The Goth, the Sex Shop, and the Surprise by Zeedrot

[teanndaorsa]

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/the_goth_sex_shop_and_surprise.html
Sbf; cuffs; shop; armbinder; hood; collar; corset; gag; collar; clamps; caught; F/f; rom; cons; X

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/the_goth_sex_shop_and_surprise2.html
Sbf; F/f; shop; armbinder; hood; collar; corset; gag; collar; clamps; cuffs; rom; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks 

[vancanlock]

Great story.  I hope there is a part two. 

[throwaway140124]

Great work! Your writing gives us such a good insight on Athena's perspective and the history that feeds into it - I'd also be fascinated to see it from Juliette's perspective! The way things build up across Juliette's multiple visits and the way we see Athena's frustration and bitterness eventually fade (for all that she hangs on to them because, hey, at least that's safe and familiar!) works so well, and makes that final reveal that much more satisfying. And kudos on the colour matching - dark green would look absolutely divine on a pale redhead! Also, "emerald meeting sapphires" - excellent turn of phrase.

I do gotta say though, meaning it as a compliment, and 90% in jest - little bit bunny boiler behaviour from Juliette. Very impressive & very romantic! Just, also, y'know ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Fantastic work, hope you keep writing!

[Zeedrot]

Great work! Your writing gives us such a good insight on Athena's perspective and the history that feeds into it - I'd also be fascinated to see it from Juliette's perspective!...

I do gotta say though, meaning it as a compliment, and 90% in jest - little bit bunny boiler behaviour from Juliette. Very impressive & very romantic! Just, also, y'know ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Fantastic work, hope you keep writing!

Lol well whenever part 2 drops you'll definitely get your wish about seeing Juliette's perspective. And yeah redhead in green is a classic visual. To be honest when I first dropped this story over on DeviantArt I made a joke about it being my attempt to cram as many cliches into a story as possible.

And yeah Jules is a little obsessive, and has a hyper focus (that later part was drawn from how my partner fixates with her ADHD, just in Jules's case dialed up to 11 and somehow sustained for years lol). It is a little unhealthy to say the least, but ain't that love sometimes lol.

And glad you like the sapphires and emeralds line. It's cheesy, but it's one of my favorites I've written.

Thanks for the comment and for reading!

@vancanlock glad you enjoyed! And can confirm that there is a part 2 and 3 coming soon!

[teanndaorsa]

@vancanlock glad you enjoyed! And can confirm that there is a part 2 and 3 coming soon!

Tonight, even :-)

[da8989df]

Great story. Enjoyed each part. Any thought to part 3 as an epilogue? Enjoying all your contributions.