Scanned, Shipped, Printed by Baron Law

[teanndaorsa]

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.packagedstories.net/storiessz/scanned_shipped_printed.html
F+/m; F/f; enclosed; sendep; sarcophagus; transported; sex; straps; tease; mast; buttplug; enema; toys; milking; stuck; cons; XX

https://www.packagedstories.net/storiessz/scanned_shipped_printed2.html
F+/m; Sbm; sarcophagus; enclosed; mast; sex; group; sendep; remote; tease; denial; buttplug; enema; milking; transported; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks 

[feline]

Well, that was one hell of a read!  A great deal of fun!

I am tempted to say that we are just dropped into the middle of things, but since our man, Phil, doesn't know what is going on either, we get to learn the details along side him, so everything gets explained in due course, and we know what is happening, and why.

Seeing the casket he is secured inside of at first is very vivid, especially the massive number of locks, all the steps, and all of the securing bolts.  The security really does seem massively overkill, so it is both interesting, and reassuring to learn that it isn't so bad as he was told.  Not that anyone is going to be opening that puzzle box without the solution, even if the order of the steps doesn't actually matter.

But then to have him up and transported, without warning!  Wow, that was a shock and a surprise, but actually fits with the packaged classification of the story perfectly.  After all, if you don't consider transporting the package, then it is just stationary, but solid, bondage.

But the sheer sexy delight the two women show as the level of bondage just keeps on going up, as the box is packed for shipping, making it so much more secure and "safe", really delightful and a lot of fun to read.

The jump in complexity from version 1 to version 2 is quite considerable, but given the level of fun everyone is having with the box, its no wonder they suddenly decided that they needed to make it suitable for longer term storage!

This does a very good job of showing the benefits, I know, only in stories, but still, of 3D printing!  Making the point about how this was very cutting edge, and the company had approved, "unofficially" of all of these naughty experiments, does a good job of explaining how and why all of this is allowed to happen.

The trust Phil is showing in his two friends is very telling, very great trust indeed.  Then again, seeing him "messing about" and locking himself back in, without anyone around, and no agreements on how long he will be inside, does a good job of telling us which head he is thinking with...  which reminds me, the 1% smaller channel for his erection in the first version is simply wicked, and very effective, and well described

Watching the two women playing together, and enjoying their combined teasing of Phil, along with the planning for what will happen next, and how to improve things, does add a lot of content and motion to the story.  Otherwise it would risk being repetitive, since there is only so much to be said about a man secured inside a box, not able to see or move...

So it is interesting to see how much more life just the first set of changes between version 1 and version 2 bring to the experience and the story!

I don't know if the author has any plans to continue this story, but if they do, I would be very interested in reading the results.  I mean, leaving us, at the very end, teased with the fact that there are several ideas already in hand for version 3, above and beyond the video screen, without telling us what they might be is a wicked tease!

In case there is any interest, to my mind, one obvious direction to go in, to add to things, would be further ways of stimulating / teasing / tormenting the person locked inside.  Tens pads for electricity, hot and cold spots to raise or lower the temperature.  I am sure something could be done to add some form of anal stimulation if they tried, above and beyond what is already happening with the enemas.  The cock milker seems quite accomplished, but adding more audio and video teasing that is in sync with the other devices is a good way to really add to the experience going forwards.

One thing that I did feel while reading the story was that the two women almost seemed to rush into things, without really stopping and thinking everything through.  At first I just thought it was my perspective, but then seeing them print the final layer in the wrong, and vastly stronger and heavier material, it turned out that this was a deliberate story element.

I did worry for a moment there that the story, that had been so "romantic" and happy, was about to take a terribly dark turn, but thankfully it didn't.  That would have spoiled a lovely read for me.

I don't think Phil has realised yet, but since his clothes didn't travel with him, he needs to go back into his "happy place" to get sent home *wicked smirk* but will they find time for any extra enhancements before then?

Another longer term thought, is it just Phil who is going to enjoy this sort of experience?  I don't see the dominant Maggie going for it in a million years, but what about Paula?  I can see Maggie absolutely loving having both of them secured away, under her complete control...  but should they be in separate containers, or somehow placed together into the same one?

[teanndaorsa]

Another outing (or in-ing, really) for Phil tonight, enjoy!

[feline]

Yay and happiness for part 2 of this very fun story!  This follows on seamlessly from part 1, which is nice to see, since we still had unanswered questions about how he was supposed to get home.  Well, only unanswered for him, for the rest of us it was quite obvious what was going to be happening

Hearing his thoughts and reactions to this, to what was the most emotionally powerful, both scary and sexy moment, is a good start, pulling us right back into the flow.  The fact that the scariest and the sexiest is the same thing really makes me smile, and says a lot about his nature, and how well suited to this testing / abuse / packaging he is

Adding the tablet, so there is the option for more feedback with their captive, especially since this is going to be used to add more teasing, is an obvious, in hindsight, step, and works very well.  This is starting to grow into a "add anything and everything" project *wicked smirk*

The next morning, of course he locks himself back into the first casket, he really is very easily led into temptation...  this just proves the need for the longer term idea of adding a button so that it closes and locks someone inside of it.

