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Caught in Chastity by Jackie Rabbit

Started by teanndaorsa, February 15, 2025, 08:34:03 PM

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teanndaorsa

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/caught_in_chastity.html
F+/m; mpov; chastity; caught; spank; cons; X

https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/caught_in_chastity2.html
F+/m; mpov; chastity; paddle; naked; punish; oral; strip; cell; stuck; cons; X

https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/caught_in_chastity3.html
F/m; mpov; chastity; cell; stuck; sendep; cons; X


Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

teanndaorsa


Object Oriented


jackierabbit1

Thank you, self-inflicted kinky consequences are fun for me, as are the ladies being in the topmost authority position.

Thanks again, Jackie.

feline

Yep, I have a backlog again, and I am starting work on clearing my reading backlog again :)

Having just finished part 1 of this story, and been very surprised by a glance at the tags on part 2, I think it is time to start trying to get my thoughts in order here, so I don't miss any major thoughts.

At this point in time, I am very much feeling all "warm and fuzzy" about this, it feels romantic, loving, stern and playful all at the same time.  A quite interesting mixture of thoughts and feelings, but all certainly quite happy.

The character building, as always, is first rate.  We are quickly, yet clearly, introduced to the key characters, and we see and learn enough to make sense of them, their relationships, and to get a clear sense of who they are and how they work.  As I consider this, I am reminded of something I have seen occasionally, that always both amused and frustrated me.  See a male behaving in a polite and respectful way towards women, and some "dominant" women leap to the conclusion that said male is submissive.  When and how did the idea that only submissive men can and will be polite and helpful take hold?!  This point actually has nothing to do with the story, even as the story reminds me of those observations, since this was one of those occasions when polite and helpful just so happened to overlap with submissive tendencies, without being full blown submissive in nature.

There is a clear sense of a playful and fairly new marriage at work here, a couple learning what works for them, more than willing to explore and enjoy, very open with each other, and accepting of each others history, fantasies, desires and dreams :)  The sort of thing that makes my romantic heart feel all warm and fuzzy :)

It is interesting to see that Jess, the wife, doesn't seem to be bothered by two weeks of chastity, but then again, it is made perfectly clear that her sexual needs are still very much being met, just in a different way.  So while she might be missing out on some things, she is also being "rewarded" with a more attentive and house work effective husband, while also getting plenty of sexual attention to keep her happy.  So certainly not one of those one sided situations where the one who's fantasy is being realised gets all the benefits, and their partner has to do all of the work ;)

I am not quite sure how I feel about the "good-dog" comment about the husband being so effectively motivated by food, but perhaps only because I am not the only one I know who can be quite successfully motivated with good food *sigh*

The image that is presented of Alice, this older, yet deeply appealing woman, who is never a threat to the wife, but who can be recognised as a woman of learning and knowledge is very well done, and does present quite the emotive image.  It does really tie into the idea of the older authority figure, so seeing how this overlaps with his memories of his school teacher, and his mild spanking fetish all ties together so very well and effectively.

It amuses me how our husband seems to under sell himself, even if for understandable reasons.  Then again, so many women seem to be drawn to the bad boys, and then bemoan the fact that they are dealing with a shallow arsehole...  well duh!  So it is good to see that a properly supportive, helpful and polite husband is seen in such a good light by Alice.

The whole being paid, trying to avoid being paid, that makes me smile, it is so easy and natural to picture a moment like that happening with these people, and Alice simply taking matters into her own hands to fix the problem, so natural and reasonable.

Seriously though, the "brain melting" idea that someone a few years older might be very kink aware, I mean, really?!  Does every generation seem to forget that older people were younger once, and were also very much people who tried things, learned things, and so forward!?  Still, some allowance does have to be made for having the chastity device felt up by such an alluring and powerful woman :)

Almost tempted to say it is rude to suggest our husband cannot be trusted without the chastity device, but at the same time, it is such a natural and teasing suggestion, what else would she say and ask at this point?  Still, it does leave him without many good options, so explaining the general outline does seem the best result here.

