maybe they are lucky, maybe they are not. Some BDSM-relationships last, some don't.

In my experience, a mutual breakdown of the 'longterm' communication is the best way to get you some serious heartache, when things fall apart.

About 'Jaqueline D. Lapin', you had me grinning there. The traduction was to the point.

About Dennis persuing Jacky: of course he does. A dominant pursues submissives not dommes. It's what we do, it's what we are. It's like being surprised that the straight guy goes for the girl and not for the two gorgeous blokes. That has nothing to do with males in general wanting pliable women. Dominant is a sexual orientation, not a livestyle. We are born this way it doesn't change. I've tried as my wife tried not to be a submissive. It - doesn't - work. :-)
In my eyes the dommes just don't stand a chance in hell. For a dominant a submissive is in 99% of the cases more interesting then a domme, looks don't matter, money doesn't matter. It's a little bit like physics. Dom and Sub attract each other. Two pure dominants, that's mostly really complicated if it works at all.

Seeing the shortage of Subs and the affluence of Doms in the setting I wouldn't even be surprised if gradually another dynamism would ensue: Everybody 'competing' for Jacky's attention. Maybe by intensifying her experience - If Jacky would be so delighted about this, I can't say.

These were my 5 cents for today.

[jackierabbit1]

Thank you Feline, as always, for such thought provoking words. I possibly wasn't as clear as I should have been on who was proverbially measuring my alter ego's room for alterations, or almost helping her pack, but I wanted to demonstrate that Jackie's parents were almost eager for her to get on with her own life. I personally can't read the word "parents" in an erotic story though, it's just something very non-sexy to me, so I try to use any other word to denote parents, like, for instance "folks."

Anyway, that being said, what are your thoughts on having Jackie's "folks" paying off the continuing debt of having Jackie stay at the summer house for college? I could imaging Tracy's folks simply writing a check every month, but Jackie's might not be able to write that check. Could Dana's folks take it in trade maybe, and would this be sexy in the context of an erotic story?

Dana's folks might need some handyman type stuff done around the house, snow shoveling and lawn care come to mind, now that the boys aren't home, as do maid services. Could they cater and serve an empty nest party at Dana's big house, submitting to their more wealthy neighbors as repayment, in uniform maybe? Could it be as suggested, that kink and submission runs in Jackie's family, and this the real reason that Dana's folks made this generous offer? Maybe one of Jackie's folks is the object of hidden lust, and this an elaborate plot to have what somebody shouldn't want? Maybe I should just give them names, then I wouldn't have to say parents, or folks, or whatever?

I don't know if any of this would be sexy though, but it would be a fun plot twist, as in "meanwhile, while Jackie is cleaning house, somebody else back home is on his or her knees, or back, saying thank you in their own humble way."

I also think Dennis has built something incredible, but now he has a "what now?" kind of moment. As T.H. points out, there is a surplus of dominant personalities here, and one "in demand" submissive, so Jackie will be the hot commodity going forward.

The second car on the pipes I only intended to replace the first, incase it got worn out, thinking to demonstrate the level of foerthought that went into the engineering of this project. I suppose we could always hang a second house slave on the pipes, or hang Jackie by her wrists or ankles and slide her someplace as punishment though, or even for easy use.

In any event, thank you again for your kind words, Jackie.

[jackierabbit1]

Thank you T.H. and welcome to the party. I am humbled by your compliments, and also humbled that this is your first post here. I like this part of writing, the feedback part, almost as much as the writing part; it's fun to see how others see these stories. That being said, I have taken your observations to heart, Jackie is the lone submissive here, and this is the 1970's as in bake some cookies and when is dinner? So she is a hot commodity here, and the girls may need the ego boost from putting her in her place.

Dennis got tag teamed by Dana and Tracy once, more as an ego thing on his part (can I take care of two girls at the same time?) rather than desire, but your thoughts on doms not attracted to doms is valid. Jackie is needy, perhaps she is looking for the disipline and rules she never had growing up, Dana and Tracy providing this in an odd sort of way, and the needy Jackie latching onto this.

The Lapin sirname was one I made up, but when I had I thought it was simpy "rabbit" in French, not "castrated rabbit" but it is funny. If I write into the story that Jackie's parents, or folks, are kniky too, and this is where she got it from, in part; it would make an especially ironic sirname for her possibly submissive dad. I hadn't planned this, and I don't even know that this would even be specifically "sexy," but it is ironic.