I am not quite sure I get the thinking behind making the outer shell a big featureless cube, but it would partly depend on the setting it was placed into I think.  The extra space for supplies, locks, and lots of wicked equipment for teasing and tormenting the captive is certainly appealing, but there doesn't seem to be any shortage of required space at the moment in the current design.  So I think this is one of those ideas I would need to see more fully fleshed out before it really makes proper sense to me.

But the sheen to version 3, I really like the practical issues being considered here.  After the accidental metallic printing, that is quite a lot of material, so it makes sense that it all gets mixed up when being shredded.  But yes, it is no longer one material or the other, so this is a good use of it.  Again though, the mental aspect, explaining how this makes the encasement SO much more secure, since the material isn't going to react well to any attempts to cut him out...  really piling on the mental pressure here!  Very wicked, yet also sexy and naughty.

Having the video showing him being packed up by strange men, ready for shipping, that is very mean!  Clearly the women know exactly what they are doing, so carefully staying out of camera view, just to really torment and mess with their captive...  talk about obviously enjoying and getting off on this wicked treatment!  It really is fun and enjoyable to see the pleasure all of this confining, plotting and tormenting is for the two women, it adds a much needed outside perspective, and shows the thoughts and drives of the ones doing the packing.

As for the ending, I REALLY do hope that this means the author is planning to continue this most excellent story!  I mean, there is so much wicked delight to be had here, plus I would love to see what other sorts of things they can do with this technology.  I mean, instead of going bigger, how small and thin could the devices be made?  What about a very thin shell that would transform someone into a helpless mannequin?  Is there some fun to be had with that?  If you consider small and carefully placed openings...  Plenty of ideas to explore and look into here, so please to keep on writing, thinking and exploring

[baron law]

I am very happy you are enjoying my little story so far.

I hope you'll be happy to know I've already written and sent in parts 3 and 4 and am currently working on part 5.

While I am still exploring all of the ways to torment Phil using the current configuration, I will admit to being intrigued by your idea of going "thinner and smaller" so to speak. Food for thought and a potential story line.

I really did appreciate your feedback, thank you for the kind words.

I hope you continue to enjoy reading the Adventures Of Phil.

[feline]

Now this is excellent news!  I think there is a wonderful potential here, especially combining the clear wicked imagination of the two women, with the very eager and willing nature of Phil.  I really enjoy the internal logic of all of this, the outlines feel well thought out and sensible.  It makes sense to use the printer like this, it makes sense that it is enabling things that otherwise just would not work well, or be easy, and putting them to very good use.

The ability to take ideas and act on them quickly is one of the most interesting aspects here.  Changing and evolving the bondage device, and making it so much more interesting in just a few hours...  rather than weeks or months that would otherwise be required.

I have come across a couple of stories exploring the idea of a very thin "body shell" before, but this 4 part story is an excellent study of the idea, this time with a female on the inside.  If you are interested, have a look, and you can see a very wicked idea for how the resulting "body" is then put to use:

https://www.literotica.com/s/mtv-awards-pt-01

there really is something so delightful about only a couple of people knowing what is going on, and everyone else just interacting with the objects as if they are simple objects, without any knowledge, or even the slightest inkling, that something wicked is going on here!

Knowing you are interested in my thoughts, I might get a bit more carried away commenting in future   These stories are really capturing my interest, as you can tell, and it is good to know that the author cares and is interested in seeing the story through at least one readers eyes

Going back to what you have already posted, the end of part 2 really makes me smile, since the very idea that Phil would somehow be reluctant, or require encouragement, to place himself back into one of these devices is just silly.  It is quite clear he isn't going to be able to resist, even though he isn't going to know in advance what changes and improvements have been made to the next version, preferably versions!

I am looking forward to seeing more of the "interaction" between Phil locked inside and the women outside, through what ever extra toys and devices they add.  If you haven't already considered it, they need to add more devices / items to monitor him and his reactions.  Getting some form of real-time feedback on how he is responding will tell them something, and when they can finally talk to him afterwards, they will learn what to make of these reactions as well.  As it is, simply being able to monitor how often, and how much he has orgasmed is something, but there is scope for more, especially since they are starting to really explore what can be done to tease and torment him by controlling what he see's and hears!

This does remind me a bit of the ideas you explored in your Jabba's Palace Party story, but as I found when I looked up my feedback, I was more interested in the AI than the person being teased and programmed, which felt like a missed opportunity to me.  Still, the idea of making sure that each experience with one of these devices drives Phil to a whole new sexual peak is a very good way of making sure he stays eagerly engaged in all of the testing.

A second thought on all of this, given the large capacity of the liquid storage tanks, it seems a shame not to keep him locked inside for at least 24 hours at a time, if not longer.  Of course, this would then leave the women with far to much time to kill, time to plot and devise even more wicked torments, and time to make sure that Phil gets into even more trouble

Eagerly awaiting the next parts of this wonderful story and experience

[baron law]

I read the "MTV awards" story and it was an interesting concept. I may have to subject Phil to a similar fate.

