The Good Neighbor by Findar

[Smitty122]

Really enjoying this story. I hope we never see Jordan again.

[Eido]

Hi Findar, finally caught up and this story is quite a ride. Really getting into Dan and Alice's characters, and even Jordan's. I feel you've captured a lot of the reaction and emotion around events like discovery, submissive seduction, limit testing, and rejection succinctly and simply. The abbreviated sketches of their feelings hit the important notes without turning the story into a therapy session.

After reading to the current chapter now, I wonder if or how often safe words get treated like relationship filters? Something along the lines of N safeworded this move, and now I have to dump N because N doesn't play at my level?

I don't mind Jordan. It will be interesting to see if she returns to the plot and in what capacity.

Thanks for a fun read,
Eido