Dungeons and Dragons by thepinkbishop

[teanndaorsa]

Part 7 up tonight, enjoy!

[teanndaorsa]

Part 8 up tonight. Tagged with 'incest' because Amanda gets a little more involved with her daughter's bondage sexy-times, but it's a very minor interaction.

[TamedWolf513]

I'm really loving this story.  Only up to chapter 6, because I don't want to binge it all and then have no story to read.  The best things are savoured one bite at a time... 

Thanks very much for this excellently written fantasy.  It's almost as immersive as the VR game it describes.

[teanndaorsa]

Part 9, up tonight, enjoy!

[teanndaorsa]

All the way up to part 10 tonight, enjoy!

[nightgerbil]

ok so I got to the part 7-8 isih where Val ties ellie non consensually... and that broke my suspension of disbelief. I came back to this a week later. Maybe try to push past this, I got the mum daughter "mom i kinda like this" then we got val hog tying them both for the night.

 Sorry as a reader I'm out. It broke any kinda credibility that amanda would be ok with that happening to her daughter from her partner or a newbie girl would be this hard core this fast. It's a shame honestly with so much potential here and I've really enjoyed it upto this point. You just totally disrupted it though that the women would accept that. That Amanda was later hogtied all night with clamps as punishment for protecting her daughter was really the point where I felt both amanda and ellie would be leaving the game and ending things with Val irl.

For whats its worth I'm leaving this feedback as its always been useful for me when readers tell me what stops them from continuing on with my stories. I always found that useful and its in that spirit I'm leaving this. I want to reiterate I love the world you built and its characters. I just can't get past this point.