If I Could Change Your Mind by Mila V

[teanndaorsa]

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https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/if_i_could_change_your_mind.html
Sbf; F/f; bond; blackmail; outdoors; rope; buttplug; gasmask; electro; gag; cane; spank; trick; reluct; XX

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Thanks 

[Eido]

Mila V, what an exciting and fun story! I enjoyed the twists and turns and all that was packed into the remarkably brief story. I also liked the sort of 'stop-edit' scene shifts. Those can be jarring if not done well, and I thought yours were done very well.

Keep up the good work,
Eido

[dengamle68]

Wow - I really hope you will continue with the story

[milavolkova]

Thanks! As for sequel - no, it was planned as single complete story. I was talked into writing a sequel to my previous story, and it didn't turn out great, of course. So, no.
But there are more stories coming.

[teanndaorsa]

Thanks! As for sequel - no, it was planned as single complete story. I was talked into writing a sequel to my previous story, and it didn't turn out great, of course. So, no.
But there are more stories coming.

I think that's a solid decision - not all stories can be easily continued, and often you lose the magic of the original trying to contort the sequel to follow on. Usually when I read a story that's really good, what I'm thinking is "I'd like more of that feeling", not "I'd like more of that story." But it's hard to disentangle the two.

[Mr Argent]

I've followed this site for many years and finally had to register so I could post my feedback on this story.

This is a superb piece of fiction. It's a great fetish story, but it's also a great story, period. Lovely plot, very solid dialogue, complex motivations, believable and appealing characters, and ultimately a rewardingly graceful and gracious approach to all the principals. I've seldom enjoyed a story so much and been so thoroughly impressed.

You have real talent and I hope we can look forward to more:

[milavolkova]

I've followed this site for many years and finally had to register so I could post my feedback on this story.

Thank you, Sir. That's a high praise. Actually, I did the same last year

[dengamle68]

Thanks! As for sequel - no, it was planned as single complete story. I was talked into writing a sequel to my previous story, and it didn't turn out great, of course. So, no.
But there are more stories coming.

Can't wait to read