Author Topic: Cabdrivers Dream come True by Harry (Read 11986 times)

Arkane · « **Reply #15 on:** October 08, 2016, 04:47:42 pm »

Quite interesting second part.
Thanks

64Fordman · « **Reply #16 on:** October 08, 2016, 05:58:59 pm »

Great work Harry, I am really enjoying this story. Thank you.

ElectroPainLover · « **Reply #17 on:** October 08, 2016, 08:40:08 pm »

Great story Harry. You are doing a great job with it. I hope you continue it and pen some other stories as well. I look forward to more from you.

Dana -- EPL

Harry · « **Reply #18 on:** October 09, 2016, 02:39:19 am »

Thanks

The last part of this story, Discoveries, is waiting for me to make the final check and send it to Gromet.
After first part, I thought I could keep this story rolling for several parts, and maybe I could extend it some more, but high hopes often come down with a crash.
At the end, I´m pretty satisfied for the outcome.I have to admit, that for a first story, I´d thought it would be much more difficult to get it out, but actually it was almost all fun.

And more will be coming. Other story, Fun at the Farm, is waiting to be published and I have couple new ideas too.
I just have to find some time to type them out...

Harry

ElectroPainLover · « **Reply #19 on:** October 09, 2016, 07:12:34 am »

I can see how it would become difficult to continue the story for too many more chapters without it becoming monotonous and begin to turn into the same story being told with different words Harry. It is a great job on your first story! I have my rough spots and I'm writing in my native language.

I think you are doing a great job and I hope it becomes more than just "almost fun" for you. The most important person you are writing for is yourself and your enjoyment of writing and the genre you have decided to write in. Here, it just happens to be a bit on the kinky side. You don't believe Stephen King, John Grisham, or Danielle Steele would go broke if they quite writing do you? They continue because they love writing and what they write about.

Dana -- EPL

Harry · « **Reply #20 on:** October 09, 2016, 08:55:42 am »

Thanks Dana

I bet they could manage somehow even without writing more. Maybe.
It´s not almost fun, I have enjoyed writing both stories. And just now I´m struggling to find enough time for Harrys next adventure...

TeaSer · « **Reply #21 on:** October 10, 2016, 10:50:11 pm »

Now this is an interesting turn! I'm glad you relate to reality, Harry! And the way their relationship evolves is just right.

In my opinion the story stops here - of course you can decide to evolve further, but it's beautifully concluded at this point, with a hint of some exciting future, which I actually hope you're not going to enlighten for us.

I do like the way you set up the scenes. And while relating to other topics in the forum I will stress that the way you leak details about your characters is indeed an example to follow. Not too much, not too little. And at the time where I (the reader) needs the information. For me there are two intelligent main characters - both of them complex and very real.

Thanks for the story!

TeaSer

Harry · « **Reply #22 on:** October 11, 2016, 01:00:20 am »

Thanks again TeaSer

At first, I thought this tale might have many more parts to come, but after writing this part 2, it was pretty clear that part 3 would end this story.
I just sent it to Gromet, and I don´t want to give too much out, but I can say,
after your comment, that I think you might like how it finishes too. At least I hope so...

Harry

Harry · « **Reply #23 on:** October 23, 2016, 05:18:52 am »

Part 3 is now online, hope you enjoy how the story finishes...

64Fordman · « **Reply #24 on:** October 23, 2016, 08:16:17 am »

Tragic but excellent finish to this story. Great job Harry.

ElectroPainLover · « **Reply #25 on:** October 23, 2016, 06:41:45 pm »

Hi Harry,

I agree...quite a sad ending, but, a very excellent one at that! The penmanship was outstanding in writing Harry! I was kept quite enthralled by the writing as well as the story. The way you tied the story to an end was outstanding in my opinion.

Somewhat confused about the Storycodes though. But that is neither here nor there.

Again, Great Job Harry! Look forward to more of your stories.
Dana -- EPL

Harry · « **Reply #26 on:** October 24, 2016, 07:37:04 am »

Thank you both EPL and 64Fordman, for your compliments

I wasn´t sure how that kind of ending would be welcomed, but now I guess it goes just like any other kind...

I can´t take credit for codings, but I will try to do that for my future stories.

Once again, thanks for your kind words

TeaSer · « **Reply #27 on:** October 25, 2016, 03:07:49 pm »

Dear Harry

I wrote I didn't hope you would do a third part of your story as I really didn't want it to turn into some 'plain' bondage-story or Master/slave-story.

Reading the final chapter, however, kept me in a delicious suspence - with you focusing on the emotional part and the very surprising finale. I'm now glad you did the final chapter! The story has some real depth, gives us as readers a good impression of the rationale for the two characters and does never take the easy way just giving excuses for fucking.

Writing this I actually wonder if it could be made into a movie - as that would be a most welcome development to sexmovies, which usually contains a plot just changing the scenes for some fucking. Based on this story, I think the movies could advance a lot.

Now - don't become a one-hit-wonder! You go back to the keyboard and develop more pearls...... please

TeaSer

Harry · « **Reply #28 on:** October 25, 2016, 03:24:03 pm »

I´m speechless.

Thank You TeaSer

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