Loved the story, loved the twist at the end of what is obviously the first part. I can't wait to see what trouble the flexible agent gets herself into, or causes, on Eron. It's difficult to build a short story in a new and unknown place, i.e. science fiction, without taking a huge amount of time describing that place, (without it becoming the least bit boring), which I think you have accomplished here.
Thanks for sharing, Jackie.