Author Topic: Mental Institution Weekend by Mumwrap  (Read 6079 times)

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Mental Institution Weekend by Mumwrap
« on: November 04, 2016, 11:48:28 AM »
You may view this story here on the Plaza:

https://www.mummified.net/storieslr/mental_institution_weekend.html
F+/m; straitjacket; restraints; bond; cons; X

https://www.mummified.net/storieslr/mental_institution_weekend2.html
F+/m; straitjacket; restraints; bond; cons; X

https://www.mummified.net/storieslr/mental_institution_weekend3.html
F+/m; bond; wrap; bagged; wetpack; straitjacket; cons; X

https://www.mummified.net/storieslr/mental_institution_weekend4.html
F+/m; bond; gagged; commited; cell; cons; X

https://www.mummified.net/storieslr/mental_institution_weekend5.html
F+/m; mpov; bond; hospital; asylum; committed; cell; straitjacket; cuffs; chain; catheter; straps; bodymod; gag; hood; chair; cons; X

https://www.mummified.net/storieslr/mental_institution_weekend6.html
F+/m; mpov; bond; hospital; asylum; committed; cell; straitjacket; cuffs; chain; straps; bodymod; gag; hood; cons; X

https://www.mummified.net/storieslr/mental_institution_weekend7.html
F+/m; mpov; bond; hospital; asylum; committed; cell; straitjacket; cuffs; chain; straps; bodymod; gag; hood; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks.   ;)
« Last Edit: May 22, 2022, 09:42:27 PM by teanndaorsa »

Offline Bondageroadie

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Re: Mental Institution Weekend by Mumwrap
« Reply #1 on: March 21, 2017, 12:56:58 AM »
I really like this story!

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Re: Mental Institution Weekend by Mumwrap
« Reply #2 on: November 28, 2020, 03:50:15 AM »
THIS IS MY FAVOURITE STORY !! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!

The only thing I didn’t like was like his whole bio/patient info because what if his people die and he ends up there permanently.

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Re: Mental Institution Weekend by Mumwrap
« Reply #3 on: November 28, 2020, 04:46:13 AM »
Well thank you very much!

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Re: Mental Institution Weekend by Mumwrap
« Reply #4 on: December 06, 2020, 10:07:45 PM »


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« Reply #5 on: November 28, 2020, 02:59:29 AM »
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I love this story. It would be really cool if you let write another chapter of this story or a side piece. The story is prison swap by earlofnexus.

I was thinking it would be cool if Zoe could transferred to the hospital/mental institution that was in the mental institution weekend by mumwrap and they did all different types of testing and casement?? I’m not sure if that’s the right word. I’m so sorry I’m not creative enough to come up with my own stories. I have been daydreaming about this for ages. Love the story.

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Re: Mental Institution Weekend by Mumwrap
« Reply #5 on: December 07, 2020, 08:42:07 AM »
Would you ever do a fifth chapter on the story???

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Re: Mental Institution Weekend by Mumwrap
« Reply #6 on: May 18, 2021, 08:32:47 PM »
I am working on part 5! Not sure when it will be ready!

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Re: Mental Institution Weekend by Mumwrap
« Reply #7 on: November 29, 2021, 09:03:09 PM »
Hi! The next chapter The Mental Institution Weekend part 5 is up on the Gromet website! Let me know what you think!

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Re: Mental Institution Weekend by Mumwrap
« Reply #8 on: November 30, 2021, 12:43:12 PM »
Its back, the story is back!  After so long, and thinking that we were never going to get an update to this wonderful and fun experience, so nice and happy making that there is more once more, to enjoy and savour :)

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Re: Mental Institution Weekend by Mumwrap
« Reply #9 on: November 30, 2021, 02:01:54 PM »
Thank you Feline! The story would not be here with out you!

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Re: Mental Institution Weekend by Mumwrap
« Reply #10 on: December 04, 2021, 11:00:00 AM »
Aha, the original 4 chapters weren't linked to this post, so I made another. I'll merge them together now.

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Re: Mental Institution Weekend by Mumwrap
« Reply #11 on: December 04, 2021, 02:56:47 PM »
Thank you Teann! :D

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Re: Mental Institution Weekend by Mumwrap
« Reply #12 on: January 20, 2022, 09:56:50 PM »
New chapter up tonight, enjoy

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Re: Mental Institution Weekend by Mumwrap
« Reply #13 on: January 21, 2022, 06:56:29 PM »
Hello Mumwrap I read your story, some parts more intensly then others.
What I absolutely liked was the friendly and respectfull relationship between the 'victim' and the warden. A non-con or even sadistic relationship in a medical context is sheer nightmarefuel for me. I wouldn't have read the story if this would have been the case.

The second thing I have to say about it is: it's clearly for medical bondage afficionado's. Because I am not, I had serious problems really getting in.
Why do I try stories in subcategories I am not really in? Because sometimes I find "stuff", additional elements in these stories I can attach to.

This time, unfortunatly there was very few for me I could 'hook my interest' on.

The relationship of 'Alex' and Alex and her colleagues was... well... simple. I didn't feel any intrigue nothing I felt investing in. Somebody wanting the medical ward experience for some flimsy reason, and somebody wanting to give it... for some flimsy reason.

Don't get me wrong. Your story does perfectly what it needs to do in this cat. And - that's - great.
However. If you want to write someday something 'more'. Something with maybe some appeal beyond the medical bondage fetishists you could add some depth to your caracters, add one or some power dynamics, some intrigue - keeping the medical bondage stuff... the medical bondage stuff is awesome. I for example don't really care about what is used to bondage people or if they are mummified.

The last thing is rather a friendly advise... if you go for a mental institution WEEKEND... maybe keep it at the weekend. A good story has a beginning and an end. Well... how will you end this? Will you ever end this story. Maybe you should have worked with sequels then with more parts.
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Re: Mental Institution Weekend by Mumwrap
« Reply #14 on: January 22, 2022, 09:15:14 PM »
Yay for part 6!  And now how are we going to get out of this?  Well, I have an idea or two, but time will tell, hopefully not to much time though, I want to read more of this!

T.H. I actually see and agree with a lot of your points here, they are good points.  At the same time this story really does strike a strong cord with me, it always has, so I enjoy it for what it is, as it is, while waiting and looking forward to more of this :)

Yes, you do need to read outside of your normal preferences, since now and then you will discover something special that is really worth reading, enjoying, and encouraging!  Sadly you will also end up reading a great deal of stuff that just doesn't much interest you, but that does tend to make the gems all the more precious when discovered :)

 

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