Author Topic: Jasmine Pond  (Read 9506 times)

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Re: Jasmine Pond
« Reply #15 on: July 20, 2016, 07:26:26 PM »
Hi Mally,

From an imagination and story progression perspective this is an impressive piece of work. Other than some punctuation and grammar issues we all deal with as amateur writers and improve on with experience, I can only say well done and thank you. You did forgot one thing at the end of your story . . .

                                                      Jasmine Pond will return

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Re: Jasmine Pond
« Reply #16 on: July 26, 2016, 11:40:55 PM »
Thank you for the kinds words of encouragement Fordham.  Do not have plans for a sequel but never say never.

 

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