Anyway, I do need to figure out what I am going to do with Dennis going forward, I literally left Jackie almost hanging there and unwrapped for him, but will he take the bait, or want her more on his own terms, and not as a one time gift given by the girls? If the girls give Jackie to Dennis, they will, by implication, have the ability to "ungive" her as well, and the dom Dennis might not like that.

As far as the girls are concerned, they are teens, privlaged teens in the case of Dana and Tracy, so we have to make some allowances. Dana wasn't behaving like someone "in-charge" that particular night, but she will learn, likely at Jackie's expense though.

Thank you again for the kind words, and welcome, Jackie.

[T.H.]

Hey Jacky,

About the idea of kinky parents. It's your story and all... I just want to warn you to be careful about making the same "mistake" as a lot of authors do, where everybody, every named and unnamed character, mommy, daddy, neighbours, the mailman and their grandmas are somewhat kinky and into the scene. I mean, I understand that a lot of people in the scene are tired to be ethernally in the minority and it would be fun having more likeminded people around. But if you want create colonies of kinksters, why not depicting a specialized gated community for BDSM-people?

BDSM-open people are a minority. Having whole colonies of kinksters in a story can stretch the suspense of disbelief to a breaking point and beyond.

Let's summarise: We have clique of 3 girls who are into it. By happenstance their neighbor of their summerhouse shares the same kink (petplay). Okay... I'll buy that. These things happen.
Some of his buddies are at least open to share in the fun. Well they are young men, testosterone and stuff...

But now the probabilities of having even more people into this stuff are starting to run very low.

[feline]

T.H., nice to see you, you make very interesting points, it is nice to see this from another perspective.  And your English is very good for a 4th language!

For the story, if I wasn't splitting my attention quite so much, and read slightly further before commenting, then it would have been a lot clearer who was looking to make possible changes to her childhood room, so while the story wasn't 100% clear, it was far from unclear.  But I didn't want to read to far ahead before getting the various thoughts and reactions I was having down on paper for you.

Jackie, my first thought on reading your question about payment for Jackie's portion of the bills was to bring Jackie along in her capacity as a sexy maid during the holiday seasons.  However this was just a first instinct, and as I considered it, I was not sure how well this would work, or how much sense it would make.

Already we have the looming situation of her friends brothers discovering that she is kept as a naked slave, and the complications and implications of that discovery.  So in that sense her status as a maid is going to become an open secret in the family, but where the lines get drawn with the whole "its a naked girl, I want" we don't yet know.  So far the only real line is that sex is off limits, but this still leaves our slave available for providing oral pleasure, as has already happened once.

Having an unpaid maid present in her friends houses over the holiday seasons is going to count for something, cost wise, and also you can argue that her friends parents would pay all of the costs of the summer house, and more, quite happily to put their precious daughters through college.  Dana and Tracy are going to view this as their right, I am fairly sure.  I am tempted to say that the cost implications should be added to their leverage over Jackie, but given the contract and the fact that this is actually what Jackie wants and is looking for, this is rather pointless, and in a sense distracts from the heart of their power dynamic, focussing more on "money" and less on their relationships with each other.

Arguably you have opened the door to the question of what all three sets of folks will do now that the troublesome girls are off at college, with Jackie's speculation on this, but that is a long way from suggesting anything kinky.  Before reading T.H.'s very good point about this I was actually considering the question more from a point of focus.

At the moment we have a small, if slowly growing, cast of characters at the college.  If you wanted to do more than lightly touch on what is happening at "home" then you are going to be adding in several more characters to keep track of, and how much attention would they get?  Would it help or hinder?

From an emotional point of view, from a "how my tummy feels" point of view, the idea of Jackie's folks being asked to contribute to the running costs of Jackie's slavery is very appealing and powerful, but there are lots of ways of paying.  I am currently left considering, and leaning towards thoughts about how different types of skills and labour are valued very differently.  Blue collar skills are seen as much "better", higher status and pay, but are they actually more skilful and impactful?  A side issue from the stories point of view, but mechanical skills, perhaps owning a garage, could well fit well into Jackie's folks lifestyle, and this could provide a way for them to provide various "low value" services, a parallel of sorts with Jackie, while also showing off the real difference, where her folks contributions are negotiated, reasonable, on their terms, while Jackie's services are demanded, taken and entirely unreasonable, and without her having any say in them.