The key holding offer is quite the surprise, but the point that this would actually be a "good" idea, since she is simply going to be a more secure and temptation free key holder than his wife is both wicked and basically impossible to argue with.  There is no sense at all that his wife is a "weak" key holder, but I can see that he can hold onto hope of talking her round, a hope that simply isn't going to apply to Alice.

Back home, and the teasing probing by his wife...  I don't know why, but I am finding it really hard to shake the idea that his key has just been baked into the second loaf, for him to deliver, into safe keeping.  No good reason at all for this mental image, but still, it is there.

This does bring me to a point of puzzlement, what was his miss-behaviour?  The only thing I can think of was his initial refusal to accept payment for a good dead, and I find it hard to call this miss-behaviour, but it is all I have.  It does feel a little bit like making something out of nothing...  then again, that is a favoured game at times, for good reasons!

Delivering the envelope, it really is no wonder he is feeling it, to search for a possible key!  I also enjoy the consideration of safe wording out, showing that all of this sits inside of a loving and considered marriage, which again matters a great deal to me.

The contents of the letter, and the point about synchronising calenders, it does make me wonder to what degree his lovely wife's thoughts had been going in this sort of direction already, since this feels like a good sized step to take, and quite quickly.  Then again, when such a perfect teacher of your husband appears like this, she would be foolish not to take the opportunity!

Moving into part 2...

Oh dear, I do smile at the optimistic thinking of avoiding earning any more punishments.  If this is being done to both keep you in line, and to train you / mould your behaviour, then punishments are inevitable, since they will help with these goals.  It's not something you will really earn, more its something you won't get to avoid.

I do think that Alice views Jess as lucky due to your submissive, willing and trainable nature.  Since Alice is very much coming across as an experienced dominant, this seems a fairly natural perspective for her to be taking.

Oh dear...  back home, seeing his wife is showing clear signs of arousal at his punishment and submission to another woman, this does NOT suggest early release and sexy time for you!  It suggests more chastity, not less, but more sexy time for your wife, so in that specific sense sexy time is looming...  *smirk*

Definitely overly optimistic in expecting to be released from your chastity cage!  So the "can't" do that comment is very telling, and I love the thoughts this provokes!

Oh my lord and oh dear!!!  That sounds a very great deal like you have just managed a ruined orgasm in chastity, just after being told that your wife "can't" release you, and that you have been naughty...  I am thinking this is one hell of a flag of encouragement to your wife, in the unlikely event that she needed any encouragement to keep up these games and your training!

So does Jess know what happened here?  I am not yet sure, but turning round and asking if he had permission to cum...  oh things are definitely moving forward at speed here!!!

And now a 3rd infraction, so quickly!!!  LOL

Yep, no sense at all that our husband knows about ruined orgasms, then again, they are both relatively new to the whole significant time in chastity idea.  But the way he is going to be taken over to Alice...  oooh!

The presentation does make it feel like a child being dropped off, but I was putting that down to his mental view of things, until the conversation on the doorstep with Alice happened, which really reinforced the feeling!

Yep, completely with you there, what appointment, and when was all this planned?  Plus what bag?  I do have a theory on the bag, his wife is taking all his clothes with him in the bag, but no idea about the rest of this.

Well...  talk about adapting quickly and well...  he has a firm idea of maid protocol here, and staying back far enough to be easily called upon, but also to give his "betters" privacy!

The sudden change to referring to his wife as "Miss Jessica" is another very interesting step and marker in all of this!

The ending...  oh lord!  To be fair, given their was a knob on the inside of the door, this is actually a perfectly understandable mistake, it really did not look like a room that would lock you in like this!  Sometimes things are so obvious, you just wonder what was someone thinking, but this time, it really wasn't obvious, so its much more understandable.  Not that this is going to excuse him from punishment, I am sure.

Given this reaches a natural break point, but leaves us with several very important un-answered questions, I really do hope our wonderful Jackie has plans to continue this!

jackierabbit1

Thank you Feline. You're very perceptive on both the bag, and the bread as well, but I also think the "Miss Jessica" title will be reserved for actual dominant play-time only. I could also see my male alter-ego character slipping with friends and family though, forgetting where they were or who's company they were in when Jess directed him to do something with her special commanding tone. Should she let some of her girlfriends in on their unique little training regimen, or keep that a secret? Either could be fun, especially if Jess' girlfriends were less than happy with the men in their lives. Do any of Jess' friends want to "borrow" Jess' husband for a bit, just for some "man" chores around their own homes?

