Adventures of Locktober by douglbond

[teanndaorsa]

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https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/adventures_of_locktober.html
F/m; F+/m; F+/mf+; mpov; chastity; tease; bond; cuffs; spreader; public; chain; latex; collar; mittens; toys; oral; hood; denial; caught; leash; straitjacket; wrap; gag; electro; remote; cons; XX

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Thanks 

[Guardian]

Hi,
I very much enjoyed reading your story, Adventures of Locktober.
I thought your setup was great, Todd giving Amy the leather belt on a dare, her getting him the CB-2000 for Christmas. His eagerness to try it, but their struggle to get what they needed from it, and then the failed Locktober with the CB-3000. The next year, Todd's commitment to the challenge and Amy's determination to take control and ensure their success
I will mention two things, not because I believe they detract from or take away from the story.  I do it ONLY because I'm anal about such things. But that's just me, so don't let me distract you from writing more about Amy and Todd.
1. You set the story in 2021, and that October 1st was a Sunday. That doesn't work for 2021, but does for 2024.
2. There is Sunday, Day 22 (correct in 2024), but the next day is Day 24. Seems to be a missing day.

Keep up the good work.
Thanks,
Guardain