The general points about Jackie's headspace, her being in demand from several different people, and also the communication problems are all well made.  T.H. you have pointed this out very clearly, pinpointing something that has been sort of bothering me for a little bit.  Jackie is very aware of the problem with Dana's reaction before they went "home", but this has yet to be resolved, and is currently an issue that is just waiting to rear its head once more.

As for payment for all of Dennis's hard work, and very skilled work, while he is a male, how accepting is he going to be of taking advantage of a captive?  It's clear from his reaction that already he is having some problems / concerns over the reality of keeping Jackie chained up all the time, even though he was the main source of this ability.  Does he have the maturity to worry about her consent?  We don't want to scare him off, but he really isn't coming across as relaxed and comfortable here.

[jackierabbit1]

I have something in mind that the two of you will, I think, like. Bringing parents, "folks" into this any more than I have (by having them fund the plumbing project) kind of bothered me at one level to be honest, and I think I might leave all three sets just a bit ignorant on what their little darlings are up to so far from home. In their world the girls are just good friends, and their focus is to get their children an education, while keeping them "safe" from any boys that might come along.

If and when the brothers discover their sisters' kink, they will be disenclined to share it back home, but rather use it personally for blackmail type motivation. The "I'll tell the folks" threat left hanging as a last resort...

Thank you again for the thoughts, I think this makes for a better overall story, Jackie.

[drulema]

Jackie, my focus is on the submissive who has a diary full of kinky fantasies that have started to materialize. Dana & Tracy have enjoyed the little things they have had Jackie do and have been learning how deep her submissiveness runs and have taken control of her via the tattoo and contract. Jackie has drifted into subspace several times and though she has verbally but lightly put her foot down on several issues, she has quickly reverted back to her submissive side which by now she wears like a tightly wrapped cloak around her. Being naked and alone with Dennis at this point or probably any point in the story is not something she would object to. If Dennis has any qualms about having Jackie orally pleasure him, Jackie will instinctively take the lead. Not topping from the bottom, but doing what her submissive persona tells her she is to do. Any male, no matter their age, would stand there and watch as this naked, willing, young girl performs orally on him. Her submissiveness at this point doesn't require any thought of the contract or tattoo; she is operating on auto pilot. Will she balk at being ordered to service more than one male at a time, I'm sure she will, but inside her mind she will provide the logical reasons why she should do it, would do it and finally submit to doing it. This is where i see Jackie at right now. All along, things have been " a kinky thing to think of herself doing" to "a kinky thing I want to do". Now she is at "yes, I'll do that".

[jackierabbit1]

You bring up a good point drulema, about Dennis and his desires. I had him as a "happy go lucky" character at first, but that was in a group, and I wanted to give him some more depth as a character, make him just a bit more than horemones and sneakers. He's one on one with my alter ego now, and he can be just a bit more himself, and while he'd love to do something with the stripped and available Jackie, he might not like being expected to perform on command for the girls, like he had when he got tag teamed by them. Perhaps he has some regrets about that, as in that didn't go quite like he thought it might? Perhaps he even realized that the girls had used him at some point, and perhaps he's feeling like that again, with being coaxed into building this elaborate restraint device to keep my alter ego from wandering off a second time?

In my mind he's an alpha, but a reluctant alpha; and while just a few years older than the girls, he's still young and learning what personally makes him tick. I like stories with impossibly put together alpha characters, but in reality I think it takes time to "grow" such a character, and Dennis is more in the beginning stages of this. Greg, at the same time, should be way more confident than he appears, being a college professor and all that. I'm not a teacher, but I can almost imaging the ego boost from having a whole class full of young adults looking up to you, not only as in a position of authority and knowledge, but in looking up "at" you standing at the head of the classroom.

Greg has had a shock recently to his little world though, enough of one that he's given away his pet accessories to the girls, but he's still willing to mentor them, meaning that he's still "into" it, into the kink in some measure, but that he's given up on finding a willing playmate of his own. He's a young college professor though, so this "mentoring" probably comes naturally to him. My alter ego complicates all that obviously, making him second guess himself, and as a result Greg was likely conflicted on doing the slave contract at all, but he did it anyway, with a suggestive smile on his face at first. Did he become reluctant at some point too?

Maybe if, or when Greg aquires another human pet, maybe it will be with a contract this time? Perhaps in this way the girls have taught HIM something, teaching the teacher, so to speak. Or, maybe Greg has really given up on a pet of his own, thinking a maid like Jackie might be a more practical investment?

Just some thoughts on the next chapter or two, and I very much appreciate seeing this from your point of view, Jackie.