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Re: My Summer Of Dares by Jackie Rabbit
« Reply #120 on: February 15, 2024, 06:15:37 pm »
Dear Jackie,
I only came across the story through the current chapter. Since many things were unclear to me, I searched for the original story and read all 20 parts in one go.

Wow, what a story! Not just a sequence of action, but with plenty of room for the development of the protagonists and their feelings. With lots of BDSM, eroticism, arguments and dramatic twists.  Just the way I like it. As someone has already written, one of the best stories on Gromet's Plaza!

What fascinates me the most is that the author is a woman. Not a male fantasy with too much testosterone, but really from a woman's point of view!  This gives the story a deep credibility.
The protagonist is also called Jackie. Is the story, at least to some extent, autobiographical, or is it at least based on such desires?

I'm already looking forward to the next chapter next year and can hardly wait :-)


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« Reply #121 on: February 15, 2024, 09:44:36 pm »
Great to have this story continuing and the atmosphere seems much more fun loving and positive. 

Jackie needs love and attention and I’m glad that she is allowed develop her relationship with Denis (winks and all). 

18 year old girls would hug each other every day and because Jackie’s dress code, kink, bondage and household chores are accepted as normal, I would hope that the girls hug, hi five, giggle and have fun EVERY day.  Keeping her as a slave is all well and good, but she does need love, attention and care.   It’s good that they are making sure to reassure her that they are not displeased with her in the slightest.  This might remind us that while this is a serious game, it's still a game, still fun (your words).

I liked the invitation to set a plate for herself at the table.  I liked the confirmation that Tracy petitions for easier treatment of Jackie.  I liked that her chained stay outdoors was limited to half hour in temperatures above freezing!

AT LAST the cage is padlocked – that’s what cages are for!

Giving Jackie Sundays off would be good and I would like to see Tracy chained and collared as part of the maid’s duty.  Dana has won two wagers and I hope that her luck will run out.  If she loses the next wager, then precedent would state that Dana would be naked, collared and chained as a maid for a day!!!  Maybe she would gain a better understanding of Jackie’s predicament if that happened!!!

Tracy rubbed Jackie's naked back and head just like one would a real dog looking for some affection. Yes - we all noted that the girls shared a look which Jackie caught!!!

At some point, I would love to see a friendly and open conversation between Dana and Jackie where  Dana genuinely asks Jackie if she is still ok with their game.  This is reasonable as any D type will always check in with their sub. 

Last summer, I experienced three REAL summer house events which were interesting.  Firstly the postman walked right into the house with a parcel that was too large for the post-box at the gate.  Imagine if Tracy was caught naked.  Secondly the electricity company arrived to inspect the outdoors lines – imagine if Jackie was clearing up naked by the lakeside – she would have to hide outdoors for over an hour.  The third event could prove to be the most important.  An elderly lady neighbor arrived with an apple pie to welcome us back for the summer.  Imagine if this lady lived in the next house by the lake and is a friend of Dana’s mum.   After a phone call to Dana’s mum, she learns that the girls are living in the house an decides to call with an apple pie.  The consequences of a person who speaks directly to Dana’s family discovering a naked chained slave would result in the girls losing the house and everything else.  Dana may panic and change the rules to avoid this.   In panic mode she may insist on closed blinds/curtains, clothes for the maid (it’s getting cold anyway), the removal of the chain, more time locked in the cage, asking Denis to install some kind of alarm on the pathway and more!

This story is different and better than all others in this forum because of the deep friendship and fun between three 18 year old best friends and I can’t wait for the next episode.

One question - you said that you have a definite conclusion in mind for the story.   Does this mean that we will learn how the girls developed in their lives with marriages, careers, family etc.  That would be great.

Mark

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Re: My Summer Of Dares by Jackie Rabbit
« Reply #122 on: February 16, 2024, 08:37:38 am »
What else is going through my mind:
My daughter is 22 years old and she moved out when she was 19. At that time she wasn't nearly as mature as the three girls in the story are. And she still needs my help sometimes: with contracts, trouble with the phone company and so on.

In my experience, teenagers that age might see past the next 2, 3 years. but to commit to a slave contract for 5 years, even beyond college, is extraordinary.

But everything is written so convincingly that even these doubts become secondary. And the love of the three will carry them through all difficulties.

