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Kitten Trap by Steff

Started by teanndaorsa, February 13, 2022, 04:54:55 PM

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teanndaorsa

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kitten_trap.html
Sbf; M/f; fpov; bond; insert; oral; chastity; collar; dungeon; catsuit; petgirl; hood; gag; leash; ring-gag; stuck; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

T.H.

I very much liked your story.

I like when someones imagination goes so overboard that realism really doesn't matter anymore and I verymuch prefere when the wacky fantasy stays lighthearted.
Because when somebodys dark fantasies go rampant, things can become very opressive and depressing very quickly.

I like the open ending. You can write a sequel, but the story is just fine without one.

However... some parts of the story felt gramatically odd. I can't say if this is a problem on my end (not native speaker) or yours (mistakes).
If the problem lies on your end, a sound proofreading should eliminate all problems.

Thank your very much for sharing!

loras pa6

Loved this. And I agree,  this works as a cliffhanger standalone story or the start of a rollicking story arc

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