Late Night Ocean Skinny-Dip by Jackie Rabbit

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https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storieslr/late_night_ocean_skinnydip.html
F/f; fpov; outdoors; naked; roleplay; sold; cons; X

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Thanks 

[feline]

This is a very fun, hot and sexy read.  It starts slowly, gently, but it feeds us the information about this pair at a steady rate, keeping us interested, keeping us focussed.  I was concerned seeing them out at sea like that, the risks quickly becoming far to clear and obvious, making the landmark the only "safe" option, "pushing" them into it regardless of how safe or reasonable it is.

Then though the steady unveiling of the full fantasy being thought about, suggested, and perhaps even fully experienced and lived, that is hot, and ends with all of those delicious and wicked thoughts just running around in your mind...  thank you

[Zephyr]

Love this one. I agree with Feline, a fun and sexy story. It hits themes that have run through my head as well and I enjoyed where you went with it (and ended early enough to leave it to one's imagination). Good job!

[jackierabbit1]

Thank you so much Feline and Zephyr, I could come back to this one in the future obviously, but I also like leaving it where it is; as in how real is this fantasy going to be, and is Beth an honest player here? The fun way is for Beth to join in with the guys, (two girls, together, really good for most guys libidos) but the darker path is for Beth to sell off her "very good friend" to the men for real, funding her education with her friend's "labors." Imagine if the authorities found a single swimsuit, saw the tracks into the ocean, and after an exhaustive search declared her missing...

Anyway, thank you both, Jackie.

[feline]

That's taking things to a rather dark place, but I do wonder how long this kidnap and sold into slavery period is expected to last.  Taking a middle road, if she is expecting just a day, two at most, then once things pass a week, she is really going to start wondering what the hell is going on here...

A fascinating and fun fantasy, and it does leave you hanging, teased and tantalised, wondering what might come...

[feline]

Resurfacing this, since I cannot seem to keep this story from my thoughts.  For some reason, my mind keeps on coming back to this, to the scene, to the ending, to the idea...  the trust, but also the planning, shaping and wickedness...

Jackie seems to have some ideas of what she is getting into here, and you can see why she is interested, and looking forward to this.  But at the same time, she is actually agreeing to be betrayed and used by her friend, sold to others to use and abuse, and agreeing not to have any further choices...

While we can see why she agrees to this, and how much the scene, the game appeals to her, I do keep on wondering what her friend really intends, is thinking, and how far her fantasies and desires really go...  I am still a soppy romantic at heart, and don't want to see anything to terrible happen to Jenny, but I cannot help but think she deserves more than she expects from this experience...  after all, she isn't going to feel, or be, betrayed otherwise, is she?  And it isn't fair to leave such a wonderful and accommodating friend unfulfilled like that 

[jackierabbit1]

It might be fun to revisit this story in a year or so, both story-wise and actual time wise; as in have the guys gotten so used to owing a sexy teen that they can't imagine not owning one going forward? Does Beth become so dependent on this illicit income stream that she can't live without it, literally? Do the cops question the guys looking for a missing teen swimmer a few days later, and does one or more of them perjure themselves into a legal trap, should my alter-ego be released at some point in the future? Or, do the guys do something inadvertently that makes it impossible for them to release their "captive" as they maybe intended at some point into the future?

Imagine if Beth were questioned by the cops as well, and the safest way going forward for all the participants, excluding my alter-ego, was for the missing teen to remain missing, sold off to some new "friends" maybe, or just kept someplace remote and shared. So many possibilities going forward, from playful "lets pretend I'm your bound sex slave for a bit" to something truly a bit darker, even if such wasn't their true intention getting into this initially.

Here's a thought, since I know first hand how teen girls can be with each other, what if Beth found something while snooping and searching my alter-ego's phone that caused her to become furious with her "good" friend, so much so that she now thought it fitting to dump her into the guy's arms permanently? If so, she'd likely tell the guys that they now have a new deal in regards to their captive, as in "do whatever you like with her, no limits!" Not exactly romantic and fun, but what if Beth found a nice young man on the rebound once at college, and wanted to put this past girlfriend-thing behind her, forget the "mistake" she had made once?

I have to ask Feline, if you were the Beth character, what would you do? As in do you think you could write the continuation to this one, from Beth's perspective? It might be fun, and this way it's conclusion could be anything you might like, from happily ever after, to "glad to be rid of her in exchange for the free education; I think I might prefer boys anyway."

Please let me know if you're interested in doing this, as I think the product could be a unique and fun read, Jackie.

 

[feline]

I am going to think on this, and see where my thoughts take me...  this is a very interesting question to consider...