Borrowing a husband (or even a wife obviously) has a certain kink-appeal to me; lending a human out like he or she were a ladder, or a lawnmower or something, so super objectification. Would Jess be out doing something hubby might not approve of while he was occupied doing nice charitable things for others, for free? Nothing too naughty, they're nearly newlyweds, and each seems quite happy with each other. Hubby's convinced that Jess could do better though, and his "I'm lucky to be here" attitude I think bubbles over into his servitude.

So the last thing I wanted to mention was that "hubby" (for lack of a proper character name) has this reoccurring story element of personally delivering that which is used against him, sometimes even unknowingly. The letter from Jess, his apology, the improvised cutting-board paddle, and even his own belt; all of it placed into Alice's hand by him. Really even trapping himself in Alice's special room was done by his own hand as well, although accidentally.   

I think they're fun characters, but this is just a bit of a necessary slight detour from the other storylines I have going on, so another chapter or two until the conclusion.

Thank you again, Jackie. 

feline

I can certainly see the appeal in him being lent out, even if only as a general handyman / unskilled gardener.  At the risk of getting quite off topic, the idea that the man earns the wages while the woman keeps the house isn't all that unreasonable, if only one of them is working and earning.  But as soon as both are out and earning, men who try to stick to the "right" way things should be done, effectively doubling or more the woman's work load, without helping properly, are just arseholes.

Sadly, such views aren't uncommon in the world at large, so there is going to be plenty of scope for our "lucky" husband to be kept busy if and when his wife is off on her currently very mysterious errands.  Another way this works is that Alice comes across as having a very well put together house, so perhaps rather limited actual need for his services...  well, it seems a waste to have a useful man on hand, and not make use of him.  Of course, he also needs proper time in the cell, to help remind him of his proper place in all of this ;)

As for him delivering, and thus being in part the instrument of his own fate...  oh that is most delightful, I love that mental image :)

This is a very fun journey, but does feel that it can reasonably reach a conclusion fairly soon.  Long may your writing delight and inspire you, so we can delight in your creations :)

teanndaorsa


jakbird

"So first things first, you have to trust me, trust that neither I, nor obviously Miss Jessica, have anything but good intentions towards you."

My first reaction seeing a line like that (especially from someone with a hardcore dominant personality), is...good for whom?
  Jack Peacock
Tell me, O muse, of that ingenious hero who travelled far and wide

feline

Well, those are some really serious walls, and one hell of a door!  Should you be "secured" inside of this room, obviously this cell, you aren't getting out without help!  Obviously though you are already secured, but still, it wasn't really obvious that was a risk before it was to late, so you aren't that obviously at fault...  However, something tells me that isn't going to matter, not even in the slightest, and you are going to be considered to be at fault here, and in a good place for "bad boys" *smirk*

Interesting thoughts and point about the hinges.  It feels like you are still working through the clues here.  Then again, leaping straight to the obvious and reasonable conclusion about what this room is isn't going to come so naturally to you, now is it?  But you are getting the idea I see :)

Did Jess know about this room in advance?  Actually a good and interesting question, but in one sense it doesn't matter, since Jess is both clearly upto all sorts of things with Alice here, and also surely knows that Alice has plenty of tools at her disposal to keep you under control and "out of trouble" LOL

Well, the light going off is indeed a very clear signal.  And it seems you are quick to work out what is probably expected of you.  Amusing that we have another school reference, but they are good at explaining and reminding us of the old power dynamics, and how they have echoes here.

Not in trouble...  I will admit I am surprised.  Logically and reasonably I don't see how his reasonable curiosity would result in him being in trouble here, but those are hardly relevant considerations under the circumstances :)  A bet though, very interesting...

I would argue that there is a world of difference between being attracted to Alice, which under the circumstances seems rather reasonable, and ever acting on that attraction, given your status as a married man.  Still, I find it hard to fault you for your very respectful thinking and consideration of your role as a married man.

