Paradice Lost by A Pensive Pen

[A Pensive Pen]

Hey Dek,

All 9 parts of Paradice Lost are in this part of the forum, and should be posted to the main boundstories page soon as well: http://grometsplaza.net/forum/index.php?board=11.0

Your idea is interesting. I get the impression you've thought it through! I have an ever growing backlog of ideas and less and less time to sit and write, but if you wrote that story I'd love to read it!

[dek11434]

Sorry about the confusion, I figured out the link, the additional parts are great.  Any additional work ups coming for these characters in the future?   -dek11434-

[ElectroPainLover]

New parts added by Gromet today.

[AmyAmy]

I read this on Pensive's blog-type site, where it's up and complete.

Overall, and as a whole, I like it.

It's well done, written with care, and attention to detail.

I didn't like the decision to write out the French accent, but I wouldn't let that turn you off reading it.