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« Reply #123 on: February 17, 2024, 10:38:24 am »
Thank you Feline, this took me some time because I did a total rewrite to an almost finished chapter; not liking the direction I had inadvertently taken things. I think Dennis is a complicated character, maybe not really knowing what he wants, but who could blame him with such options on his human menu?

 I also think my 1970's alter ego may have been conditioned to this life of servitude by friends and family, as in traditional family units back then had the wife home raising the kids and managing the household, while the husband earned the paycheck. Was her parent's attitude one of "why bother?" with higher education, or her mother's one of "get an education so that your not permanently hitched to any man?" Perhaps her own mother wasn't happy with her own lot in life, and she wanted her daughter to have some other options for herself; which would have been very forward thinking for the time period.

Perhaps the parents involved in this adventure hadn't corrected the girls opportunistic use of their friend because they didn't see it as abnormal, or maybe didn't see it at all? As for Dana and Tracy, I think they and their parents see others serving their daughters as normal and expected, being of the somewhat wealthy class themselves, so to be fair to the girls maybe this is normal and expected.

I myself have, at times, felt chained to the house, so I thought my alter ego should as well, although in her case quite literally. The dog on the forbidden furniture was just too fun not to include, as was my alter ego shooting herself in the proverbial foot with her early dog character, guaranteeing her a ride both ways to and from the show caged and nearly naked. Dana and Tracy are going to do much the same, as they expect a first place finish, not their per merely going through the motions. I perhaps expect some unique spectators to be in attendance, maybe an old girlfriend with interest in the lifestyle, or even somebody from the college. Dana and Tracy will draw attention dressed and looking as they do, and anybody who recognizes them will surely be looking for their side-kick, so for my alter ego anonymity will be impossible.

As far as Tracy losing her bet to Dana, perhaps Dana wants a bit more submission from her lover, just to remind her who the top dog is. Does this end up being playful between the two, or open Tracy up to some other options?

I also think my alter ego being comfortable in her skin, outside, will show, will be noticed by the judges. Tracy's hesitation at actually going out of the front door nude is most natural, at least for me. I've done some fun self-bondage adventures early on a Saturday morning, like first light early; stripping down in my car and cuffing myself up for the ordeal of finding the earlier hidden keys to get back inside my car, and back into my clothes. It's wild for me, this feeling of being abandoned someplace like that, even self-abandoned, but the feeling you get when slamming your car door, locking your clothes and keys in the car, the commitment in that; just WOW!

So for Tracy, downstairs and nude, while still inside the summerhouse, might still feel like home, even with Dennis there, but step outside and it's a whole new game, at least to me.

As far as being greeted by a dog when the girls got home from their human pursuits, perhaps not what was expected, or perhaps a secondary bet yet to be disclosed.

I'm looking forward to the dog show to be honest, it's ripe for all sorts of new experiences and interactions...

Thank you again for your view of this, I know I've said this before, but it really helps me to write better, Jackie.

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« Reply #124 on: February 17, 2024, 11:22:17 am »
Thank you John, that is high praise as there are many wonderful stories here at the Plaza. As far as being autobiographical, I've been fortunate to have done some wild things when I was younger, and I was also fortunate to have survived them unharmed. That part wasn't exactly an accident, but in a risk vs reward mindset not always well thought out either.

 So, being playfully stripped and enslaved by some teenaged girlfriends during a sleepover, I've done that, it was playful childish fun. Doing some fun, less than fully clothed dares and adventures, I've done that too, again innocent fun, nothing really sexual in that. I don't want to say how old we were, but you get the idea, innocent fun for all.

In an alternate universe, yeah I'd like to have some of my alter ego's experiences, but I also like this life that we've built, so visiting these adventures like this is the safest way to experience them now, and sharing them here is fun; so I kind of hope somebody gets to enjoy that too...

Now, as far as the real things that I've actually done with my boyfriend, now husband, and some select others, that was wild, like what was I thinking wild. There was just something about getting a few like minded people together, friends, the egging on that takes place. So, as a result, I've done some things that I maybe don't fully regret, but I also see no need for a repeat either. Maybe it's frontal lobe maturity, or just bored teens with motive and opportunity, and even raging and curious hormones; who knows?

