I loved the title, it was unique enough to make me want to read it, Marie the main character deliciously imperfect, and the details and plot interesting enough to draw me in as well. I think at this point Marie is owned, which fantasy-wise is super hot for me, so it's easy to identify with her here. I'm of course curious as to if David ends up keeping her around as a plaything (perhaps in a basement dungeon) or maybe selling her off someplace to the highest bidder where she'll never be heard from again. Maybe instead a bit of Stockholm syndrome, where Marie ends up becoming very attached to David, even though he sounds like a complete scoundrel. It of course makes me wonder what actually happened to David's first wife...
If you wanted to instead have Marie rescued at some point, I'm sure her building, or even the parking garage had some cameras that the police could look at, if for nothing else but to complete the necessary missing persons forms. Do David's coworkers suspect something, and do they go looking for Marie? Do they find her, agreeing to share in the "bounty" rather than rocking the firm with scandal?
Thank you for sharing, the characters you've built here make a part two almost write itself, Jackie.
Topic: The Exit Interview by Kitsune71 (Read 4658 times)
