Caught in Chastity by Jackie Rabbit

[feline]

An interesting and welcome part 4.  I think we can safely assume the "bet" was about how well her husband would take to a second dominant woman bossing him around, and also how he would respond to being introduced to the "meditation room", a name / description that does make me smile

His internal world, the thoughts and concerns all ring very true and real, you really can see how he would be having such thoughts, concerns and worries, locked away in the darkness, wondering what his wife was really thinking and doing.

The introduction to the "power women" of the area makes so much sense as the reason for her being off on her own, there is a quiet sense that this is opening a new door for her, for them, and setting them on the road to riches and community standing.

For all of this, I think this part lacks some of the power and feeling of the earlier parts, since its more "quiet inner world" and looking at how he is thinking and responding to all of this.  It does wrap things up rather nicely though, and does offer answers to the big questions here

[jackierabbit1]

Thank you Feline. I'm curious if you think I should leave this one here, or expand upon the interactions between Alice's late husband and the chaste main character. I also like the ladies to be in charge, but not necessarily treating the men in their lives like pond scum in this tale, more so like a juxtaposition of a 1950's nuclear family where the wife facilitated her husband's career in running the home.

Thanks again, Jackie.

[Johnny Law]

Since the story began already halfway through Locktober, and both husband and wife are discovering exciting new aspects to their relationship, it seems only fair that his chastity could be extended all the way through No Nut November.

Also, I know that the story is probably not headed this direction, but it would be fantastic if Jess began to wonder about what it feels like to be locked away like that.  I'm sure Alice could be an incredible keyholder for both man and wife.  With proper discipline spankings for misbehavior, of course.

[jackierabbit1]

Thank you Jonny, I do see the husband's chast servitude continuing after Halloween, but I don't see Jess wanting to experience such things herself. I like Jess dominant and in-charge of the relationship, and their life together as well, so building her confidence, not humbling her. I more see Alice and Jess as the management team in charge of hubby, managing his labors and training schedule.

Thank you again, Jackie.

[Johnny Law]

Yeah I figured that wasn't the direction you wanted to go.  I'm just always hopeful for a nice F/mf story.  But this one is going great so far, looking forward to reading more.