Yes, I did mean to leave a comment last time, but ended up getting distracted by various things in the game and flitting back and forth! I do find these sorts of tales interesting, but it clearly takes so much effort to flesh out enough varying paths to make it feel like a choose-your-own-adventure and not just a couple of linear stories with little in the way of real choice. Well done for making the effort, and interested to see where it ends up.