As far as the teens 1970's maturity, in my humble opinion in the 70's, and maybe even the 80's, a eighteen year old was an adult, or at least most were. These days there seems to be an extended adolescences, maybe it's economic in nature, or what we as parents are doing that's different than what our parents did, again, who knows? In the story Dana's folks are paying the electricity bill, the tax bill, and even the oil bill, so while they are somewhat on their own, there still is a safety net of sorts. So, the illusion of independence so as to gently grow into maturity, without the total burden.

This as well takes place during Vietnam, so there were plenty of teenagers that had to grow up way too fast for that. Keeping that in mind, I could see Dana and Tracy's parents wanting to keep their brothers in the education system and away from that, although I don't mean to be pro or con on that specifically, it's just a fictional story element.

Thank you again, Jackie.

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« Reply #125 on: February 17, 2024, 12:43:09 pm »
Thank you Mark, and yes I do have a conclusion in mind, but one that also allows for a revisit down the road. I also have it in mind that Dana's brother will pop in on the girls at the parent's request, with a phone call first though, otherwise that might get a bit creepy. He doesn't want to be perving on his sister obviously, but perhaps her two friends have been lusted after from afar, but as in too young back then and not really approachable. They're legal adults now though, just a few years younger that he is, but familiar too. Were there friendly smiles and soft words from the brother towards Jackie the few times the two interacted back then, my alter ego reevaluating those now once his interest is revealed?

 He's a young man with some character and depth, and he's not wanting to really catch his sister (who has matured into a stunning and voluptuous young woman) anything but fully dressed. When to treat the child as an adult though? "When her actions and maturity demand such" is the obvious answer...

Sibling rivalry aside, he maybe doesn't want to see her fail either, but his 1970's sensibilities might not allow for Dana's intimacy with another woman, so the girls might have to cool it while he was around, unless he can be distracted with another. Does he catch my alter ego on the house chain-run anyway, and then read the contract left hanging on the wall in plain sight, maybe seeing the trophy that was won as well, with the owners of record and the date won.

What does he do when he discovers this, if he discovers this?

Was the brothers job really to chase away any male suitors, just like when Dana was younger and living at home, the unintended consequence of that being a sister who desires her friend first; this the very definition of safe sex, even before prolific STD's. I've read that your first taste of love is the best taste of love, and if that's so, Dana might have some trouble developing other tastes more in tune with her parent's desires. Maybe this is the real reason why the three are living together so far from home, my Jackie alter ego theoretically keeping them out of trouble. Maybe the girls grow out of their lust for each other though, or maybe they just find easily bent husbands at college that check that particular box for them.

I like your possible scenarios of accidental discovery, but I don't think any of the parents will want to go backwards by having their youngest children move back into the proverbial nest in failure. So sending a neighbor to snoop, to learn secrets best kept in the family, might not happen.

Thank you very much, I always get such wonderful ideas from these interactions, Jackie.

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« Reply #126 on: February 19, 2024, 06:22:03 pm »
The comments here about maturity interest me, and make me smile.  It doesn't take much looking back at history to know that people were considered adults at 16, or younger, for many years.  The question of how adult or mature people are at any age is very open ended, but it does seem that in western English speaking countries, people are often not that mature or self reliant at 18 or so these days.  Were they more so before?  This story is set quite a few years ago, when parents probably expected more from their children by this age.

But there is a whole pile of different answers to find here, for different groups, ages, locations, etc.  Also though this is fantasy, even if it feel very real, believable and realistic.

The slavery contract is, I am happy to accept, far to extreme and one sided to be signed and accepted.  BUT, I have certainly met people at this age, and several years older, who would more than happily offer up and sign such a contract, all caught up in the delight of it, without any real understanding of some of the longer term risks.  Remember that a lot of makes this work is the history and trust between these three.

Dennis does have a whole pile of options being presented to him, but I do enjoy the sense that he is mature and worldly enough to understand that there is more to look for than just physical pleasure with a woman, and that the interaction, connection, and having someone genuinely interested in what HE wants and needs actually matters a whole lot!  I struggle to see Dana and Tracy as really that interested in what Dennis wants or desires for himself :)

So looking forward to the dog show, and yes, Tracy comes across as VERY real and believable in her reaction to being naked and going outside.  Jackie in contrast has been actively trained and conditioned to find her nakedness, helplessness, exposure and down right objectification to be both natural and expected.  That IS going to show, and make quite the impression at the show :)

So much fun going on here to enjoy, savour and look forward to more of :)

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Re: My Summer Of Dares by Jackie Rabbit
« Reply #127 on: May 18, 2024, 08:48:17 pm »
Part 4 of Property of Dana and Tracy up tonight, enjoy!

