Fantasy World by Lobo De la Sombra

[Gromet]

You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/fantasyworld.html
FF; FM+/mf+; park; rides; naked; crates; encased; sealed; train; boxcars; stack; transport; trashbags; truck; landfill; messy; denial; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks   

[64Fordman]

Just like the Plaza itself, Fantasy World provided a brief, enjoyable escape from the troubles and responsibilities of real life. Thank you Lobo.

[Lobo De la Sombra]

Thanks Fordman, I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I'm hoping to enlarge the park as I go, with each chapter following one or two guests through different attractions.  Fingers crossed, please, that it turns out as hoped.

[novafyre]

Oh man what a wonderful story! I really hope you keep adding to it. Maybe even Gina and/or Trish get involved in some of the "attractions"...

[Lobo De la Sombra]

Thanks, novafyre, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.  Chapter 2 is finished but not edited for sending.  And yes, I am kind of working on an idea for a chapter where both Trish and Gina take an active part in one of the attractions.  Not sure how or when it will come out, but it is in the works.

[feline]

I did enjoy this, a fascinating glance into a possible future, and world.  There were moments when the descriptions of the fun and games really got to me, and set my blood pumping, but more than this, I feel this is a good chance to make some important and sensible points about the nature of "socially acceptable", and also to hammer home the point just how popular a "niche" interest can be.  Something does not have to cater to the majority to cater to a great number of people indeed

[Lobo De la Sombra]

Thanks, feline, I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I'm not sure how many chapters this one will wind up growing to, but I figure I'll be touching on a few aspects of social acceptability as I go, directly or indirectly.  It's strange if you look at it, see how the concept of what is or isn't acceptable keeps changing with time.  Things that were once taboo are now considered normal, while other things that were accepted without question now cause a riot just to mention them.  And some things have gone from acceptable to not and back to acceptable again.  So I'm not sure how many lines I'll get close to or how many toes I'll step on with this one.  More of the first than the second, I hope.

[MaxRoper]

As Trish said, I can't wait to see where this leads us. Great start Lobo!

Max

[Lobo De la Sombra]

Someplace interesting, I hope.     Thanks, Max, I'm glad you're enjoying the park so far.  Chapter two is about ready to send in.  It involves two women and a lot of plastic.  I'm thinking a married couple for chapter three, maybe even newlyweds.  The interesting part is matching attractions to the characters for a given chapter without repeating too much.  Hope everyone enjoys the way things turn out.