I am happy to hear your thoughts and welcome the feedback. It's interesting to hear someone else's perspective and if my ideas are being expressed in a way that is understandable to the audience.

Yes Phil is easily lead into temptation, but we will see if he is as eager a few versions later on.

When you read the next few "episodes" you'll see I anticipated the need for more interaction. I hope you like the choices I made.

As you have noted I explored some of these ideas in the Halloween story "Jabba's Palace". In that story I was going for more of a "Black Mirror" vibe. The dangers of allowing AI to control our bodies and minds. Also I felt constrained to keep the story relatively short for the Halloween format.

Those storage tanks are large for a reason, as you'll read soon.

I look forward to hearing your feedback on parts 3, 4 and 5.

[feline]

Now I am all curious and eager!  To be fair, I did wonder about the size of the storage tanks, since they do seem over sized, given the current length of time that Phil is staying inside the device.  I am all for planning ahead, and making sure there is a good safety margin, but still...  so it is very nice to read that you are thinking about this

Another perspective on the thin shell idea, the company that owns the printers is looking for products.  There is a market for massive, and thus expensive devices, but it is reasonable to expect a larger market for smaller devices.  But, more than this...  *evil smirk* consider how quickly and easily a thin shell can be printed up.  Now, once a shell, assuming it comes in multiple parts, has been applied, what if Phil was to discover his lovely tormentors wanted to change the experience...  by for example replacing just the panel over his bottom, or chest, or...  if only one part is taken off, and replaced with a new, updated piece, the entire shell can be replaced and updated over time, one bit at a time, but never allowing him any actual freedom of motion, any sense of freedom or release...

Its a very different approach to moving him from one massive and domineering sarcophagus to another, so it caries with it a completely different set of feelings and emotions...  plus the discovery that so much can change about his bondage, and what is being done to him, but he never gets any sense of freedom during the changes is a very interesting approach.  Plus, it ties in with the story logic of the company exploring products and what works.

Now, if you are looking for a different approach in all of this, what about small "pieces", I am thinking a bit like corsets, that are printed to order, locked on, and then left on, to be worn for a few days a time, under your normal clothes.  Very different to what is happening with and to Phil here, but does he need to be the only one helping with the experiments?  Or, instead, do the women want to use these as a form of "insurance" policy, Phil has to return to them to get the under clothes item removed, but he has to cooperate with their next experiment first *smirk*

Apparently I am quite caught up in this idea...  I just hope I don't have to wait to long before the next part appears!

[baron law]

I've reached a reasonable stopping point for the current Phil storyline and have decided to visit your thinner and smaller concept. I am polishing the first part of the new storyline and will submit it to the site, possibly as soon as this weekend.

Although to be honest you seem to be inspired enough to write your own story.

I don't know what the release schedule is, but the webmaster has parts 3, 4 and 5 of the current Phil story lined up in the queue. So hopefully you won't have a long wait. Not like poor Phil.

I hope you continue to read, enjoy, and provide feedback to my stories.

-baronlaw

[feline]

*finds beating stick* so who do I beat to speed things up around here?

I do dabble in writing, but I struggle to pull everything together properly into a finished product, so end up focussing much more on the underserved "support and encourage authors" front.  I still remember the frustration of pouring a lot of time and energy into writing, but never really getting any form of feedback back.  So when I have something worth saying, I say it

[baron law]

Lol, I'm sure quite a few people on the forums would say "yes please". So I'm not sure it would speed up the process.

Writing is not for everyone, so let me just say thanks for the well thought out feedback and your obvious enjoyment of other people's writing.

I recall my first few attempts at posting stories received no feedback and I was worried my kinks were just too much or not enough to anyone's liking.

So thanks for the encouragement, and I know patience is not everyone's virtue but there are several more Phil episodes headed your way.

As Maggie has said to Phil on more than one occasion....eventually.

[feline]

Sometimes I consider that there seems to be a good number of authors out there, but a terrible lack of good commenters.  So I do something to help redress the balance, and I hope, thank and encourage the authors who move me to comment

As for motivation, sometimes the threat of the stick, or even the absence of the stick, are more effective than the application of the stick...  Perhaps we are just going to have to run some tests to see what results we can achieve...

As for further adventures, if you haven't seen and read it yet, you may well really enjoy "Just Another Box", currently up to 3 parts, finally.  The forum feedback is worth a look to, if you enjoy the story:

https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/justanotherbox.html

good packaged stories feel quite rare, so its really nice to see something else posted that fits, and is so well written, with such fun characters that I am actually interested in.

[baron law]

Re: Motivation

You might know the old joke: "How did the sadist punish the masochist?" "By not beating him."

Let me know if applying the stick or not applying the stick was more effective.

I read the part 1 you linked to and it's interesting, but I am a little leery of reading other packaged stories at the moment as I don't want to influence my own storyline with their ideas.

There's probably enough overlap in these types of stories as is and quite a few that go places I wouldn't want to go. I mean I wouldn't want Phil to go. Yes, Maggie is dominant but she's not into causing Phil lots of pain or leaving him entombed forever. Eventually she wants to enjoy his company directly.

Again I appreciate your feedback and commentary, hope you enjoy the next installment.

-Baronlaw