The Saga of Alys by Darkwolf

[teanndaorsa]

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/saga_of_alys.html
F/f; bond; strip; cuffs; gag; oral; bedtie; clamps; strapon; sex; collar; rom; cons; X

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/saga_of_alys2.html
F/f; bond; chastity; tease; denial; collar; cuffs; oral; rope; susp; whip; toys; clamps; buttplug; tape; straitjacket; slave; strapon; anal; mast; climax; cons; XX

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/saga_of_alys3.html
F/f+; chastity; armbinder; gag; toys; buttplug; collar; clamps; predicament; strappado; whip; susp; strapon; anal; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks 

[teanndaorsa]

Part 2 up tonight, enjoy!

[Killthebeast]

I love the story so far, still hoping to get more parts of it in the future.

Can'T wait to see Ophelia more teased denied and having to pleasure her Mistress.

[teanndaorsa]

Last part up tonight, enjoy!

[researchertalloran]

Btw, you can still find the original versions of these stories at Utopiastories, though finding them takes a little effort...

Two Halves and Covenant of Steel are available by tag searching for chastity and then using ctrl-F for Darkwolf; Late Nights needs the Wayback Machine (the URL is the same as the other stories but with story number 19716)

(I'd post the links, but that seems to be considered spam by the bot)

[throwaway140124]

Only read part I so far, but absolutely love it! Obviously it's a much smaller scope than Gingerbread House et al, but I love the details, and also the way that what we see aludes to parts of their existing relationship or histories.

I really like that you've not given explicit descriptions of the characters, rather feeding in details like hair colour and body shape as they come up. I think that having that sort of description worked well for Gingerbread House, but for something more short form it feels like a much better way to immediately present the important parts of the characters, and it's like you're weaving in the less important details like physical appearance as we go.

Also, you've already established these characters so well in such a short space of time! Getting to share that key moment of basically-a-proposal, and getting to hear Ophelia's internal monologue gives us a great view into her psyche, not to mention her being the one to initiate, but then Alys having the collar already tells us so much about her!

Plus you're doing this via some really fucking hot smut! You kept the action moving great, and your description of both physical sensation and thoughts on both sides was a) hot as fuck, and b) so well done to develop the story and keep drawing people in! This is amazing!