Well, of course this room was used before, it would never have been produced otherwise.  An "unserious" feeling though, that is interesting!  I suppose it is from the gentle and careful way this is being handled and approached.  But still, Alice is positioned to close and lock the door in an instant, and is looking more than ready to do so.  That seems a fairly serious situation, even if it is handled with "love" and consideration.

A bucket...  I cannot help wondering if this is a hint towards duration of your stay...  time will tell.  The ads comment is interesting.  I am mildly tempted to go hunting to see if this is real or not, but would rather finish reading this instead :)

Lights on, and given a clear order about where to stand, makes me think there are cameras in the room, so his compliance, or rule breaking, can be monitored from outside.  Yes, that is the next point though, why the mattress and bucket when he has to hold a position.  But I assumed the position was "just" going to be until Alice returned with any extras for his stay in the meditation room *smirk*  Still no information on the bet either *pout*

Well, camera is an obvious thought to have.  As for watching it, a tablet or phone seems reasonable, plus something to send alerts when motion is detected, would be my thoughts.

SERIOUSLY!!!  We end without any information about the bet?!  Or information about what Jessica is off doing...  *grrrrrrr*

jackierabbit1

That's a very interesting angle Jack, I can't say that was the direction I was leaning here though. I was thinking to suggest that hubby's situation was a bit more humorous and playful than it appeared, despite the dark direction that it could obviously take. Your point is well taken though, "good" is just like beauty I suppose, in the eyes of the beholder, so a point of view opinion.

 I may well work the "good for whom" thing into this story to now though, so thank you for that, Jackie.

jackierabbit1

Thank you Feline, I intend hubby's time spent in isolation to be filled with both reflection, and apprehension, wondering what the ladies are up to himself. I could obviously have Jess off visiting with an old boyfriend or something like that, the angst felt by hubby suspecting something like that was going on while he was powerless to stop it might be fun, but it's not my intention to take this one there. Jess is mostly happy with hubby, he's really a high-level catch in his own right who treats Jess with deferential respect.
 
But, perhaps Alice has painted a slightly different picture of how her long-term married life could be, with a properly trained and conditioned husband; not broken, just properly shaped into a custom fit. Alice the disciplinarian, Alice the mentor, she could easily be both to this young couple, and she could also put Jess in touch with other like-minded ladies, maybe seeing their "finished-product" husbands in action, a kind of "try it before you buy it" situation.

 Business opportunities could be another obvious direction here, the ladies wishing to work with other ladies with the "proper" attitude. Maybe Alice thought she saw something in Jess that she wished to promote, (the found chastity device confirming hubby's malleability) or even something that reminds her of herself at that age; passing on skills and connections that she wished she had earlier. Or perhaps this was just repaying the proverbial sisterhood that had educated her once, opened doors for her, so in this way paying it forward to the next generation.

So many options here, but I intend a quick conclusion, although with characters that can be revisited in the future, maybe even introducing them into some other storyline I have going on.

 Thank you again, Jackie.

feline

This is making me think back over the story, and doing so, one thing really starts to stand out.  There was a sense of almost wistfulness to Alice when talking about how her husband used to spend quality time in the meditation room.  This fits with her nature and personality, so it would make sense that all of this is reminding her of what she had with her husband.

No doubt she could have easily found random men who wanted to visit a dominatrix, but given this was something she shared with her husband, and what little we really know of her from all of this, it seems to me that she would be happier, and more comfortable, in seeing this as part of a healthy and loving relationship.  There is a world of difference in helping Jessica train and mould her husband, and dealing with a random and probably selfish man who is looking to use Alice for his own pleasure.

Of course, I may well simply be projecting :)

jackierabbit1

Thank you Feline. I think Alice would be put off by any man that was in this for what he could get out of the situation. I think that's why hubby is appealing, his selfless service to Jess, and her too really. Hubby isn't weak, just conditionally deferential to the ladies in his life, most especially to the ladies in authority. I've used my husband for some inspiration here, he gets all "yes ma'am, no ma'am" with women far younger that we are, like even college aged young women in department stores, it's very charming. He's not chasing them or anything, that's just not him, he's really one in a million. And I agree about traditional men expecting their wife to hold down a career and play fulltime housewife and mother too.

Thank you again, Jackie. 

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