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« Reply #128 on: May 29, 2024, 05:17:47 am »
Loving the story keep it up.

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« Reply #129 on: May 31, 2024, 09:12:13 am »
Thank you Kitsune, I very much enjoy these characters; they're a fun bunch that love each other. There needs to be some conflict to make it a good read I think, but nothing straight up evil I promise, more playful naughtiness I think.

Thank you again, Jackie.

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« Reply #130 on: June 24, 2024, 05:32:32 pm »
I think I remember well enough where part 3 left off, naked and secured in the cage, in the back of the van, off to the show, so I am going to dive right into part 4, since it has taken me quite a while to get here, and I am very much looking forward to seeing what happens next :)

Well...  that is some interesting imagery and word choices!  Jackie seems to be moving from thinking of herself as a slave to almost thinking more of herself as a pet...  she is right about being helpless and not knowing where she is, but in a sense, I think she is loosing track of just how helpless and at the mercy of "everyone" else she is all of her time at the house, naked and secured to the indoor run...  she really doesn't have much more safety or control there, but it is at a known location, she is not moving around or seeing strangers, so it is going to feel very different.

The decision to embrace her pet head space...  yes, it is trust on a MASSIVE scale, but I cannot help thinking back to the contract you presented them with, and signed without even wanting to read...  this is hardly the first time you have placed such total and all consuming trust into their hands, given yourself fully over to them...  of course you keep on doing this partly because they are your friends, they do look after you, keep you safe, and give you what you need and want.  Still, it is nice to see you consciously re-affirming this decision.

An interesting point though, are your friends looking for and expecting any resistance?  Surely somewhere in the back of their minds they are waiting for the step, the point, where you rebel and don't want to keep on being their good little slave and pet...  or are they just not thinking that deeply about this, and simply cannot, simply do not, imagine that this is possible?  Now I am wondering about this rather interesting question :)

Well, the noises now we have arrived speak to a LOT of people here!  Then we get the phrasing, a fun party for the humans...  with the clear subtext that you, as a pet, are not one of the humans.  Yes, this is your role, but I very much doubt that this is a state of mind that is shared by many of the other pets who are about to be put on show!  Yes, you are going into this with a STRONG advantage over your competition!

Yes, Dana really is being put on the spot, in a way here.  She is still very young in a lot of ways, even with all of her confidence and the strength her upbringing has given her, she is pushing her boundaries, and may not realise how much more skin you have in the game.  I wonder how exposed to this "game" she is feeling, since she has her family to consider and doesn't want them to learn about her little "games" now does she?

So Dennis is known here, and again, the dog considering the dog view and the human view of events as separate things...  fascinating.  I hadn't really remembered that Dennis had much exposure to all of this, while I do remember that the cage, outfit, etc, came from the other man, who's name I have forgotten.

Oooh, yes, could it be a trick, or a test, to see if the pet will answer and give their name?  I bet a lot of the pets do, even if they shouldn't.  Plus I also suspect several of them do only travel the last mile, if that, in the cage.

Well, yes, it is "silly" to think you are so much in dog mode, BUT, you did go running off on your own, and have a hole in your memory, from a pervious time as a dog, so actually your friends will have plenty of reason to accept that this really is what you are, how you are.  I do wonder what the others make of this, they are clearly seeing you are well into dog performance mode, but you cannot be the only one to play up to the role.

I would not expect the story of you being a run away pet to be known to these men, so I wonder if that is just something you are projecting.  On a different front, now I am wondering how is your tail attached?  I don't remember, and am to busy reading new stuff to look it up, but I do wonder, butt plug or just tied on?

*nods* yes, tattoos with ownership information is REALLY going to stand out, there is no way that is going to be normal or common, if they have even seen it before at all.

