Bound Beneath the Sands: A Tale of Captivity and Desire by Gromet

[teanndaorsa]

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://grometsplaza.net/world/buried/storiesad/bound_beneath_the_sands.html
M/f; fpov; buried; sex; oral; mast; public; beach; naked; bond; rope; blindfold; sendep; roleplay; gag; rope-harness; rom; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks 

[feline]

I do like how this starts, the gentle discovery of a shared fantasy and passion, the sexiness, the teasing, the passion that is fuelling both of them, and her eagerness to reward, and occasionally distract, to avoid revealing her secret and forbidden desires

As it goes on through, it feels very repetitive.  There are lots of days, but it feels like very little really changes from day to day.  So I would either suggest fewer days, or finding a few more steps to explore.  Perhaps exploring the whole kidnap side of the fantasy, chasing her down, pulling her back, stripping her of her clothes and her options...  or adding more toys and teasing to her buried time.  There are various ways to add to this, to make the days more different, to add more variety to all of this.

Lovely feelings and nicely romantic though, which is wonderful