Author Topic: Well Met by Findar  (Read 1140 times)

Offline teanndaorsa

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Well Met by Findar
« on: August 14, 2024, 03:04:54 pm »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/well_met.html
M/f+; Sbf; bond; outdoors; naked; gag; collar; cuffs; toys; remote; leash; caught; rope; crotchrope; tease; oral; spank; sex; cons; X

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/well_met2.html
MF/f; M/f+; bond; rope; toys; spank; mast; climax; costume; chairtie; gag; breathplay; oral; sex; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
« Last Edit: September 22, 2024, 08:36:19 pm by teanndaorsa »

Offline crimsin

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Re: Well Met by Findar
« Reply #1 on: August 16, 2024, 03:01:00 am »
Nice twist with adding an extra character. Double damsels. I thought Jill was going to walk back bound as well. Please do a follow up on how the group gets along.

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Re: Well Met by Findar
« Reply #2 on: August 20, 2024, 03:58:48 pm »
I enjoyed this. The set up was a good teasing pace. A nice build up both in the exploration or her anxieties and the progress of her bondage. I thought the end was less well structured but adding the second girl was a great  twist. With all these outdoor bondage stories it’s amazing this sort of thing doesn’t happen more often.  ;)

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Re: Well Met by Findar
« Reply #3 on: September 22, 2024, 08:36:30 pm »
Part 2, time for dinner!

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Re: Well Met by Findar
« Reply #4 on: September 29, 2024, 06:00:05 am »
Hahaha!  Terrific!  So glad to hear there is a part 2 ready to read.

I like the setup for bonding over bondage with a new friend. 

EDIT:  OK, I read part 2.  Excellent!

In addition to detailed bondage instructions, you have some really clever writing tricks that I enjoy.  Not only is it incredibly sexy, but I found myself laughing at several different parts.  Lots of fun!
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Re: Well Met by Findar
« Reply #5 on: November 06, 2024, 07:13:43 pm »
Just finished both parts, and I did rather enjoy the journey :)

Part 1 was creative and fun.  I was left wondering for a while just how much Jill was agreeing with the scene, and how cooperative she was being, and wondered if she was being forced into things.  Certainly she didn't know what she was really getting into, that much was clear.  Then kicking him like that! OUCH!  Talk about a clear sign that things are not going how she wants them to!

So finding her concerns about passers by turned on the head with the discovery of Bella was quite the surprise, I did not see things going like that at all.

I did find the general care, and careful steps, clear communication and sensible bondage to be very well done, but at times it felt more like a bondage instruction manual than a sexy story.  Part 1 didn't push anything to far or to hard, but makes for a good introduction to the two characters, even if I did feel unsure about the relationship and dynamic at work here.

Still, I was pleased to see there was a part 2 to read and enjoy, to see what was going on here.

Oh the classic naughty school girl look!  *giggles*  yep, that works well when in doubt ;)

The bondage did seem to get very advanced for Bella's first visit to their house, although there is no doubting how well she responded to it.  Plus seeing the two women so clearly enjoying each other, that was fun and delightful!

I will say though that the whole breath play aspect put me off somewhat.  It was very carefully done, no arguments there, its just something that I have concerns about, and dislike people treating so casually, so that put quite a damper on things for me.  As I say, a very personal reaction, but there we go.  Still, seeing them come together like that was good, and the final scene, it is nice to see Bella really getting some confidence and coming out of her shell like that :)

 

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