I was thrilled to see more parts of this go up, but I was a bit surprised at first, reading part 3, since things seemed to have gone backwards. Then again, things ended with such an "extreme", but also not really easy to follow up on event, that something had to change if the story was to continue.
It was really good to see Denise once more being such a focal spot for the entertainment of the guests. It was sad to read that her hopefully to be boyfriend had moved on though, but to be fair, he really didn't feature in part 2, so I was left wondering what was going on there, especially in light of her being so happy to reward good work during part 2, since this didn't really fit in well with some traditional relationships.
Seeing Denise put to work as a serving wench has a very satisfying and fitting feeling, it works so well with the whole theme of the venue. Combine this with the fact that now two of the women in charge of events are properly up to speed on her submissive nature and desire to be bound and punished, and life is clearly looking up for her. I do wonder if her mother is ever going to make a reappearance, even if only to offer further incriminating evidence at one of her "trials", to make sure that the guilty one gets the punishment she so desperately needs and desires
There is just something quite delightful about the idea of her mother being released from her own bondage just to make sure that her daughter gets tied up and punished
The trial works well, and the idea that she is being judged for bewitching and tempting the men who visit really made me laugh, especially since she is being used as eye candy, so this is basically her official job role
The punishment seemed a little odd in the moment, but thinking about it, drowning the witch is very much on topic, and I really did enjoy how everyone "accidentally" left her sealed up and tucked away for the night. Almost as if this was organised deliberately
Part 4, it feels like the story is hitting its stride once more, since we are back to being a bit more "forceful", after the rather extreme events of part 2 and the much milder part 3. I do have to say that I fully applauded Denise's giving nature, having won the contest to make sure that she has a good role for the visitors, it is only right to make sure that all those other tour guides who have done so much to make use of her for the visitors delight, put her on show and have a quick grope finally get to really enjoy her charms
The mental image of her regularly being forced to put on a very revealing and bound wet t-shirt look, top and bottom, really does warm my heart and brings a smile to my face. I always loved the setting, and thought that it had quite a lot of scope for return visits, so I do hope that Gromet has some more ideas and plans for this naughty lady, and we can read about more of her adventures and punishments soon!
Topic: Denise In A Tight Spot by Gromet (Read 6927 times)