The showmanship of happily putting herself on display like that, but also the submissive cooperation of going where her leash leads...  then again, with the mask she isn't going to be identified, while your friends have no such protection *smirk*

I doubt your friends picked up on you pressing your breasts into the mans hands, so very naughty and teasing of you!  Then again, all the sexual energy and denial is going to have all sorts of fun effects on you :)

Good to have things signed, always important to make sure people are taking responsibility for things...  but a paper trail is, well, a trail, as the contract also proved!

*smirk* no taking that bet, I would be surprised if many of the other pets at all ride home naked and in their cages!

More hints of the competition between Dana and Tracy, then again, keeping the top dominant position does take fairly constant work from Dana.

Wondering how come Jackie recognises who Lisa is, when her friends apparently don't.  Perhaps she has just been told more things about her, making it easier to make the connection from the conversation she has with Dennis.

The insecurities from Jackie are inevitable, and not helped by Dana pulling Dennis off so the two are alone, but again, you need to remember that you are offering, do offer, things to Dennis, and other dominants, that are very important and valuable to them!

Dennis does seem like he could do with some comfort, but would he want to be seen as weak, and needing comfort, in front of your friends?

OOh, body paint to show the type of dog you are, I like that!  But I do think Jackie is rather naive, or fooling herself, if she thinks there is any way this is a one off, and she won't be spending more time as a dog and a pet!

*snort* really, asking if a dog owner would like to hold power over a naked and kneeling Dana?  Given he is eyeing her body of course he would, but the personality and mind matter greatly here as well!

Well, number 11 probably is expecting to win, it is only natural to run into competition like this after all.

Others watching from the stands?  What is going on here...  going to have to wait who knows how long to find out though, *grrrr*  still, good to know that you have planned ahead.

Ongoing treatment as a dog, a dog who cannot be trusted not to run off if something interests them, or happens, all being noticed and taken into account it seems...  but we don't yet have the context to know just how unusual constantly treating your human pet as a pet all the way through is, even outside of the actual showing bit.  This cannot be the only group doing so, surely?  But is it common?

Another mystery, why the almost argument between Dana and the judges?  Is there an issue?  A concern?  It is clearly about the dog, but the dog is certainly not part of, or even allowed to hear, the conversation...  very mysterious!

Well, that was a surprising, yet very fun way to move the final scores and results around!  But what about these hints that Tracy knows what is going on, and is keeping it from Jackie so as not to distract her or put her off?  Hints of things going on here...  plus of course more shows, more showing.  Will there be practice?  Will there be body paint to improve the look of their pet?

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« Reply #131 on: June 25, 2024, 10:34:21 am »
Thank you so much feline, I wanted this one to be both fun and naughty. My alter ego knows about Lisa because Dennis told her about her, this is the former girlfriend of Gregory, the supplier of the cage and other human pet equipment. Dennis and Lisa hooked one singel time, so he cheated on his good friend and chased Lisa away, but she still has interest in going to the events as a spectator; still has feelings for Gregory as well. I also think there may be some people from the university in the stands looking for professor Gregory as well, ones who instead recognize the rather stunning Dana and Tracy, knowing instinctually that the third human female in their company has to be Jackie, no matter how she was dressed.

I think body paints for the next competition would be wild, as would clearly defining the characteristics of the particular dog you're emulating, so perhaps Sean the tattoo man might be enlisted to add his artistic talents to the girls efforts, in exchange for their honest testimonials on his services. He was a nice man that didn't take advantage when he easily could have, so using him in some way in the storyline going forward appeals to me. Does his stunning artwork get him discovered by somebody in the movie business with this particular kink? That would be an awesome plot twist...

The Dalmatian team, I think, logged a complaint that since there were two owners of record on the entrance paperwork, Tracy would have to do part of the showing herself; team Dalmatian thinking to trip up their only real local competition and win on a technicality. It's underhanded, but it also fits with the character of people who came expecting to win.

As far as Dana naked, collared, and kneeling on some man leash, perhaps this could be a personal wager between the two pet owners at the nationals, Dana brazenly putting her own skin in the game, although this would obviously be well out of character for Dana. What if Dana won that wager, (or my alter ego won it for her) and instead had a naked man on a leash to do with as she pleased? What if Dana and Tracy ended up with two pets for the weekend, or even three?

