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Gromet:
You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesek/indecentproposal.html
MF; MMF; M/f; agreement; loan; plot; cuckold; bond; sex; climax; cons/reluct; X

http://www.grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesek/indecentproposal2.html
MF; MMF; M/f; agreement; loan; wife-swap; cuckold; fantasy; spanking; public; bond; cons/reluct; X

http://www.grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesek/indecentproposal3.html
MF; FFMM; M/f; agreement; wife-swap; charade; cuckold; meeting; boss; flight; hotel; bikini; tease; surprise; gift; cons/reluct; X

http://www.grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesek/indecentproposal4.html
MF; FM+; wife-swap; deception; cuckold; flight; hotel; bikini; tease; boss; drink; kiss; arousal; sex; climax; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesek/indecentproposal5.html
MF; sex; wife-swap; cuckold; rom; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesek/indecentproposal6.html
MF; M/f; F/f; cuckold; wife-swap; public; exhib; strip; naked; cons; X

http://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesek/indecentproposal7.html
M/f; Sbf; cuckold; wife-swap; naked; massage; lingerie; gag; cuffs; bedtie; blindfold; sex; oral; cons; X

https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesek/indecentproposal8.html
M/f; cuckold; wife-swap; bond; sex; spank; cuffs; impregnate; gag; belt; bedtie; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks   ;)

feline:
I have really enjoyed this, once I got past the jaw dropping "what the HELL" moment, when the secrets were revealed, and I found out what was driving and behind this trip, and why it had to be her.  That is definitely a different take and perspective on why she was the lady asked to go on the trip, and to be shown off.

But more than this, this arrangement, this secret between the two men clearly has a long and deep history, this was no spur of the moment plan, this is something years in the making, that is suddenly being tested and brought out into the open.  What really speaks to me here is the emotions, the feelings, the complexity and the characters as we explore this new situation, this new world and perspective.  I love the wifes changing feelings, how she enjoys teasing, but is not really seeing herself as a sexual object in this setting or context.

Also, I am fascinated to see and learn more about what is driving her husband.  Did he fail to repay the debt because there was never the money to do so?  Or is there some other reason, some other force at work here?  Why is an apparently strong and dominant man so happy to share his wife, to send her off with his best friend?

I am looking forward to seeing more of these characters, and to hopefully learning the answers to some of these questions.  Also, how much pressure will the "happy couple" be placed under on this trip to actually behave as man and wife?  Since the point of the trip is to expose a sham, simply having her turn up is unlikely to be all that is required to carry off the lie.

jackierabbit1:
Thank you so much Feline, this type of scenario holds a great deal of interest for me these days. The borrowing of one's significant other is a huge turn on for me, and even the best of intentions can be skewed when alone with a desirable partner in a tropical paradise. Perhaps the men have shared a lover in the past, this little arrangement a payback for that, or perhaps it is simply that there is a debt owed and this little infidelity a convenient way to pay it off. I do think the law of unintended consequences may sneak in here at some point, this second deception only necessary because of the first one, and each lie thereafter leading to an even greater deception to keep the sham going.

Will either or both of them get caught and punished for their deception, possibly the submissive wife taking the full blame and allowing the suspicious office manager to settle up with her physically for their collective deception? I could imagine all manor of fun doing that, especially so far from home and caught red handed.

Thank you again for your kind words, Jackie.

Arkane:
No comments to write, but I really enjoyed the story so far.

feline:
I have been considering this further, and wondering what might be in store...  simply inviting the man and his mystery wife, a wife long assumed to be a lie on the holiday is a good test, a good trap, but if his boss is prepared to go to these lengths, then the boss must be prepared for him to turn up with a woman who looks like the woman in the photograph.  That would not be a massive step to arrange.

So what further tests, what further pressure will be brought to bare, and what expectations are at work here?  Her real husband is sending her off with sexy outfits, dressing her for the part of an attractive and desirable woman, preparing for her to act the roll of the desirable woman.

Obviously sharing a room with a single double bed is a given, but will they share the bed at first?  What emotional storms and journeys are at work here?  Suddenly the wife, the lied to and manipulated wife, the wife who has given herself over to, and promised allegiance and submission to her husband holds all the power.  I keep coming back to her saying how she is her husbands to command and to use...  just how far does that gift and promise go?

Oooh, a naughty thought, will they decide to practice her being the loving and relaxed "wife" before the holiday?  She needs to learn the lies he has been spinning about her, she needs to know how to act the wife, to know of his work, and to be relaxed and natural with him in person to carry off this lie...  this practice before the holiday, while her real husband is hovering in the wings adds a whole new emotional dimension to what is going on here :)

And yes, how deep is the lie, how deep is the plotting, and what punishment, what fall out is going to come from this?

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