The Contortionist's Homecoming by Zeedrot

[teanndaorsa]

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/the_contortionists_homecoming.html
F/f; predicament; bond; cuffs; naked; outdoors; clamps; mast; hum; collar; cane; oral; tease; denial; irritant; enclosed; rom; cons; XX

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Thanks 

[Caras pet]

A good start, but screaming for a part 2

Thanks for sharing!

[feline]

I liked this, but not as much as I wanted to, or feel I should, and I am struggling to pin down why.

I really like the idea of the contortionist wife, having someone so flexible, so willing and submissive to tease and torment so is very appealing.  They are a very loving couple, I like this.  I am not sure about the submissive wife being called "cunt", but this is addressed, it works for them, it just feels disrespectful, but in a sense that is the very point of calling her this.

I want to love how loving and soppy they are towards each other, while being wicked, but somehow I don't.  The soppiness is there, the love is there, but somehow, instead of feeling that it fits perfectly, it feels jarring with the wicked abuse that is being handed out.

All of the pieces that I want to enjoy are here, put together well, but somehow, personally, the whole doesn't quite jell.

Perhaps because I don't have an emotional sense of these two as people, since we were dropped into the middle of a very private moment?  A good piece of writing, and I love how the farm has pivoted to human cattle, that actually left me wanting to know more about that aspect of things rather than what was actually happening right in front of me.