As always I love your though provoking comments, they make me write better, or at least attempt to, Jackie.

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« Reply #132 on: July 08, 2024, 01:41:32 pm »
People from the university expecting to see Gregory here seems odd...  ah, yes, I am thinking purely in terms of the contract copy that was found.  But obviously these meetings, this entire "scene" is quite well known, and if anyone already knows that Gregory has contacts, and a history in this world, which I can easily see being known, then it makes a lot more sense that they would be here, looking for him, for extra evidence.

After all, it is completely acceptable for someone senior and important at the university to be engaged in "morally suspect" activities, while it is considered an issue for a junior member of staff...  such is life *rolls eyes*  so Gregory dodged a bullet here, but yes, I can very much see Dana and Tracy standing out and being easily recognised...  but Dana especially comes from money, she is going to be given more leeway.  Still, I wonder what will come of this...  most curious and interested now!

Sean that tattoo artist, I have very fond memories of him, and would like to see more of him.  Yes, he was good and held back when offered Jackie "on a plate", but at the same time, he had no problem with playing along with her requests, her game, and making her VERY secure.  He is a nice mix of respectful, polite, firm and wicked.  Someone you can see yourself trusting, someone who can be called upon and relied upon both to do a good job, but also to keep any secrets he learns a secret.

AH, yes, I can easily see the Dalmatian team acting like that, quite possibly with the woman / dog breaking character to take the lead in filing the complaint, which would actually just help to backfire on them!  That would be a delightful, and rather fitting piece of irony that would very much make me smile!

Dana making a big bet, that I can see...  but somehow I struggle to see Dana putting herself up as part of the stakes of the bet, not unless she was 100% completely sure of success, which seems unlikely without her first being able to rig the game...  But putting Tracy, or even Tracy and Jackie up as stakes in the bet...  that I can see much more easily.  Obviously Jackie wouldn't get a say in being offered as part of the stakes in the bet, but I can see Tracy needing some convincing, perhaps even a prior bet between the girls, Dana winning that bet, which then allows Dana to stake Tracy along with their pet in the bet.

It's just the way I picture Dana, always viewing herself as on top, better than everyone else.  Obviously she would make a very tempting prize to offer and tempt others, and I can see Dana offering herself up if it suited her, but only on her own terms.  I don't see her wanting to risk herself on a bet, not when she can instead offer up someone nearly as valuable, but not quite as valuable, this near equal obviously being Tracy.

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« Reply #133 on: July 09, 2024, 10:48:57 am »
There are at least two least two different directions to take Dana in; have her humbled and displayed for the slightly arrogant Dalmatian team, or have her come out on top still again. I agree that offering herself up as the human collateral, "something" to potentially be won and humbled, is well, well out of character for Dana, but does her hubris get the better of her here? She obviously has a lot on her teenaged shoulders being the head of household here, but has she ever lost something important, failed at something noteworthy? Such experiences would help to create a certain personality in anybody, the "I can't possibly lose here, because I never have before" mentality.

A different outcome could be Dana and Jack, the Dalmatian owner, finding common ground between themselves, perhaps even agreeing to swap pets for the day, for "training" purposes even. Maybe instead Dana agrees to dog sit Jack's Dalmatian for the day, or even the other way around, and Jack dog sits for Dana and Tracy when my alter ego needs to disappear for some reason. Imagine if the two puppies were being watched together at Jack's house, forced to play and interact with each other in the secluded back yard. And then imagine their playful and innocent rassling around on the thick grass suddenly turned into something else, all as Jack got to watch his pet-wife and my alter ego go at it with over-hot passionate insanity; Jackie finally getting some of the girl on girl fun she has been fantasizing about for years.

I could also see confident (comes from money) Dana and the other two girls being called into the deans office, asked about Gregory's influence on them and their odd hobby; only for Dana to turn it around on that man, asking him what he was doing there. I could imagine a cocky male dean thinking he'd steamroll the three teens with big desk and office intimidation, he being caught a bit flat-footed when that didn't quite work out. Dana and her folks, and the other paying parents as well are the actual paying customers here, and he's the employee, and I could see an anything but timid Dana reminding him of such.

Perhaps the Dalmatian even gets her own tattoo of ownership before the next competition, as Sean's shop even. Is Sean shown some Polaroid pictures of the Dalmatian "in full painted costume" so to speak, he caught thinking that he could do so much better than that if given the chance. Maybe it's an artistic personal challenge for him with a new medium (paint instead of permanent ink) or even a thank you for his shops added business, and a new kind of customer base for him to serve.

Just some thoughts for the next chapter or three, but I'm obviously curious as to what you think, Jackie.

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« Reply #134 on: July 10, 2024, 05:18:37 pm »
So many thoughts and questions...

My gut instinct feel for Dana is that she isn't going to fall for the fallacy of "I cannot loose since I have never lost before", I am picturing her having watched at least one of her older brothers fall into that exact trap herself, perhaps even Dana being part of the trap that caught him out...  there is just something quite calculated in Dana at times, as if she has already foreseen all of the likely outcomes and allowed for them.  Of course she can be surprised, she has been wrong before, but somehow I don't see her being blind to this particular risk...

So I am not sure I see Dana being easily led to bet herself.

At the same time though, the show, and having to have both friends go with Jackie into the ring, should have shown Dana that she doesn't know all there is about this world, and that if she wants to make a good showing with her "pet" at the bigger show, she would benefit from some more information, even training.  For all of her faults, I can see Dana accepting that she has to learn from others now and then, even if she doesn't particularly like it ;)

So this would definitely lean towards some fun interactions between the two dogs.  After all, dogs do like to engage in dominance games and play, so it would make sense from a "let the dog's work it out between them" point of view to have the Dalmatian and Jackie, both in character, released in costume to "let off some steam", and obviously, for our still cross Dalmatian to want to point out to Jackie just who the top dog is, even if this top dog status doesn't always translate into results in the judging ring *smirk*

The Dean...  I am having this sudden mental image of the three girls going into the Dean's office, the Dean in full authority mode, feeling quite sure of how things are going to go, and Jackie being on the verge of a full blown panic attack / melt down, when Dana goes full "entitled shopper", "I am the one with the money, I am always right".  This has the interesting result of offering Gregory a way out of his situation, since suddenly the Dean is finding himself on the defensive, and having to make compromises to fix a mess of his own making.  But, part of what appeals to me here, is the way that Dana, and to a very similar if not equal degree, Tracy, stepping forward like this, pointing out that they have the money and power, they have the control, establish in the eyes of the Dean that their "ownership" of Jackie is acceptable, and something that he has no right, say or power to contest, or even comment on.

This is appealing for a couple of reasons.  Firstly, it reinforces for Jackie how much power, control and authority her "owners" really have, reminding and showing her that she is the property of powerful people, people who are in a position to defend their property from others.  Now this is good, since it makes Jackie feel safer, but it also reminds and shows Jackie that she cannot expect to appeal to outside figures of authority to save her from the contract.  It is a powerful way of reinforcing the power difference, and that "there is no way out" for her now.

The other reason for this is that Dana and Tracy feel less concern about signs of Jackie's status spilling over into her college life.  Not thinking anything obvious or major, but Jackie is likely to find a collar locked on her neck the next morning when preparing to head to classes, as a reminder of her status, less she ever forget it.  Plus, with the Dean so successfully dealt with, there is much less concern about any rumours that are no doubt swirling around about the odd relationship between the three women.  After all, sooner or later Dana or Tracy are going to want to bring boys, or even men, back to the house for their own entertainment, and they don't need the fact that they are holding a naked slave captive in the house to be news that hangs over their heads...  with backing of the Dean it could even be dressed up as some form of long term psychological experiment that they are involved with, that the College is running, giving them a ready made excuse if ever needed...

Obviously that won't work with their own relatives, if / when a brother visits, but it gives them more cover locally, and another "point of control" over Jackie, seeing that the College has effectively signed off on her status as a slave...  *evil smirk*

Plus, well, having the Dean, go from being so self important and full of himself, to seriously scared of the shit show Dana and Tracy are going to drop on him would be delicious!  I do so hate hypocrisy after all.  If the Dean is so aware of and into pet play that he wants to go to the shows, he has no right to complain about the girls and what they are doing!

I have lost track of Sean and body paint and tattoos in all of this, but that works really well, since you do want someone with a good artistic flair, used to and good at working with skin and bodies, how they move and what works well with skin.

 

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